Hello. 'Tis another commentary by me, Lili. Just bear with me through this one. For those that haven't, check out my other commentary on her Harry Potter trollfic. This one might not be as funny at first, since right now I'm pretty pissed off that she's decided to ruin the Hunger Games.
An: DONT FLAM DID STURY U DUM DUM!1111111111111111 Don't write a story, and there won't be anything to flame, dum dum.
Bi da wae go reed Bubbas stortyy!1111111111 Bi da wae, I did. His grammar amazes me, since he's this freak's brother. But he is just as racist and ignorant as her.
Chapter 1 da reeping.
JO BELKES POv
1 dayy I wok up in district 11 WHER DA SUTHURNURS liv /facepalm nd I realized I mite get reeped cuz we ran ote of blak people to snd 2 da reeping!11111111111111 I assume this is drawn from the fact that Rue and Thresh are black in the movie.
Thin I wnt to the towen skware nd I sawa… Oh God, not more suspense. I had enough of that in the last story.
DARRYL MY CUZIN *gags* Great.. Cousincest.
Effie trinket sed, NOW dis yeer 2 tributs get a specal advantage! Is the advantage the fact that they're Southern? Because that's not gonna help them at all in the arena.
NOWE R TRIBUTS WILL B…
JO BKEL ND DARREL!111111111111 WHAT A BIG FAT FRICKIN SUPRISE!111111
Well, we got through the first chapter. She's only uploaded three so far, so I might just do all of them now. If I have time and am feeling productive.