This is one of the stories of my folders containing my many ideas of Naruto stories. Here is a summary.
We all know how retarded Naruto is, this story gives you a great reason why. Here's a theory, it was established that the Kyuubi's yin chakra was sealed into the Shinigami i.e. the seal and the Yang right. So the Kyuubi was separated losing its Yang Chakra.
The fourth separated Kyuubi energies in order to seal it into Naruto. So when the Kyuubi was sealed its predicament affected Naruto. So not only Kyuubi's but Naruto's personality was affected resulting into the canon Naruto we all see.
Orochimaru distrupts the seal in the forest of death causing the Yang Chakra of the Kyuubi to return therefore bringing Naruto's other half with it.
Kyuubi now is complete and so is Naruto who begins to wonder what the hell he was doing all his life.
This Naruto is a Naruto who inherited his father and mother's specialties. He is the best of both of them into one. He will be very strong but will need to work it.
Naruto is smart, more aware and more kickass than the canon one I assure you. He's the true legacy of his parents.
You know me and read my stories, Naruto is going to a badass.
The pairing is Naruto/Older women Harem and as you can see this is a Naruto/Mei.
What was I doing with my life?
Naruto rubbed his aching head as he came to, climbing to his feet shakily, "What?" he grunted in pain as his head stung.
The memory came back in a flash, distorted by a distinct crimson haze.
"Hmm," the Grass shinobi mused quietly, Naruto in her grasp. "It seems the Kyuubi brat is still alive." She then opened his orange jacket and rolled up his shirt. The Grass kunoichi was amused at what she saw, on the boy's stomach was an intricate seal on the boy's stomach, "so this is the seal."
The Kusagakure kunoichi moved her right hand behind herself, a mini purple fire lighting up on each fingertip. Naruto thrashed in her grasp, trying desperately to free himself. The ninja's amazingly long tongue, however, would not relinquish him from its grasp.
"Hey!" he shouted, wriggling as much as the foreign appendage would allow. "Let me...go!"
The super powerful Grass ninja, who was actually Orochimaru in disguise, thrust his flaming fingers into Naruto's unprotected abdomen, crying, "Gogyo Fuin!"
Naruto's face contorted into a silent scream as the Hebi Sennin's agile digits dug into his stomach, clenching around the soft flesh. The red bled from his irises as the Kyūbi's Chakra disappeared, returning his eyes to their natural blue. His canine teeth shrunk to their original size and his nails were once more blunt and soft. Then, without warning, the blonde boy slumped, unconscious.
The Grass Kunoichi thus tossed him into the depth of the abyss, all Naruto heard was a scream.
"Urgh!" Naruto gripped his head as white chakra now was forming around him. its energy sizzled, crackled like food under the stove. The white energy hissed into his body bringing forth Naruto great pain who screamed. He screamed when memories suddenly flashed once more. Naruto still screamed.
For a brief second he saw a red haired woman being held by a blond haired man.
"Naruto" a feminine voice echoed his mind
"My Naruto don't be a fussy eater…eat a lot and grow up to be a big boy. Go to bed early and sleep well, take your bath everyday." The voice coughed she sounded to be in pain "make friends, it doesn't matter how many. Just make sure they're real friends…people you can trust even a few is enough. And study your ninjutsu…I was never good at it, maybe you will be"
"Everyone has things they are good at and things they are not. So don't feel bad if you cant do it all. Make sure you listen to the teachers at the academy."
Naruto's head span as he kept screaming. The white chakra whirled around him as tails of white chakra began to sprout each hit him….one….two…three.
"And remember avoid the three vices of the Shinobi…don't borrow money if you can help it. Save what you earn from missions. No drinking alcohol until you're 20 and don't overdo it or you'll ruin your body.
Four….five….six tails hit him, it felt like thousand lashes.
"And as for women, well I'm a woman so I don't know what to say, but there are only men and women in this world, and you'll want a girlfriend someday. Just try not to pick a weird one, try to find someone like your mother"
A man spoke now "another warning watch out for Jiraiya-Sensei"
The voices grunted but the female voice again spoke this time was very sad.
