This is my first story on here. Please review and like if… well… you do.
I would like to thank my friend HerschelX. You know who you are, thank you for inspiring me to write on here. And now, without further interruption, I give you Breathe.
Come Kayley .Come closer. Let me see you. Let me feel you… "Yes master" I mumbled and slowly started walking toward him. He grabbed me and pulled me with him into his huge black cloak. I didn't know where he was taking me, but the next thing I knew, we were standing at the top of the Eiffel tower. He brought me to the ledge. We looked down at the busy street below. Without warning, he pushed me over the side into the darkness. Falling. Free falling with absolutely no chance of surviving.
I screamed and shot up. Breathing heavily, I realized it was just a dream. A horrible nightmare. I grabbed my fast beating heart and sighed. This was the third week in a row I have had this dream. My mother doesn't know what to do for me. I have already seen a therapist, who claims that there is nothing wrong with me. She just said to wait it out. But who knows how long that will take?
I slowly slid to my wooden floor cautious of the monster lurking underneath my bed. Then I padded off to the bathroom to get a cup of water.
There, looked at myself in the mirror. What I saw frightened me even more than my dream. My hair was a mess and my eyes were bloodshot. It looked like I had been crying in my sleep.
Once I got my water and washed my face I crawled back into my bed. Thinking again, I got out and walked to my dresser where my stuffed bear was. I know its kind of silly for a 16-year-old girl to sleep with a teddy bear, but if you had the same nightmare for three weeks you would want some comfort too. My hypothesis was a confirmed yes in saying that I slept better with 2 and a half pounds of cotton stitching tucked under my arm. Now why didn't I try this three weeks ago?
Not a bad first chapter but pretty good if you ask me. I will continue to write more chapters soon. Please review! i want your thoughts. Once again, thank you HerschelX.