Hello all! I've realized there are a few mistakes in my earlier chapters, and well im going to rewrite them.

Also to a certain idiot from a certain website, you know who you are. Discontinued huh? You had the wrong story.

Allegiances: BrambleClan

Leader: Darkbramble (appr. Berrypaw)

Deputy: Ashfur (Apprentice, Lionpaw)

Med. Cat: Leafpool (appr. Kestralpaw)

Warriors:

Dustpelt (appr. Honeypaw)

Brackenfur

Thornclaw (appr. Poppypaw)

Sorreltail (appr. Cinderpaw)

Spiderleg

Whitewing

Birchfall

Squirrelflight

Tornear (appr. Harepaw)

Crowfeather (appr. Heatherpaw)

Owlwhisker

Whitetail (appr. Breezepaw)

Nightcloud

WeaselFur

Apprentices:

Berrypaw

Lionpaw

Honeypaw

Poppypaw

Cinderpaw

Kestralpaw

Harepaw

Heatherpaw

Breezepaw

Queens:

Ferncloud

Gorsetail

Elders:

Morningflower

Webfoot

Longtail

Mousefur

Allegiances: HawkClan

Leader:Darkhawk (appr. Dapplepaw)

Deputy:Rowanclaw (appr. Ivypaw)

Med. Cat:LittleCloud

Warriors:

Blackclaw

Voletooth (appr. Minnowpaw)

Reedwhisker (appr. pouncepaw)

Mosspelt (appr. pebblepaw)

Beechfur

Rippletail (appr. Willowpaw)

Oakfur

Smokefoot (appr. Owlpaw)

Snowbird

Apprentices:

Dapplepaw

Ivypaw

Willowpaw

Minnowpaw

Pouncepaw

Pebblepaw

Owlpaw

Queens:

Dawnflower

Graymist

Icewing

Elders:

Heavystep

Swallowtail

Stonestream

Cedarheart

Tallpoppy

Allegiance: The Resistance/New ThunderClan

Leader:Graystar

Deputy:Cloudtail (appr. Hazelpaw)

Med. Cat:Brightheart

Warriors:

Millie(Appr. Mousepaw)

Daisy

Prologue

Brambleclaw stared down at Firestar, who now lay helpless with his head stuck in a fox trap. Brambleclaw took a step forward, remembered how Firestar had sat and watched as his father, Tigerstar, had all of his nine lives ripped away in a single blow, he remembered Firestar saving him from the fire. He remembered Firestar's distrust of him as an apprentice. He froze in his tracks, trying to figure out what to do, he had never been this confused before.

Fool! Kill Him Now! Tigerstar's spirit suddenly demanded, "Six Lives..." Brambleclaw muttered as he took another step forward to Firestar. "Kill him, and ThunderClan is yours." Hawkfrost, Brambleclaw's brother, urged him on from the side. Brambleclaw looked at Firestar in the eyes, "I'm sorry, Firestar." He said quietly as he tightened the noose around Firestar's neck. Firestar's eyes widened in shock, this was clearly not the decision he thought Brambleclaw would make.

Brambleclaw loosened the noose after Firestar lost his fifth Life. Firestar using what energy he had left, lifted his head in questioning, and he saw only malice and greed for power in Brambleclaw's eyes. He then saw The spirit of Tigerstar standing next to Brambleclaw, Smirking down to him. Brambleclaw then tore his claws through Firestar's side, causing blood to pour out slowly, He then proceeded to do the same to the other side.

He then raked his claws down Firestar's back. Blood flowed into the lake, slowly turning it red 'Brambleclaw what made you go down this path?' And with that last thought, Firestar died.

Meanwhile, ThunderClan camp

"There shall be one. One with the power to decide the fate of the clans." Leafpool heard as darkness surrounded her, then there was a loud, long roar from a lion before the darkness faded. Leafpool let loose the breath she had not realized she was holding, "There shall be one. One with the power to decide the fate of the clans." She murmured, reciting the words she had heard seconds earlier.

So tell me how was the prologue?

Review or BrambleClaw will come and kill you!