Contest for my book

My book is completely finished. The title is the Lord of Shadows Rises. Now for a contest, I want my fan to send A Pm telling me what they like about my writing in fanfiction and what I need improvement on. I will be getting five books and the first five to respond will get a book.

Rules are it must be a good and a bad not or the other.

Must be in the States sorry but I can't ship outside I will have another one down below were I will send you A KINDLE COPY TO YOU EMAIL.

I need an address.

Now for those outside the States tell me your email and I will buy you a kindle copy I will make this one the first three from out of states and only out of states.

I will put this on my profile and my top five story with the most faviorte