Ok since we all know I did a terrible job for an ending for those who have read that stupid idea of a challenge i am really sorry about that(i had it up earlier then deleted it). since a lot of you want to redo my story by all means go right ahead. make it better or worse than mine(just give it a better ending) im all fine with that just say somewhere that's it's a redo of mine please. more than one of you may do it over or none at all that's your decision and i really don't care my story is staying as is. i give permission to whom ever wants to redo my story to use all or none of my ideas that are in my story.