Is Your Character a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?' Meme.
Character Undergoing Analysis :: Delilah Van Hellsing
[[ Please make a footnote if the applicable trait is common in the universe of the character, for that will nullify its status as a Sue trait. ]]
Point Counting ::
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
[ ] They are physically strong. [ Normal.]
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour.
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour.
[ ] This eye color happens to be red.[Normal.]
[ ] Their eyes change colour.
[ ] They have wings.
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. [ Normal.]
[ ] They are immortal. [ Normal.]
[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. probably.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[/] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
[/] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
[ ] They never knew their parents.
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.
[ ] They are emo/cutesy.
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[/] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. [ex.'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family!']
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[/] They are a psycho. [more like desensitized...having a vampire as your best friend since you were 10's pretty screwed up. And having the head of the Hellsing orginization as your father means she's definitely not innocent.]
[ ] They have multiple personalities.
[ ] They are very intelligent.
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. [[ Not talk, but feel kinda sorta. THANKS ENGLAND/CHINA. ]]
[ ] Some part of their body glows.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age. 15 isn't young.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
[/] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood. [ Normal.]
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
[/] They are very lively/happy.
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [insert profession/power here].
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have a some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[ ] They have insomnia.
Overall Points :: 6
Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::
[ ] They smoke.
[/] They are an alcoholic.
[ ] They are overweight.
[ ] They are addicted to drugs.
[/] They have a short temper.
[/] They enjoy bullying others.
[/] They do not care much about others.
[ ] They are relatively emotionless.
Final Score :: 2 it's really way more if Hellsing wasn't so abnormal.
RESULT :: Anti-Sue.
05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now.