Alternative: Academy Duelist
Naruto x Asuka
Numerous changes from the original. In this version he is actually the son of Naruto, he uses his father's deck along with light based cards and powers as well. He hasn't encounter the god cards yet, his mother is Mai in this version instead of Anzu. Judai will be brought in earlier, some of the duels will be cut and others added.
Most of the duels will be the same and there will be slightly changed Dialogue, characters, and stuff like that. All the OC stuff you guys sent in will remain.
The young blond haired male looked down at the solitary island in awe. Down there was a massive school with three dorms, colored red, blue, and yellow standing out from the series of buildings that made up the chain of buildings. 'Duel Academia High school.' Was the name of this school. A school dedicated to teaching children how to play a children's card game. The young man absorbed in the information that was passed out in the pamphlet. Obelisk blue for the superior grade students, or the rice kids. Ra Yellow for those who did well on the exams or the average students and finally Osiris red for the junkies, fat kids, or those who were just mediocre. The class system was obviously attuned to Kaiba's bias.
One of the things the young man was all too well of thanks to his father's constant complaints about Seto Kaiba, the benefactor of the school. The young man scowled at the incessant chatter of the many students on the plane. It was far too noisy and peaceful for him to relax. 'For someone with all the money in the world he could have sprung for more jets.' the source of Naruto's annoyance was the fidgeting teal haired boy next to him.
'Hey kid what's with all the fidgeting?''
''W-Who me?'' The kid pointed to himself. He looked no older then 12 or 13.
''Yes you.'' he responded with a roll of his eyes.
''Sho...Marufuji Sho...'' the fidgeting boy introduced himself.
''I see...I'll think I call you Syrus.'' If there was one thing Naruto Jr. inherited from his father then it was his father's naming quirk.''I'm Uzumaki Naruto Jr. named after the E.N. Duelist himself.''
Naruto really hoped he would make his father proud. Since Dueling monsters were one of the few things that meant much of anything in this world it was the field Naruto went with. He was hoping he would face tough challenges like that teacher he fought against by the name of Chornos.
The Students seemed to be differentiated between three colors pertaining to their god cards. The oddest thing that he noticed was that the only dorm with females were the Obelisk dorm. Odd seeing as there were more and more female duelist nowadays. If it turned out that Blue was the only one out-fitted with a working or decent plumbing system he was going to be pissed.
Upon the jumbo screen a man with a pronounced beard and bald head pronounced himself as Samejima, the Headmaster. That beard made him look more like a Sheppard then anything. Naruto began to wonder when exactly he focused on giving people's nicknames.
Naruto scanned the crowd and see if anyone stood out. One of the things he had picked up was assessing people by their auras, a nifty trick more or less used by the Acrobatist Ty Lee. There was a boy with neat black hair wearing a yellow blazer. If what he read in that newspaper weeks ago this boy was Misawa Daichi, grandson of the famous author Sebsatian Daichi. S
Another was a blond whose hair was sporadically arranged, with a large portion trailing the upper part of the nape of her neck. She wore fingerless gloves and like many of the other females a white top with blue trimming, a blue miniskirt, and royal blue boots.
While the other two were more composed and at east with confidence the other person held an air of arrogance around him. He was also in blue like the blond but had black hair layered in two sections, his black eyes positioned directly beneath the bangs of the layer closest to his face. He wore the standards blue outfit of the younger members of the academy.
Naruto pretty much missed most of the speech. He already knew most of what would have been drilled as it was drilled into his head by his mother. Naruto noticed that most of the reds and little more then half the yellows used their best cards to pass the exam. Big mistake, especially considering the combination's used and how their decks were built. So Naruto went with a deck composed of mainly around spell casting creatures and spells. At least this way no one would be able to pick up on his strategy quite yet.
''Hey Uzumaki-san,'' Shou waved at him. He was by a pedestal of some kind.
''Oh hey Syrus,'' Naruto sat on the opposite side. ''I see your in red too huh.''
As they were talking Misawa walked up to them. It seems that the kid was in yellow. The kid had one of the highest scores and he was in yellow. Looks like he lacked the money to buy his way into blue.
''Uzumaki Naruto, the son of the Elemental Nations duelist of the same name am I correct?''
''The one and only.''
''Curious...I couldn't help but overhear your conversation on the plane. Is it outlandish to believe you purposely fought with a strategy to down play your skills? After all he was quite known for his deception and sound minded strategy of playing on his opponents weaknesses to his strengths.''
''I'll tell you what Misawa. I'll let you be the judge of that next time I duel. Until then I have to go put my things away. See you around the dorms!''
Naruto decided to go see about his dorm, Syrus followed suit. After much pestering my the latter he relented and allowed the blue haired boy to call him Aniki.
