Woo-Hoo! I GOT 100 REVIEWS! GOD I LOVE YOU GUYS! This Fanfic is a major accomplishment for me! Thanks to all of you who reviewed!
Boai - Yes I know it was short but I've had finals to study for and it's been hard trying to update my story and still earn my grade. Thanks for the review!
Cherry6124 - I'm trying to put you more Selvine in the story since you and my friend both love them together. Don't worry I'm not done torturing Laguna yet! And I agree with the whole monkey thing, they are kinda creepy when they stare at ya. Thanks for the review!
Mary - Again sorry for it being short. But believe me my stories not ending yet, they haven't even made it to their destination yet. Thanks for the review!
Amber - Yes Selphie will think the Monkey's cute, and believe me Selphie always has here frying pan of doom hidden somewhere. And the bear will return in this chapter. Thanks for the review!
And to who ever else may have reviewed! THANK YOU!
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Squall: Now that Rinoa has finally stopped her blabbing.
(Receives evil glare from Rinoa.)
Seifer: Uh...on with the fic!
Vacation...Hell
"Chapter Eight: Hanging and Saving (Pt.2)"
By: Renegade Noa
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"Are you sure it was a good idea to leave Zell and Laguna alone?" Irvine questioned Squall as they walked through the forest.
"Positive...it's not like they're going anywhere." Squall stated as they continued to follow the trail of trampled leaves, left by the small monkey.
"Like it matters what happens to those two goofballs. Al I care about right now is getting Quisty back safely." Seifer added in as he pushed past Irvine and walked towards Squall.
Irvine watched as the two walked off. "Well I'm jus' sayin' Laguna's a president, and if something eats Zell, we'd have to explain it to Cid!" Irvine yelled. Squall and Seifer kept walking, Irvine sighed, "I don't know why I even try..." Slumping his shoulders he followed Squall and Seifer, mumbling incoherent words.
Seifer turned to look at Irvine. "Besides the worse thing that can happen is that a bear would smell the blood and come for them, but that's still a 50/50 chance." Seifer said as he grabbed Irvine by the shoulders. "So don't sweat it man." He said as he flashed Irvine a cheesy grin. Irvine glared at Seifer.
"Dude get the fuck off me! Hyne, I swear you're fuckin' gay!" Irvine hollered as he pushed Seifer's arm off him. Seifer growled at him, as he jumped on Irvine, throwing several punches.
Seifer and Irvine rolled on the forest ground, beating each other senseless. Rolling into a thorn bush, they both screamed as they jumped out of the twisted thorn bush.
Squall looked at the two, and immediately began to laugh. "Damn, you guys look like shit!" Squall stated, as his eyes roamed over the filthy duo.
Seifer and Irvine were covered in mud, grass, twigs, and a few thorns here and there. Seifer glared at Squall and casted Irvine a smug look, as he walked away from the group pulling thorns out of his butt as he walked.
" That man won't give up on her, he's good for her.... unlike you Mr. Kinneas, who flirts with anything thing that's female and walks." A voice said behind Irvine.
Squall's eyes widened as Irvine turned pale. "Don't you ever die ol' man!" Irvine questioned as Laguna brushed by him, and hugged his one and only son. Irvine's eyes widened as he pointed out to Squall, the little stick that was replacing Laguna's ARM!
Oh how Squall despised Laguna. Even after losing his arm he's still alive! Can't he just stay dead, or at least pretend to be for his own sanity?
"So...what'd ya do with Zell?" Irvine questioned rescuing Squall from any further embarrassment. Squall silently praised Irvine as Laguna let go of him.
As if own queue, Laguna's stick arm fell off. Squall and Irvine's faces turned green as Laguna bent down and put it back in place.
"Ya know that's the strange part, when I woke up he was gone..." Laguna stated as he scratched the side of his head in confusion.
"HEY ARE YOU GUYS COMING OR WHAT?!" Seifer yelled from up ahead.
"HOLD YOUR FUCKIN' CHOCOBOS! Grumpy ass reminds of a damn ol' man..." Irvine mumbled as he shook his head trying to forget the whole stick incident.
"I HEARD THAT!" Seifer screamed back in return.
