Okay, I should have done this sooner, but a very helpful reviewer pointed out that not many people may be aware that the rewrite is up.
Well, it is, ladies and gentlemen! It's titled 'Outcast' and the first chapter is already up and ready for your intense scrutiny and constructive criticism.
I've been making some improvements to my writing style that I hope you will enjoy, as well as plugging up some plot holes that I noticed in the original version.
Let me know what you guys think of the new and improved version. I eagerly await your feedback with bated breath and no small amount of sweating.
-This is Zapwing, signing off.