Ignoring the whole explanation of the dorm system, yet again as if he was a child of six with ADD, the blond decided to go check out the island. He eventually came upon a duel field which field the majority of the bottom level of the building. The boy couldn't help but wonder why the card game became increasingly complicated each year? It was a children's card game for heaven's sake.
''Man, I am jealous…I'd sure like to duel in a place like this."
''You're a student aren't you? I don't see what's stopping you. You're a student here!''
"Which doesn't give you reason to do so," said a voice.
Shou and Naruto looked up, spotting two boys, both wearing blue jackets, walking towards them. One had dark, teal-colored hair a small rectangular glasses while the other boy had brown, spiky hair.
"You Osiris Red losers have no place here. This is an Obelisk building!'' The teal haired boy said pointing to the crest in the entrance way.
''And rich people tend to wander why a lot of people hate them. Shit like this boasting I'm better because I have more money means something. I guess that shit don't amount to much when a so called loser can whoop the ass of one of you elitist like it wasn't much?''
''Wait a minute! You're the guy who beat Professor Chronos!''
''Yeah no shit...''
The boy from before Naruto spotted out entered the building looking miffed.
''Manjouem-san!'' Exclaimed the brown-haired student. ''It's the app...''
''I heard you idiot. I'm not deaf.''
''Well you seemed to be full of yourself!'' Naruto said, with a smirk. He was wondering when eh would run into mister hot-shit himself. Personally he was hoping run into the blond with the huge...assets.
''Hey don't talk to Manjoume-san like you loser!'' Exclaimed the teal haired guy. ''He may be a first year, but he's the best of the elites. He's been the topped rank academy student in dueling academy all the way back since elementary.''
''Hey I only respect people who show their skills and prove what they're capable of instead of boasting. For all we know this kid here has a better chance at being number one then this cocky snob!'' Naruto said pointing to Sho who looked liked he rather be anywhere but here.
''Aniki...er...um.'' The flustered teal-hairedboy stammered.
Said boy's cronies looked like they were about to attack Naruto when Manjoume snapped. ''Both of you quiet down! Now!"'
Manjoume looked at them with a serious expression. ''Don't you fools know anything. He's supposed to be the son of a great duelist whose one of his skill traits were deception and mockery. Anyone who can face a Professor like Chronos with his cool intact is someone to watch out for.''
''Due by that I meant fools like yourself. Professor Chronos was overconfident and toyed with him, which is why he lost. I'll be sure to crush this dog quick and efficiently and show him his place.''
''Oh I've been waiting for a challenge. I'm about to kick your ass...''
"Hey, what are all of you doing?" asked a voice.
Naruto, Shou, Manjoume, and the other two boys looked at who spoke as they walked toward them. It was the blonde girl Naruto noticed from before. Her well-endowed chest resting upon her crossed arms.
"Tenjoin-kun!" said Manjoume. "You see, these newcomers are far too ignorant of the ways of the world."He turned his head and kept his grin.
"I was thinking I'd teach them a bit about how intense the Academy can be," said Manjoume.
The girl kept her gaze on Manjoume.
"It's about time for the welcoming party at the dorms to start," the girl informed them.
Manjoume grunted and ordered the two Obelisk boys to follow after him. After leaving, the girl looked at Naruto and Shou.
"You guys shouldn't take up dares from Manjoume-kun and his group," she warned them. "After all, they're a lousy bunch."
''I never one to usually run away from a challenge, but I'll take your advice to heart. I won't antagonize him but if he comes after me he better expect a challenge.'' Naruto turned to leave but stopped. ''I noticed you from among the crowds. You're not like the others. I'm Uzumaki Naruto and you?'' he asked, flashing a charming smile.''
''Tenjoin...Tenjoin Asuka.'' The girl introduced herself. ''The welcoming party at Osiris Red will be starting, you should hurry and make it back.''
Naruto smiled in response and waved good bye as he left,''See you later then Tenjoin-san.'' He took off at a rather quick pace as Shou called after him.
"W-Wait up, Aniki!"
Asuka watched the two boys run, smiling at Naruto.
''Uzumaki Naruto...'' Asuka said to herself.
Within all the dorms they were celebrating.
The Obelisk Blue dorms had an elegant party in both the boys' and girls' dormitories. Whilst in the Ra Yellow, it was somewhat the same only around a table of exquisite food. As for in the Osiris Red…well…
The Osiris dorm had a few strange looks at their food, which consisted of a bow of white rice, a plate full of what seemed to be some type of small fish, and two other bowls of food, though they didn't get much of the strange stares seeing as everyone had their gaze on the rice and fish.
"What is this?" About almost everyone in the room said.
One person compared the food to the other dorms."The other dorms had an incredible feast!" he said. "And to make things worse, our dorm leader isn't even human!"
