(forbidin love was original name)the rise of skyclan
lyze of keil (warriors fan!:D)
chapter 1 kits
Jayfeather didn't thought back to last fell in love with had mated with her by accident.
skiping realized they could never go back to the rolled of her and said the news of them making thier own clan. FLASHBACK OVER
the clan was named skyclan after the 5th clan. he soon deliverd his own kits. he named the one with brownish creamyish fur owlkit. the one with brown and gray fur spearow kit and the one with grayish blue fur, bluejaykit, all birds. soon he had in his clan out in the rocky plains,
med cat jaystar/jayfeather
owltalon(not his son sons and 1 girl still paws)
the clan was growing rather strong and the kits were five moons old and had just gotten thier names:stormpaw,rainpaw and fell in love with sun beam and mated with her in a thick bush
they said they had missions to go on, but they would play and usualy hunted alot because everyone almost was always busy like with the 6 was giving birth when a warrior, jaystars favorite and most trust worthly appeard and said
owltalon and jaystar talking
"aahh...sorry to dissturb you"he covers face with paw."i would like to make all your half kits warriors.
"sunhigh,no right after this"
"ok thank you."
"would all cats just get over hear 'cause i dont remember the meeting thingy!"
"two announcments.1 i had kits with sunbeam and they are: owlkit,songkit,ravenkit and crowkit." cheers from random cats in the clans
"second, owlpaw,pigionpaw and bluejaypaw,here are your new names!owlpaw from now on your name is owlfeather if anyone calls you owlpaw, rip thier heart out. pigionpaw, you will be known as pigionwing if they saw paw rip of thier legs,bluejaypaw you will be...bluejay beacause you have a long name so...bluejay!rip of thier head if said paw.
(what wonderful advice if someone says paw!)
med cat jayfeather/jaystar
cloudpelt(had kits)(blizzardkit and lightningkit)
everything was normal,jaystar sunbeams kits (and jaystars)did not know that jaystar was thier father. so, one day this happened.
sunbeam talking to her kits of who thier mentors would be. sunbeam:owlpaws mentor will be owltalon,ravenpaws will be sunstrike and songpaws will be rainbowheart and crowpaws will be eaglebeak.
jaystar approches not acting like thier father to keep it a secret
jaystar:uh um.. sunbeam i uh,(he started to not want to tell her that the paws and thier mentors would do the hunting)i uh have to tell you that uh...
sunbeam leads jaystar to a rock and they talk.
ravenpaw and owlpaw:i think jaystar loves our mom!
songpaw:oh, that would uh but our dad died and i dont know about that!
crowpaw:lets bring mom and us to have a meeting with jaystar!
so the kids do that and thier about to learn something!
jaystar:what!me love your mom well uh
jaystar:should we tell them hun?
the kids(or the pack):hun!tell us what!
jaystar stands up and lays next to sunbeam
jaystar: i am your... sunbeam and i are...together.
the kids mouthes are hanging open.
chapter one end
(tell me how you liked it and i will continue, if you hated it say it was meaningless)