"Naruto….you are going to experience a lot of pain and suffering…."
Flashes came people scowling at him, there was anger, sadness…
"Mom said I cant play with you"
"He's that boy"
"Remember who you are, find a goal, a dream and don't stop trying until it comes true." The female voice spoke again bring forth another memory.
"I want to be Hokage! The greatest of them all" Naruto yelled standing in front of the class. Everyone soon laughed at him.
"Like you can be dobe" a boy with a dog in his head insulted "you failed twice now!"
"Yeah Naruto-Baka!" a pink haired girl yelled when everyone now threw insults at him. one word was the most consistent of them all.
"There…there's so much more I want to say…to teach you about…I want to stay with you. I love you my baby." Weeping can be heard as Naruto felt great sorrow, the woman was crying.
"I'm sorry Minato I took all your time" she said when the male voice entered now.
"It's okay, Naruto this is your dad. Listen to your motor-mouth. Mother and I want you to be the greatest ninja okay!"
Naruto screamed as loud as he ever has.
Seven….Eight….Nine, now all the tails entered.
"Eight Trigrams seal!" both the female and male yelled.
"Argh!" Naruto fell to his knees and became unconscious what he didn't know was that he stood before the seal.
The white chakra surged into the cage and two red slitted eyes opened.
It spoke "I am complete"
"Urgh," Naruto groaned softly now waking up shaking of the water on his face.
He looked around, his expression a bit dazed still, "Where—?"
A sewer is what he saw, pipes that leaked a bit hit the water creating dripping sound. He looked around and was surprised to see a huge cage before him.
"A cage" Naruto said still confused to where he was "Where am I?"
Last thing he remembered, he'd been in the Forest of Death during the second part of the Chûnin Selection Exams and he had fought against a strong Kusagakure ninja. He had been surrounded by trees and roots and then darkness.
So where was he now? The only place that had sewers was the konoha sewers he used to venture to when he was little.
"This isn't no ordinary sewer and this cage,"the blonde thought as he looked at the cage , "a cage?" he walked to the cage and touched the bars
"So," a deep voice, like the rolling thunder, spoke. Nearly jumping out of his skin, he suddenly froze, coming face to face with a crimson fox, "you're finally here."
Its fur were like fire, wild and uncontrolled, it matched the fox's expression as its expression contained rage full of rage. Smacking can be heard as Naruto saw nine flames behind the beast.
Uzumaki Naruto began to tremble his feet refused to move.
"It is nice to meet you my jailor" the fox spoke its voice brought shivers to his spine. Naruto felt its hot breath making him sweat.
"Tell me do you know who I am" the fox moved closer, its glowing red eyes boring into his own, "Can you say it with that tiny mouth of yours?"
"K…Kyuubi" Naruto stammered this was true fear he felt.
The fox chuckled "Ku, Ku,Ku,Ku"
Naruto took a step back when suddenly claws attacked the bars. The massive claws stopped Naruto on his tracks as it tore his clothes, like knives tore through his skin. The Uzumaki felt great pain when he screamed.
With eyes closed and fear overcoming he roared. "Your name is Kurama!"
The Kyuubi's eyes went wide in great surprise when suddenly light escaped the seal and a ball smacked the blond Uzumaki on the head. Naruto fell on his butt.
He groaned when he felt something on his lap. He looked and saw a beautiful glowing orb.
Kyuubi chuckled "You are not stupid after all" it seemed that the brat too went into the process.
"W…what do you want and why am I here" Naruto asked suddenly huge back can be heard as fires came rushing towards him but enwrapped the bars of the seal.
"I am the Kyuubi and you are in the seal" the fox spoke now its eyes analysed the blond like a specimen under the microscope.