Everyone focused their gaze on a fat cat with light brown, somewhat orange-tinged, and dark stripes curled up on a table, asleep. He woke up and stretched out, letting out a loud yowl. Afterwards, it curled back onto the table, everyone's gaze still focused on it.
"He's a cat…?" Asked another boy stupidly.
The cat looked at everyone as the sound of footsteps caught their attention. The sound of footsteps seemed to be getting closer until a tall, young man, wearing a white dress shirt if with a dusky-red necktie, black pants, and a belt, popped out from behind the drapes hanging over the doorway. He seemed to be somewhere between his mid-twenties or so and had a kind-looking expression and long black hair pulled into a ponytail with his bangs framing his face. His eyes were hid behind their lids and the square-lensed glasses the man wore.
Everyone within the room stared at the man with question. The man waved at them welcomingly.
"Hello, children," he said, having a German accent. "I'm your dormitory leader, Daitokuji-nya! And in class, I'll be in charge of alchemy. Pleased to meet you all-nya."
"Alchemy!" Someone exclaimed.
The outburst caused everyone, and I mean everyone, to focus their attention on them, which had happened to be on Naruto.
''What? Am I the only one thing it's strange were learning Alchemy at a school that focuses on teaching children and teens how to play children's card game?'' They continued to stare at the blond.
''Whatever...think I'll go steal some food from the other dorms later on.'' He murmured only loud enough for Syrus to hear.
''But Aniki that's against isn't it?''
''Tch, Screw the rules I'm hungry!''
Naruto decided to stay until the crap snack(he refused to acknowledge it as a feast.) was done until he would sneak away and still some food from the blues.
Happily munching on a piece of Duck, he couldn't believe those bastards got duck, he traveled down the path back to the dorm. As he entered the dorm his PDA rang.
Taking out his PDA he played the message.
"I'll be waiting on the Duel field at midnight. We'll duel with the Ante Rule with both of our best cads at stake. Come on, if you've got the guts…"
With that said, the video message was over.
''I get the kick the rich's boy ass and take his best card after eaing some duck. Dad was right...the ramen gods reward those who fatefully pray to them 12 times a day..''
Hayato, having overheard the whole message, looked over his shoulder at Naruto.
"That pep of his ends here…" he said, rolling onto his side to get more comfortable.
Naruto grabbed his duel disk and shouted out to Shou.
"Wait, Aniki!" said Shou. "Didn't Asuka-san say we shouldn't deal with them?"
Naruto looked at Shou as he grabbed onto the doorknob.
''You came here for a reason didn't you? Buck up and toughen up. Are you going to believe that shit those rich boys spout that you're nothing because they have money or are you going to do something about it? That's the way I see.'' Nothing else was said as they traveled to the destination.
"Heh, you really came, Number 110." Naruto spotted Manjoume with his group on the center of the room on the platform. Manjoume had his arms crossed, his duel disk on his left arm.''
''Time to see if all this elitist talk was just talk.''
A few moments later, Manjoume and Naruto faced each other on the opposite sides of the duel field.
"You're going to show me either the dumb luck or the skill that beat Professor Chronos!" said Manjoume.
''Ready when you are rich boy.''
"Listen up!" he said. "We'll be using the Ante Rule, putting both our best cards at stake."
Both duelists shifted their duel disk from standby to active mode, shouting out 'Duel!' afterwards to begin the duel. Manjoume took out some cards from his deck as Naruto did likewise.
Manjoume: 4000 LP
Naruto: 4000 LP
"It's my turn first!" Manjoume said, taking out another card from his deck.
After checking the card and his deck hand, Manjoume looked at Naruto and placed the card into play.
"I summon Reborn Zombie in defense mode!" Manjoume said.
A card appeared onto field as a zombie materialized on top of it in a defensive position.
Level: 4 stars
"I place one card face down and end my turn," Manjoume said as he placed a card face down onto the card platform.
Manjoume stared at Naruto with a small smirk on his face.
"Duels contain the element of luck as long as there's drawing," Manjoume thought. "However, what decides a match is a strategy based on careful calculations."
Manjoume' smirk widened.
"Obelisk Blue against Osiris Red…" he said. "The difference in our intellect has already determined the outcome of this!"
Shou gasped as Naruto looked at Manjoume with a serious expression.
"Your quite confident that you're smarter then me. Let me show you the difference in our skill. I summon Nogitsune level 4 in attack mode.'' A black furred Kitsune materialized. The talisman for Darkness glowed an eerily purple on it's head.
