So I ambitiously thought maybe I would maintain this story as a cannon version of my story "Blue".
That idea was silly and over ambitious of me!
I went back and made all of Blue cannon - it reflects events in the movie now, and the fact that Loki was tortured by the Chitauri.
If you enjoyed the first chapter of this story, please check out "Blue" under my profile, it's under the Thor fandom. It's not complete yet, but there are another 11 chapters of Loki/Darcy goodness there.