I've decided to rewrite or tweak this story a few months ago. I was going to write out all the chapters and type them before I even thought about posting a new version. So even those this story is complete, I am going update it and make it better. So if you have any idea's or suggestions for the story, please let me know in your review or if you want it private just PM through Fan fiction.
As for the sequel it will be discontinued for the time being.