Squall shook his head, as he walked towards Seifer. "I'm surrounded by a fuckin' morons..." Squall stated as he glared at Seifer's back as they continued to follow the lil' monkey's path.
***
20 minuets Later
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"What do you think this place is?" Squall asked aloud, as he placed his hand on the cold cement wall.
"Gaea City. Under the great Galbadian Rule. Never heard of it..." Seifer answered as he read the writing on the wall.
"Who cares, the monkey's trail stops at that gate. So we're goin in." Irvine stated as he knocked on the gate.
The gate opened to show three armored men, possibly soldiers.
"What business do ye have here?" One of the three questioned.
"What?" The three SeeD's stated in unison.
"Let me handle this." Laguna stated. "We're looking for three girls and a monkey have you seen them?" Laguna asked, as he flashed a smile back to the three confused males behind him.
"ARREST THEM!" The tallest man shouted, as more guards surrounded them.
"What? What'd I say?" Laguna questioned as he was handcuffed and drug away by three men.
"Why to fuckin' go Laguna!" Seifer shouted as they we're pulled into the city, the gates closing behind them.
"Why-" Squall's question was cut short as his world went black.
***
(Squall's POV)
'Screaming...all I hear is screaming.
Wait I hear someone calling out my name...
She's sad...RINOA!'
With that Squall slowly opened his eyes.
He stared around in shock as he realized what was happing. They we're all going to be hanged.
(End Squall's POV)
***
"How nice of you to join us Leonhart...your dumb ass father over there got us arrested." Seifer stated as he glared evilly at Laguna.
"Now Seifer, how was Laguna supposed to know, that we were in trouble here, and that mentioning us made you comrades." Quistis replied, trying to make Laguna feel better, as she flashed his a sweet smile.
All she got from Seifer was a 'hmph', but that did not faze her.
"Quistis? Selphie? Rinoa?! You're all ALIVE!" Squall stated happily, well about as happy as Squall Leonhart gets.
"Not for much longer we won't, and neither will you guys, their hanging us at noon." Rinoa stated sadly.
"What? What for?" Squall questioned, wondering what the could have possibly done to deserve this sentence.
"Rinoa started a bar fight..." Selphie stated. "SELPHIE!" Rinoa screamed.
"That's it...they're gonna hang you because you started a bar fight? That's fuckin' stupid!" Seifer exclaimed.
"Yah well, lesson learned, never start fights and win in a city with only a male population." Rinoa stated, as she sighed. Boy did this suck.
"Only a male population? WHAT KINDA CITY IS THAT! WHO WOULD WANNA LIVE HERE?!" Irvine exclaimed, earning some rude looks from the fellow population.
"Will you keep it down! Are you trying to get us hung early! Sheesh!" Seifer stated.
"DO NOT FEAR! HELP IS HERE!" A voice screamed from a far.
"What the hell was that?" Laguna asked to know one.
"Probably the local loony..." Seifer answered.
And that's when Zell came running towards them with a shit load of guards chasing him.
"Yep...definitely the local loony..." Seifer stated dryly.
Zell stopped and did a few kung-fu lookin' moves, and looked up at the group who was perched on the hanging stage.
"What are you guys starin' at? I came to rescue you guys!" Zell stated as he smiled smugly.
The other seven stood there in disbelief.
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3 minuets later
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" *CRIES* WE'RE GONNA DIE!" Zell screamed, as he too was hand cuffed to the hanging stage.
" 'What are you guys starin' at? I came to rescue you guys!' " Seifer mimicked and laughed, Squall and Irvine joining him.
"This is not a laughing situation here! I see my life passing before my eyes!" Zell exclaimed, as he started to laugh hysterically.
Squall, Seifer, and Irvine stopped laughing and started at him weirdly.
"Squall h-" Rinoa was cut off as the court house bell began to dong.
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They all silently pray....to give them one hour together
12....
Hyne had not answered...
They're going to die....
*** TO BE CONTINUED***
A/N- Wow another cliffy! I am soooooo sorry it took so long for me to update! All the band practices have been hectic lately. SORRY!
Until next time! No worries, Renegade Noa
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This has been a production of Renegade Noa Productions รค???
