I've got the first and second chapter of the revised story up already and I'm working on the third chapter at the moment. I've renamed the story it's now called Assassin's Game. The first chapter hasn't changed much but I've edited grammar and fixed a few things, the second chapter I've added to and changed a few things. I'll hopefully have the third chapter finished and up tonight. Hope you all like it, and please review and let me know if I've changed it in a good way or bad or whatever. :)