Thanks for reading but I am doubting this story due to the poll that I set up asking... How do you think I am doing on " Feelings can make you stronger" ? Someone replied... Horrible. Is the story really that bad?

Last year I got bullied so much for my stories because they thought it was stupid.

I don't want a repeat. Is the story really that bad? Is there a point in carrying on this story?

Tell me why it is so horrible please,