[email protected]
Boai - Yes I know it was short but I've had finals to study for and it's been hard trying to update my story and still earn my grade. Thanks for the review!
Cherry6124 - I'm trying to put you more Selvine in the story since you and my friend both love them together. Don't worry I'm not done torturing Laguna yet! And I agree with the whole monkey thing, they are kinda creepy when they stare at ya. Thanks for the review!
Mary - Again sorry for it being short. But believe me my stories not ending yet, they haven't even made it to their destination yet. Thanks for the review!
Amber - Yes Selphie will think the Monkey's cute, and believe me Selphie always has here frying pan of doom hidden somewhere. And the bear will return in this chapter. Thanks for the review!
And to who ever else may have reviewed! THANK YOU!
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Squall: Now that Rinoa has finally stopped her blabbing.
(Receives evil glare from Rinoa.)
Seifer: Uh...on with the fic!
Vacation...Hell
"Chapter Eight: Hanging and Saving (Pt.2)"
By: Renegade Noa
***
"Are you sure it was a good idea to leave Zell and Laguna alone?" Irvine questioned Squall as they walked through the forest.
"Positive...it's not like they're going anywhere." Squall stated as they continued to follow the trail of trampled leaves, left by the small monkey.
"Like it matters what happens to those two goofballs. Al I care about right now is getting Quisty back safely." Seifer added in as he pushed past Irvine and walked towards Squall.
Irvine watched as the two walked off. "Well I'm jus' sayin' Laguna's a president, and if something eats Zell, we'd have to explain it to Cid!" Irvine yelled. Squall and Seifer kept walking, Irvine sighed, "I don't know why I even try..." Slumping his shoulders he followed Squall and Seifer, mumbling incoherent words.
Seifer turned to look at Irvine. "Besides the worse thing that can happen is that a bear would smell the blood and come for them, but that's still a 50/50 chance." Seifer said as he grabbed Irvine by the shoulders. "So don't sweat it man." He said as he flashed Irvine a cheesy grin. Irvine glared at Seifer.
"Dude get the fuck off me! Hyne, I swear you're fuckin' gay!" Irvine hollered as he pushed Seifer's arm off him. Seifer growled at him, as he jumped on Irvine, throwing several punches.
Seifer and Irvine rolled on the forest ground, beating each other senseless. Rolling into a thorn bush, they both screamed as they jumped out of the twisted thorn bush.
Squall looked at the two, and immediately began to laugh. "Damn, you guys look like shit!" Squall stated, as his eyes roamed over the filthy duo.
Seifer and Irvine were covered in mud, grass, twigs, and a few thorns here and there. Seifer glared at Squall and casted Irvine a smug look, as he walked away from the group pulling thorns out of his butt as he walked.
" That man won't give up on her, he's good for her.... unlike you Mr. Kinneas, who flirts with anything thing that's female and walks." A voice said behind Irvine.
Squall's eyes widened as Irvine turned pale. "Don't you ever die ol' man!" Irvine questioned as Laguna brushed by him, and hugged his one and only son. Irvine's eyes widened as he pointed out to Squall, the little stick that was replacing Laguna's ARM!
Oh how Squall despised Laguna. Even after losing his arm he's still alive! Can't he just stay dead, or at least pretend to be for his own sanity?
"So...what'd ya do with Zell?" Irvine questioned rescuing Squall from any further embarrassment. Squall silently praised Irvine as Laguna let go of him.
As if own queue, Laguna's stick arm fell off. Squall and Irvine's faces turned green as Laguna bent down and put it back in place.
"Ya know that's the strange part, when I woke up he was gone..." Laguna stated as he scratched the side of his head in confusion.
"HEY ARE YOU GUYS COMING OR WHAT?!" Seifer yelled from up ahead.
"HOLD YOUR FUCKIN' CHOCOBOS! Grumpy ass reminds of a damn ol' man..." Irvine mumbled as he shook his head trying to forget the whole stick incident.
"I HEARD THAT!" Seifer screamed back in return.
Squall shook his head, as he walked towards Seifer. "I'm surrounded by a fuckin' morons..." Squall stated as he glared at Seifer's back as they continued to follow the lil' monkey's path.
