This is my first fanfic. Please let me know what you think Bull Run Manassas same battle

Names of battles were different depending on the side

Percy POV

My life so far, my life has been with nothing but sorrow.

Flashback

The Giant War was finally over, and peace was restored.

The next summer, a ton of new campers arrived. A week after a kid named Damon was claimed as a child of Poseidon. I figured that it wouldn't be that bad. In fact, he wasn't, he was the best half-brother I couldv'e had(sorry Tyson)

The only problem that I had was that he was a complete 's just say waking up in the middle of the night to here some Aphrodite chick(he seemed to get them quite easily) screaming his name.

Anyways I had just came back from a year-long mission. Well, it was supposed to be a year-long, but I finished sooner than I thought. See, Athena, goddes of wisdom, refused to give me her blessing to marry Annabeth, so in exchange for her blessing, I had to steal a silver blossom from Presephone's garden. You'd think that because Persephone has hundreds of them in her garden in the UNDERWORLD, by the way, she could part with just one.

Nope.

She would have killed me if not for my Achilles heel. After I brought the flower to Olympus,Athena granted me permission to marry her daughter. I had the ring made by Bekondorf (After we defeated Kronos, Hades let all the spirits that died in the war come back) personally, before I left.

Anyways, when I got to camp, I looked around for Annabeth. I checked the armory, the stables, the cabins, and the Big House. I decided to check the beach. I ran there like there was no tomorrow.

As I was running, I started to get a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. But usually, until something bad happens, I choose to ignore it. I should've listened to it. Because what I saw there was the worst thing I will ever see(maybe).

What I saw was Annabeth having sex with my man-whore of a brother.I hid behind some bush so they wouldn't see me. "She couldn't… she wouldn't," I kept thinking. But from her moans and her screams for more, she was enjoying herself.

As soon as I came out of the bush, Annabeth saw me, and screamed. Damonlooked up to see what happened, and he just smirked, and kept going. Annabeth kept trying to push him off her, but to no avail. I took out the ring. I was so mad, I somehow melted it in my hand. It stung like hell, but I didn't care. All I knew was that I had to get away from all this. I went out to Thalia's pine. I made a silent promise to myself. IF I ever came back, I wouldn't come as a child of Poseidon and with that I left

End of Flashback

Thanks for reading. Review. I wanna know how I did for my first real chapter