Name: Nogitsune Level 4
Level: 4 Stars
Then I equip my Nogitsune level four with Axe of Despair raising it's attack power to 2900 and destroy your Reborn Zombie. The Zombie gave an exaggerated wail as Nogitsume hurled dark blue fox fire flames from its tail to destroy it. ''I activate my Nogitsune's special effect. By sacrificing a thousand of it's attack points I can summon a Kitsune monster with attack points level then a thousand from my hand or deck and special summon it to the field in defense mode'' Naruto shuffled through his deck until he found his choice. I choose Kit the young Kitsune in defense mode and place a card down face down end my turn.''
Level: 2 Star
''Damnit! Seems your better then I gave you credit for Osiris red. Though this duel has just begun.''
''It seems you are better then you shown huh Uzumaki-san.''
Shou turned around and saw Asuka walking up to him.
"A-Asuka-san," said Shou.
''Kitsune cards...only one duelist was known to duel with Kitsune cards. Just trying to assemble a deck costs quite the fortune. That leads to only one conclusion. That Uzumaki-san cards consist of cards from the deck of the legendary Elemental Nation Duelist as he called himself, cards based off legends of ancient times back when the continents were once Pangea the Super Continent.''
Manjoume drew a card. ''I place one card face down in attack mode and end my turn.''
Naruto drew a card as well. I sacrifice my Nogitsune level four and Kit the Newborn Kitsune to summon Kakashi the Sharingan Warrior in attack form.'' The copy card version of one of his sensei's that he gave to Pegasus in the form of an idea.
''That monster has 300 less attack points then Nogitsune had. Why did Aniki summon him?'' Shou wondered out loud.
''I think I heard about that card. The E.N. Duelist used it at battle city. That's indeed that man's deck, but if he's attacking Manjoume's face down monster he most have a plan.''
''Now I attack your face down monster.'' Charging up a Raikiri the card copy version of Kakashi charged forward and attack the monster.
''It's a shame for you Osiris red you activated my trap Hell Blast. Since you destroyed my monster I can destroy the monster with the lowest attack on your side of the field and send it to the graveyard and both of us take damage equal to half it's attack.
Not to mention since you also destroyed my Hell Solider I can activate it's special abilities. When it's destroyed by an opponent's attacking monster and sent to the graveyard the battle damage I take that's inflicted to me is done to your life points as well.''
Naruto's Life points dropped down to to 1300 hundred as well. ''Hhm...I end my turn.''
''This duel is pretty close. Both are at 1300 and with no monsters on his side of the field Uzumaki is open to Manjoume's attack. I hope he has something up his sleeve.''
''Alright trouble maker its time to end this...'' Manjoume said drawing another card.
''Yes let's...'' Naruto said as the smirk never left his face. ''Once he attacks it's all over.''
However, before Manjoume could attack, Asuka overheard the footsteps approaching through the halls. With the students at their dorms only conclusion came to Asuka's mind.
"The security guards are coming!" she cried out, both boys halted their duel for the moment. "With the Ante Rule being forbidden by school regulations, and using a facility after hours… you can get expelled for breaking regulations!"
A blush appeared on Manjoume's cheeks as he realized Asuka had been watching his duel.
"Asuka-san had been watching my duel?" Manjoume thought.
The teal-haired boy from Manjoume's group interrupted his thoughts.
"Manjoume-san, this is bad!" he said.
Manjoume scowled and turned, about ready to make his way out.
"That's enough for tonight," said Manjoume. "I'll take care of my win."
''My ass you will. It's a draw ass-hole. This match isn't over until one of us runs out of cards or our life points hit zero.''
''I've seen plenty. With no monsters I would have wiped your life points out in the next turn. It was luck you got this far.'
"Aniki, they're gonna find us!" cried Shou.
Asuka looked around and motioned at the Osiris Red duo to follow her.
"Come on, this way!" Asuka said as she led them down the opposite hall.
"Hurry!" he said. "Hurry!"
''This isn't over rich boy,'' Naruto said as he followed the two.
A few moments later, three security guards walked into the darkened room and looked around. It was empty.
Meanwhile outside the Main Academy Building,
Asuka stopped and looked back. She leaned back onto the wall.
''You're quite the troublemaker aren't you?''
''Tch, story of my life. By the way Asuka-san thanks.'' How the hell she managed to here and identify the foot steps as the guards I'll never know.
"So how did that harsh ordeal from Obelisk Blue feel?" asked Asuka.
''I'm surprised...he did better then I thought, but I wish I got to play my last card.''
"Is that so?" she asked. "If no one had interfered, you would have lost your most important card due to the Ante Rule right around now, right?"
Naruto handed her a card. ''Read this.''
Asuka blinked as she read the text.
''I see...'' She nodded and handed back Naruto the card.
''Well Asuka-san until next time,'' He said with a wave as he walked off. Shou trailed after Naruto, not wanting to be left behind.
"Aniki!" he called out.
Asuka stared at Naruto.
"That guy is pretty interesting,"she thought, a small smile forming on her lips.
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