***
20 minuets Later
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"What do you think this place is?" Squall asked aloud, as he placed his hand on the cold cement wall.
"Gaea City. Under the great Galbadian Rule. Never heard of it..." Seifer answered as he read the writing on the wall.
"Who cares, the monkey's trail stops at that gate. So we're goin in." Irvine stated as he knocked on the gate.
The gate opened to show three armored men, possibly soldiers.
"What business do ye have here?" One of the three questioned.
"What?" The three SeeD's stated in unison.
"Let me handle this." Laguna stated. "We're looking for three girls and a monkey have you seen them?" Laguna asked, as he flashed a smile back to the three confused males behind him.
"ARREST THEM!" The tallest man shouted, as more guards surrounded them.
"What? What'd I say?" Laguna questioned as he was handcuffed and drug away by three men.
"Why to fuckin' go Laguna!" Seifer shouted as they we're pulled into the city, the gates closing behind them.
"Why-" Squall's question was cut short as his world went black.
***
(Squall's POV)
'Screaming...all I hear is screaming.
Wait I hear someone calling out my name...
She's sad...RINOA!'
With that Squall slowly opened his eyes.
He stared around in shock as he realized what was happing. They we're all going to be hanged.
(End Squall's POV)
***
"How nice of you to join us Leonhart...your dumb ass father over there got us arrested." Seifer stated as he glared evilly at Laguna.
"Now Seifer, how was Laguna supposed to know, that we were in trouble here, and that mentioning us made you comrades." Quistis replied, trying to make Laguna feel better, as she flashed his a sweet smile.
All she got from Seifer was a 'hmph', but that did not faze her.
"Quistis? Selphie? Rinoa?! You're all ALIVE!" Squall stated happily, well about as happy as Squall Leonhart gets.
"Not for much longer we won't, and neither will you guys, their hanging us at noon." Rinoa stated sadly.
"What? What for?" Squall questioned, wondering what the could have possibly done to deserve this sentence.
"Rinoa started a bar fight..." Selphie stated. "SELPHIE!" Rinoa screamed.
"That's it...they're gonna hang you because you started a bar fight? That's fuckin' stupid!" Seifer exclaimed.
"Yah well, lesson learned, never start fights and win in a city with only a male population." Rinoa stated, as she sighed. Boy did this suck.
"Only a male population? WHAT KINDA CITY IS THAT! WHO WOULD WANNA LIVE HERE?!" Irvine exclaimed, earning some rude looks from the fellow population.
"Will you keep it down! Are you trying to get us hung early! Sheesh!" Seifer stated.
"DO NOT FEAR! HELP IS HERE!" A voice screamed from a far.
"What the hell was that?" Laguna asked to know one.
"Probably the local loony..." Seifer answered.
And that's when Zell came running towards them with a shit load of guards chasing him.
"Yep...definitely the local loony..." Seifer stated dryly.
Zell stopped and did a few kung-fu lookin' moves, and looked up at the group who was perched on the hanging stage.
"What are you guys starin' at? I came to rescue you guys!" Zell stated as he smiled smugly.
The other seven stood there in disbelief.
***
3 minuets later
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" *CRIES* WE'RE GONNA DIE!" Zell screamed, as he too was hand cuffed to the hanging stage.
" 'What are you guys starin' at? I came to rescue you guys!' " Seifer mimicked and laughed, Squall and Irvine joining him.
"This is not a laughing situation here! I see my life passing before my eyes!" Zell exclaimed, as he started to laugh hysterically.
Squall, Seifer, and Irvine stopped laughing and started at him weirdly.
"Squall h-" Rinoa was cut off as the court house bell began to dong.
1....
2....
3....
4....
5....
6....
7....
8....
9....
10....
11....
They all silently pray....to give them one hour together
12....
Hyne had not answered...
They're going to die....
*** TO BE CONTINUED***
A/N- Wow another cliffy! I am soooooo sorry it took so long for me to update! All the band practices have been hectic lately. SORRY!
Until next time! No worries, Renegade Noa
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This has been a production of Renegade Noa Productions รค???
[email protected]