"Seal" Naruto moved away from the fox fearing he would lash out on him. "So the snake woman send me here"
"Partially" the Kyuubi spoke "I sent you here"
Naruto was surprised but his surprise came through a croaked voice "W…why"
"It is not your concern" the fox said
"Wha…what do you mean …" Naruto got up now holding the orb in his hand "why did you send me here"
The orb glowed and the Fox slanted its eyes a bit "the seal is complete"
"What" Naruto blinked "the seal, you mean the Eight Trigrams seal!"
"Yes, the seal is fully complete" The Kyuubi said "what is lost can soon be found"
"What is lost…" Naruto said in thought "you mean you lost something" Kyuubi chuckled, its damn chuckle always made him shiver.
"Indeed" it smirked "it not only applies to me"
"What do you mean" Naruto asked but the fox spoke "now is not the time. Wake up"
Eyes wide open Naruto woke with a gasp, his head aching and his stomach sore. It felt as though he'd been run through with a katana to the heart..
Getting up he heard he looked around to see team 10, 7 and another team.
"You're awake Naruto" Chouji spoke getting his attention as did everyone.
"Naruto-Baka!" Sakura yelled as he saw her with Ino it seemed she was done getting her hair done.
Naruto just ignored everything and held his face.
"What is this feeling" he thought, he felt more spiritually aware, like an empty void inside him was filled.
"What is lost can soon be found" what Kyuubi said rung through his mind.
"Mendoukse (troublesome) that fight was a waste of time." Shikamaru groaned as he sat next to Chouji who opened a bag of chips and began to inhale them.
"Don't...be..like..that...Shikamaru...we won." Chouji offered positively between bites.
"Yeah, you're right Chouji. It's just too troublesome to think about." Shikamaru replied as he leaned back to look at the clouds.
Neji still stood of to the side as he watched Tenten wake their teammate Lee up while keeping a discreet watch on Uchiha Sasuke as well. Sasuke sat under a nearby tree by himself just reflecting on this latest development.
"That power, I felt that nothing could beat me, it felt great. " Sasuke thought as he remembered what happened not too long ago, however he looked at Naruto who also was in deep thought.
"We got the scroll. Lets go" Sasuke said now getting up. This alerted Sakura who also got up. Naruto still sat down he was still frozen in thought.
"There are still plenty of teams out there who could easily beat us separately." Ino pointed out as she looked at everyone else in the clearing.
"Yosh! We can all make it through with the combined might of our youth!" Lee all but shouted as he gave his nice guy pose before Tenten clocked him with a fist to the back of the head and pulled him down to sit and be quiet.
"Need I to remind you we are enemies for the remainder of this part of the exam, so teaming up wouldn't be wise. Lets go Lee, Tenten" Neji ordered Tenten nodded and got up Lee did the same they left now.
"Troublesome but we have both our scrolls." Shikamaru got up "lets go" Chouji and Ino nodded. They too were leaving.
"Hrn" Sasuke grunted and walked off "Naruto" he called out to his teammate.
"Uh" Naruto now got out of his thoughts
"We're going" Sasuke ordered as Sakura followed.
Naruto just got up and went with them. The other team followed.
Chunin exam - forest of death tower
"I suggest we open the scrolls," Naruto said. After three hours of nonstop running, Team Seven had finally made it to the tower. They were now deciding what to do.
"Idiot!" Sakura punched Naruto over the head, a vein popping out on her brow. "Anko-san said not to open the scrolls! We'd get disqualified!"
"She was talking about before we got to the tower!" Naruto shouted back, rubbing his head. "Besides, we would probably still be looking for a second scroll if it wasn't for me remember the decoy scroll"
"I don't care!" Sakura fumed, glaring at him. "I'm not about to let you and your stupidity get Sasuke-kun disqualified from the Chûnin Exams!"
"Stupidity…its common sense!" Naruto argued, blue eyes burning. "We're in the tower now, where are the people like Anko-san fir example. The only explanation is that the scrolls have something to do with our qualification into the next part of the Exams!"
Silence ensued as both Sasuke and Sakura were greatly surprised. That really made sense.
