Okay, I'm sorry if you think this is a review, but it's not.

Someone made me realize some problems with my story.

NO I'M NOT MAD!

In fact, I'm glad someone pointed some things out.

I'll copy the review:

"This fanfic sucks.

It's a pure romance, with a character with a random abilitythat nobody else can do, with no backstory. There's no logical explanation for why she has wings, she's picked on for no reason at all except to make you feel sorry for her. Her name is completely unfitting, unskyloftian, and special for no reason. Everyone but Groose completely loves her for no reason. She happens to have the needed skills whenever needed. And worse, it takes itself seriously with all of this.

It would be okay if everyone commented on how weird it was that she had wings. It would be okay if her being winged changed the story significally. It would be okay if the beginning of the story was her GETTING her wings. The story would be okay if Link was the one that got wings, but only in chapter 2 or so.

This is an original character fic, one where the story would be no different if the character wouldn't be there. I'm sorry I have to say this as blunt as it is, but this story sucks.

You could improve it, though! You already have pretty good description. Maybe give it some extra plot. Or, you could add justification for why she has wings, and give her some character besides someone to be with Link and fall in love for no reason. You might even turn the story into a humor story, it's just ridiculous to think of a girl with tings; state that!

But for now, this story sucks."

First off, when I saw the first three words I thought "Oh boy, someone who does not like my story and will complain saying that it is stupid." HOWEVER, I started reading the rest and understood as to WHY they do not like this. I will explain some things about this and hopefully, I can make some sense as to why I did some things.

"There's not logical explanation for why she has wings" – yes, there is no logical (or at least in Legend of Zelda logic) as to why Azhelia has wings...yet. It WILL be explained at some point later on as to how this was possible.

"Her name is completely unfitting, unskyloftian, and special for no reason"- Same thing as above

"It would be okay if her being winged changed the story significally" – She hasn't really affected anything yet because it barely has begun. Changes will begin happening in the next chapter. Nothing major yet. It will not change the WHOLE story. Everything will end the way it did in the game, but there will be other things happening along the way that will affect the story but not to the point where nothing in the original does not happen.

Again, I'm not mad at this review.

I am happy. I know that there are some parts that I probably I did not clarify, but I do not want to spoil the story.

Thank you reviewer. Hopefully, this will make some sense.

Also, thank you for providing some constructive criticism.