COMING August 1st 2012


New Story brought to you by Riverbkstar.


What would you do if the person you loved with all your heart was dying?

Below is an actual written trailer of the story. Picture it as a little you tube video. The scenes skip quickly as they would in an actual video. The plot makes no sense on any means but gives you some little insight into what the story is going to be about. Please note, spoilers are not included and there is a lot more to the plot than I let on.

Trailer:

(Image of cemetery)

Amy's voice: I met him on a Saturday…

(Screen fades in)

(Amy standing in bright room, next to young man in hospital gown sitting in wheelchair)

Amy: So you're a patient?

Young man: Four years running…

(Screed flashes out) (Flashes back in)

Amy: I'm Amy by the way

Young man: Ricky

(Ricky looks at up at Amy and smiles through the day light)


(Scene flips)

(Martial Bowman and Amy out in hallway of hospital)

Martial: What exactly are you doing here Amy?

Amy: I came to see him

(Martial slams fist against the wall in rage)

Martial: He's not some cute puppy in the window Amy! He's dying!

Amy: You think I don't know that?

(Screen goes black)

(Flashes into Ricky asleep on bed)

(How to save a life by the Fray plays – Between the lines of fear and blame, you begin to wonder why you came)


(Scene Flips)

(Amy and Ricky in the dark, in each other's arms on bed. Amy rests head on his chest)

Amy (whispering) Are you scared?

Ricky: Scared I won't be here for you…

(Where did I go wrong? I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness and I would have stayed up with you all night, had I known - How to save a life)


(Scene Flips)

(Amy on floor, sobbing, clutching stomach)

(Screen fades grey)

(Fades back in to Martial in waiting room)

Martial: He's going to be okay…

(Amy hugs him)

Amy: I love you dad…

(Screen goes black)


(Scene flips)

(Amy and Ricky in living room)

(Let him know that you know best, because after all you do know best…)

Ricky (Yelling): I'm done trying to be perfect for you! One little mistake and – and… you freak out!

(Lay down a list of what is wrong. The things you told him all along)

Amy: It's not just some little mistake! It's just that…

(Pray to God he hears you, and pray to God he hears you!)


(Scene flips to Amy in chapel, head bowed)

Amy's voice: I'm asking for a miracle…

(Screen goes black)

Could your love outlast a medical disaster?

(Where did I go wrong? I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness and I would have stayed up with you all night, had I known - How to save a life)


(Scene flips)

(Amy in gown, Ricky in suit)

(Ricky kisses Amy)

Ricky: I love you… (He reaches down to her stomach and touches it) And you…

(Scene flips)

(Amy on stage, receiving diploma)

Announcer's voice: Amy Jeurgens!


(Scene jumps)

(Ricky collapsed on floor, coughing)

(People surround him)

(Amy screams)

(Screen goes black)

Is love worth fighting for?

(Where did I go wrong? I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness and I would have stayed up with you all night, had I known - How to save a life)

Amy's voice: Are you scared to die?

Ricky's voice: I don't know… Ask me Tomorrow

(Where did I go wrong? I lost a friend, somewhere along in the bitterness and I would have stayed up with you all night, had I known - How to save a life)

To Save a Life

COMING AUGUST 1st

Please review for earlier publication date.