"Baka!" Sakura hissed "sense, when do you have common sense! I wont allow you to mess this up"
"Then what do you propose" he said seriously "come on tell us"
Sasuke looked at her and Sakura now was intimidated a bit as she was put into a spot.
"Well..I, we just move forward" she sputtered having no idea.
"Where, we are in the tower" Naruto asked "where do we go" he again put her on the spot
"We just move forward!" Sakura snapped at him.
"Jeez!" Naruto flung his hands up in exasperation, rolling his eyes. "For the smartest girl in the Academy you sure are pretty dumb!"
"What did you say?" Sakura's voice rose. "I dare you to say that to my face!"
"You heard," Naruto yelled back looking at Sakura like she was the most stupidest woman in the world, "BAKA!"
"How dare you!" Sakura was about to hit Naruto again when Sasuke spoke.
"Hey, guys," both of them froze as Sasuke looked at them with his serious face. "I think we should open the scrolls."
Naruto now sighed as Sakura squealed and droned about how right her Sasuke-kun was, and about how he always had the best ideas. Wasn't it his idea.
"Yeah Naruto-Baka!" a pink haired girl yelled when everyone now threw insults at him. one word was the most consistent of them all.
Naruto froze now as his hair covered his expression.
"Baka huh" he said to himself eerily "Sakura…why did I even like her anyway" Naruto began to recollect it made absolutely no sense whatsoever why he would like her.
In fact….everything didn't make sense?
"Come on, baka!" Sakura pulled him by the sleeve of his jacket, shoving the Heaven scroll into his stomach forcefully. "Help me open the scrolls."
Grudgingly peeling open the scroll given to him, he stared at its contents. Several characters were written down, focused around single kanji in the center, the scrolls began to bring out smoke.
"Sakura let go of the scroll" Sakura quickly listened oblivious of the way Naruto called her name.
The scrolls were hurled at the floor as it rolled away from them. The smoke rose to covered the,. As the smoke began to clear, a shape could be seen within the dispersing cloud. Team Seven tensed, but was surprised at who it was.
"Iruka-Sensei!" Sakura yelled
The person that came was the Academy teacher, Umino Iruka. He grinned at them, waving in a friendly gesture, "Hey, guys. It's been a while, huh?"
"Iruka…Sensei" Naruto said in a quiet voice.
"Get out Naruto" Iruka was scowling "you have been disrupting the class"
"But I didn't do anything!" Young Naruto graoned
"Get out!" Iruka yelled
"It's been a while Naruto" Iruka smiled his hand landed on his hair softly began to ruffle it.
Naruto shook when he suddenly and surprisingly slapped it away. This shocked everyone.
"Don't touch me!" he hissed eyes glowed dangerous getting Iruka shocked.
"Baka!" Sakura came and bonked his head "don't do that to your sensei!"
Naruto had his head down, now nursing it.
Why was this happening, those memories, his actions everything didn't make sense. That wasn't him out there. Who was he?
"What is lost can soon be found"
Kyuubi, the fox must know something.
"Naruto!" Sakura yelled getting him out of his thoughts
"Ah" he smiled scratching the back of his head. Exactly the way he used to do "sorry Iruka-Sensei"
Iruka was in deep thought. He was confused what he saw wasn't Naruto at all.
"Sensei…can you explain our next task" Sasuke spoke
"Oh, right," Iruka rubbed the back of his neck, " I am here to tell you all you have passed the second exam" Team 7 were surprised.
"Really" Sakura asked
"Yes" Iruka smiled "now is the third exam. You guys don't overdo it okay" he looked at Naruto "especially you Naruto"
"Don't worry about me, it's not your job its mine" he said suddenly surprising the teacher.
He grinned, rubbing his neck sheepishly, "Yeah, I guess so, huh?" he mind was on Naruto, Iruka was worried.
"Lets go" Sasuke said walking off
"Yeah!" Sakura yelled following Naruto went after them when Iruka stopped him.
"Naruto…has anything happened in the forest" he asked a bit worried.
Naruto had his back turned and just got his hand out of his "I finally woke up" he walked off ignoring a shocked Iruka.
