Mining station on Saturn's moon Calypso

Location: Firing Range

"Tim if you keep shooting you're going to eventually miss you're target, which means you'll just practice more so you don't miss. It's endless. Just take a break now and then."

I always hate it when Dan tells me these horrible but entirely true facts. It is true that I only ever take breaks from the firing range when someone gets hurts. I'm one of the two doctors at the station. But with 100 or so civilians on base there is only about a minor injury every 3 days and if we're that unlucky we get a major injury every month or so. "I'll stop when those EarthGov bastards pay for killing my parents."

"Blaa blaa blaa blaaaa. You heard what they said. It was terrorists, and why would EarthGov want to kill the entire crew of their best planet cracker class ship? It was terrorists man." Replies Dan.

"Dan. Why do I always have to tell you this? Terrorists always claim responsibility. There was no terrorist organization to claim responsibility, but all the terror." I said. Why could he never understand the facts.

"Whatever. Oh, yeah I got you a birthday present." He says with a grin on his face.

"My birthday was two months ago, and what could I possibly want for a present. Another box of ammo. I get that for free" I let out a chuckle. "at the commanders expense."

"No nothing so simple, but you did give me an idea for your next present." He pulled up something and showed it to me. It was a news site. I read the headline. "USS Ishimura docking at Titan Station" As soon I read this I was halfway to the commanders quarters.

"Commander I want… I need to take my leave now!" I yell.

"You, taking a vacation… we should celebrate." He says to me.

"Very funny. I would like to take my leave at the Titan Station."

"Done, and Tim."

"Yes sir."

"Tell me if you find anything." A smile crept across my face.

"Yes sir."

Well this is my first ever fanfic and I hope you like it. I will try to write one chapter per day but I would like all the criticism. Any way I can improve my stories would be great.