The Hokage looked over the assembled Genin, resisting the overwhelming compulsion to smile when he saw Naruto among them. Twenty-one had made it, the majority of them from his village. They were all rookies and another three were a team that was only about a year old. It did his heart good to see such strength and courage in ones so young.
In the front of the room stood a group consisting of Chûnin, Jônin, and the Hokage. Protruding from the front wall was a pair of stone hands forming the seal for "Ram".
Anko smirked at them from where she stood, "Congratulations on passing! Hokage-sama will now explain the third test, so listen carefully!"
Sarutobi looked at the candidates and was impressed of his ninjas, he coughed and then spoke "Well done everyone for passing this portion of the exams" Anko smiled and nodded.
"I will explain to you why you are here and what you shall be doing but before I explain the third and final test for the day. Do you know the reason why the Chunin exams are held?
The Genins looked confused as they listened anyway. Gaara just watched emotionlessly and Naruto watched with a serious expression.
"The Chunin exams are not here for a Shinobi to go up just in rank. The truth is it's a replacement for war among allied countries" The Genins were surprised and confused even more now as Sarutobi spoke before they did.
"A village's strength is determined by the strength of its shinobi. Holding the Chunin Exams and show the feudal lords what we can do and stand out from the rest is key. In other words your strength that you will be displaying in the exams attracts more clients and is noticed by other villages"
Sarutobi sighed as he looked at Gaara, Neji, Sasuke and finally Naruto who looked back at him.
His eyes glowed feverishly shocking the old man for a second.
He was about to commence the third exam when Hayate interrupted as he coughed "Hokage-sama may I" Sarutobi nodded "you may…after all you are in charge of the third test"
He coughed for a while getting the Genins attention as they thought he was sick or something.
"My name is Gekkō Hayate and I'm the proctor of the third exams" he coughed again and spoke "the third test is to cut down the number of candidates as they are a lot of people who passed. So we are going to do preliminary matches" this shocked everyone as they thought it was unfair
"The feudal lords will be attending the final exams and we need the strongest ninjas available when they arrive. So this test will bring forth those who are the strongest between you all" Hayate answered their questions before they had to ask
"So we…" Gaara was about to speak when Naruto spoke "so we fight" Temari and Kankuro looked at him in shock. He interrupted Gaara. The red haired boy looked at the blond but Naruto ignored it.
Sakura and Sasuke looked at him as did everyone. The third eyed Naruto who looked back.
Hayate nodded "that's correct"
"So before I start does anyone want to quit now" silence ensued as suddenly someone raised his hands.
Sakura and Sasuke were speaking silently which was a conversation Sasuke won as Sakura had a downcast expression. Naruto noticed and listened quietly.
"I'm fine Sakura" Sasuke said dangerously "I wont quit!"
"But that mark" she was worried
"Mark" Naruto thought taking note.
"Worry about yourself for now don't take it upon yourself" Sakura had no choice but to obey.
"Anyone want to quit" Hayate asked again Sakura looked at Sasuke and softened. She relented.
"Sorry I quit" Someone smiled
"Kabuto-San!" Sakura spoke in shock Kabuto looked at Sakura and smiled "I got injured all over. So you see I'm not fit to fight." He smiled at them but looked at Naruto. Their eyes met and Naruto's eyes narrowed. Kabuto walked off.
The Jounins and the Hokage noticed at how Naruto looked and pondered what made him that way.
"Alright the rules are this as the referee you listen to me! If I say stop you stop! If you don't do that then you fail. Fights will be one on one and the winner fight will proceed to the final. Your opponents will be chosen at random and the match will end when an opponent dies, loses consciousness or gives up. If I see that a match is unable to continue I will also end the match.
"Alright now let's begin the first round" everyone turned around to look at the screen as multiple names popped up before stopping at the first two names.
Uchiha Sasuke VS Akadou Yoroi
Naruto just looked while Sakura looked scared "Sasuke-Kun"
Kakashi watched his prized student as he knew what happened and what the boy was carrying on his neck. He was told along with the Jounins that Orochimaru was in the exams and attacked team 7. Everyone were now leaving when Kakashi touched his shoulder
"Remember Sasuke don't use the Sharingan" he muttered
"I know" Sasuke nodded
Once everyone went up the stairs to watch the fight both opponents stood facing each other.
Naruto went past the sand team and noticed the red head kid giving him the creepy eye getting his attention.
Their eyes met as they both went to separate platforms.
"Are both fighters ready?" Hayate asked as he received a nod from both Yoroi and Sasuke "Hajime!"
As soon the fight begun Yoroi started to go through several hand signs and his hands glowed blue.
Sasuke flashed his Sharingan but then suddenly he started to feel pain coursing through his neck making him fall to the ground.
"Shit it's the seal" Anko muttered as she wanted to stop the fight but her leader disapproved. She touched her mark remembering the event and how she met Orochimaru in the forest.
"Yes Sasuke-Kun let it control you" Orochimaru thought with a happy expression while he was in his disguise.
Once that happened the fight became one sided as Sasuke was getting beaten easily as those glowing hands of Yoroi kept draining his chakra
Yoroi had Sasuke's head on the floor and kept draining his chakra.
Sakura was worried as she clenched her heart and looked away.
Kakashi watched with full concentration as Sasuke got out of the man's hold and gained some space. He then dodged Yoroi's swings and then at a fast speed Sasuke appeared under him and then did an upward kick on his chin a technique that belonged to lee.
Lee's eyes went wide as he recognized the attack Gai watched and was not pleased.
Sasuke then jumped in the air with Yoroi he then gave the man a faint and then a heel drop hard on his stomach. Together they landed on the ground.
"Lion combo" with this combo Yoroi fell unconscious
"Winner Uchiha Sasuke!" Hayate announced.
The Genins were amazed at his skill "wow Sasuke-kun is great" Ino commended happily while Sakura sighed in delight.
Kakashi was impressed while Asuma nodded "He is the rookie of the year" Kurenai nodded.
Kakashi nodded while Gai frowned both thinking of different things.
Lee looked sad as Gai reassured him making him smile
Naruto just gave the spandex wearing youth a look of sympathy. "He must have copied it from Gai's student" he thought.
"So that's the Uchiha." Kankuro looked impressed as he stood from the other platform opposite from Naruto and co.
Gaara looked unimpressed while Temari agreed with Kankuro. The sound team just watched just watched from afar.
Once Yoroi was sent away from a stretcher Sasuke looked to be in pain as he had difficulty getting up due to the seal on his neck.
Orochimaru in his disguise had a gleeful look but when he saw Kakashi shunshin down and then take the Uchiha away.
Everyone watched while Naruto looked at Sakura "what's with him" Sakura looked shaken as she ignored him.
"N…nothing just worry about your match"
"Whatever" Naruto frowned "so that's how it is" if they wanted to keep secrets from him it showed him that they should not be trusted.
" Kakashi-Sensei told me not to tell you anything Naruto" Sakura frowned.
"Where are they going" Ino enquired while Shikamaru looked at them in deep thought.
"Alright I shall now begin the second round" Hayate coughed again as the screen changed and then two names now appeared.
In the basement within tower
While the match carried on, Sasuke sat on the floor in the middle of a circle made from seals and candles as Kakashi was behind him. The Uchiha felt sensations on his skin particularly his neck as Kakashi brushed drawings on his neck.
Sasuke just grunted "Hold still and I'll tell you when I'm done. This will help you control yourself and resist the mark" Sasuke nodded
"Now hold still and brace yourself" Kakashi the enacted his technique "Evil Sealing Method"
As soon as the words left Kakashi's lips, the flames of the candles in the room disappeared as Sasuke screamed in pain. The seals on the floor began to race up his body and form around the curse mark. The moment the seal was done etching itself to Sasuke's neck; he passed out.
"Ku ku ku you became stronger Kakashi-kun." came a voice within the room which had Kakashi on high alert.
"Who's there?" Kakashi ordered as he prepared to protect his prized student.
It was Orochimaru who came out of the dark smirking evilly. Kakashi quickly got out a Kunai and became ready
"Orochimaru! What are you doing here?" Kakashi warned as he gripped his right arm with his left and charged and created his Raikiri(Lightning Blade).
"I'm merely checking on my subject." Orochimaru spoke as he then looked at Kakashi who looked ready to fight and chuckled "my…what determination."
Kakashi's eyes narrowed "I won't let you anywhere near him" the Sannin chuckled
"Don't worry. I won't get him yet but I will warn you if you stop me…your life is forfeit" he then walked back within the darkness and disappeared
Kakashi waited until he was sure that Orochimaru was gone before he slowly released his technique and put away his Sharingan
"What was I doing when I thought I could fight a Sannin?" Kakashi sighed as he picked up Sasuke and went to the hospital.
Tenten vs Temari.
Yosh go Tenten" Lee perked up as he cheered for his teammate as Gai joined in.
Neji nodded as Tenten smirked and came down the stairs where Temari was waiting. The blond flipped over the edge of the platform and jumped down.
"Hmph the girl won't stand a chance" Kankuro smirked
"So that's the Sand team" Kurenai said as Asuma nodded
"Tenten" Naruto muttered watching the genin.
"Naruto-Baka, you are a loser!" she smirked "you're not fit to be a ninja and never will be"
His eyes narrowed. He looked at the sand ninja who was smirking.
Naruto wished Tenten would get a beat down. That would be fun.
"So are you ready little girl" Temari smirked while Tenten took out a Kunai and twirled "you are going to pay for that comment"
When the fight started Naruto was right because it was the most one sided fight he had ever seen since…well ever.
They found out that Temari was a wind user and used it to its utmost potential thanks to her fan so this outdone Tenten's ability to hit her targets.
So all of Tenten's attacks became immune as they were swept away thanks to Temari's Kamaitachi no Jutsu(Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique). In the end Tenten had cuts all over her body and when she fell towards the ground thanks to one final attempt she landed on Temari fan.
Naruto watched Temari, he analysed her moves. She was strong and he couldn't help but notice her legs. Temari just tossed Tenten like a rag doll.
This didn't end well as Team Gai went to Tenten's aid "that was uncalled for" Lee screamed from the stands.
Temari smirked "are you really a Kunoichi, felt like fighting a child" Lee got angry and was about to jump at her but Gai stopped him "stop Lee! This is an exam it's the rules you know that" Lee just gritted his teeth in anger.
The Third Hokage looked impressed "the Shinobies from sand are well trained" Anko and Ibiki nodded as they too was impressed.
Temari looked at them but her eyes met Naruto's. She smiled and he smiled back.
Suddenly Kakashi appeared in the platform and greeted everyone "Kakashi-Sensei how is Sasuke-kun" Kakashi gave her an eye smile "don't worry Sakura he will be fine"
"But!" Kakashi then put his hand on her shoulder "don't worry, it will be okay"
Sakura had a downcast expression "okay Sensei"
Naruto watched with a stoic expression as Kakashi looked at him and smiled.
Naruto just ignored him and looked ahead.
Hayate coughed for a bit as he commenced the next round round "now let's begin the next round" the screen flashed as it landed on two people.
Inuzuka Kiba VS Uzumaki Naruto
Ha! The dobe we got lucky, Akamaru!" Kiba gloated, jumping down into the arena. Akamaru, his dog, gave an enthusiastic bark of agreement.
"I want to be Hokage! The greatest of them all" Naruto yelled standing in front of the class. Everyone soon laughed at him.
"Like you can be dobe" a boy with a dog in his head insulted it was Kiba "you failed twice now!"
Naruto felt anger rise up when a voice entered his thoughts.
"Naruto this is your dad. Listen to your motor-mouth. Mother and become a great ninja!"
"Naruto-kun" Hinata looked at him, his hair covered his expression. Naruto ignored her and went and walked down the stairs.
"Become a great ninja" he muttered to himself but no one heard.
Naruto now stood before Kiba as Hayate stood between them.
"Heh," Kiba clenched his fist. "I feel bad for you, so I'll end this in one punch!"
"Can you" Naruto muttered "can that actually be done"
"Yup" Kiba smirked smugly "against a dobe like you anything's possible"
"Dobe huh" Naruto smirked,
Up in the stands, Yuhi Kurenai, Kiba's teacher, smirked over at Hatake Kakashi, "Looks like your student doesn't belong in this exam, Kakashi-san. Kiba will finish him"
"Ma" Kakashi scratched the back of his head "let us see shall we. Naruto is surprising after all"
Hayate looked at Naruto and Kiba "are you both ready"
Naruto unzipped his orange jacket and took it off. He then threw it away to the side.
"This will be as fast just like Tenten's" he said seriously getting a few attentions. Temari raised her eyebrow.
"That's unyouthful!" Lee yelled when Naruto insulted his teammate.
"Lee" Gai said looking at the fight. He was looking at Naruto's expression there was something there he could feel it.
"Keh!" Kiba smirked "make it hard for me will you dobe" Naruto didn't respond.
"Inuzuka Kiba, Genin rank ninja and the heir of the Inuzuka clan. A clan that are known for their Nin dogs" Naruto thought his eyes narrowed.
"Begin!" Hayate began
"Lets go Akamaru and I am going to beat this dobe" Kiba smirked looking at Kiba when a few gasped. He looked in front of him and his eyes went wide, Naruto was charging at him shocking everyone.
"Meaning without their dogs" he came upon Kiba his speed shocking everyone and punched him hard in the stomach.
"They are nothing!" he poured as much strength as he could on the blow Kiba coughed and spat blood. He fell to his knees.
Akamaru just froze, Kiba didn't order him to do anything and just watched.
"Lets go Akamaru and I am going to beat this dobe"
If Kiba asked him to help beat Naruto then he would have joined.
Kiba was coughing "why you little Aka…." Suddenly Naruto pulled his hoodie and covered his face.
"H…hey!" Kiba yelled moved his hands only to feel both his arms being grabbed by Naruto. The Uzumaki twisted both his arms making Kiba turn around so his back was turned before Naruto. The Uzumaki let go of his hands and grabbed his jacket making sure Kiba didn't see. He then with his right hand gave the Inuzuka heir repeatedly hard punches on his chest. Kiba screamed in pain. Naruto kept punching until the Inuzuka couldn't stand so he started falling. Naruto then stopped and picked him back up by grabbing his right hand. He smirked now Kiba now wasn't tensed.
He then suddenly using both his hands grabbed Kiba's left arm and then.
"CRACK!" everyone heard bones break.
"ARGH!" Kiba screamed so loud a few winced his arm looked to be snapped in half. Naruto then kicked Kiba's left leg now bringing his hoodie covered face to the Uzumaki.
Naruto then uncovered him, taking his jacket off using his right hand. He punched Kiba in the cheekbone hard. It was so hard Kiba's whole body span around. The Uzumaki then threw the jacket away and suddenly while Kiba span his spine now was in serious pain.
Naruto elbowed him hard with his right elbow.
"ARGH!" Kiba flew all the way to the wall. His face hit right on the wall hard.
Like wet tissue his face stuck to the wall as his body dragged to the floor.
Kiba's jacket flew on Akamaru.
Silence ensued. Everyone was just shocked to the core.
Naruto walked and picked up Kiba's jacket "I don't like orange. See you dobe" He just said.
There was only silence when Zaku spoke.
"I never saw someone get their ass kicked that fast. By his own Konoha ally" Zaku whistledlooking at Naruto now "hey! At least put him into the safety position" he joked as Kiba looked like he died right there. Naruto just walked off.
"That was fast" Kankuro with a shocked expression "he beat your record sis"
"I can see that" Temari watched Naruto leave with interest. Gaara did as well,
Hayate was shocked when he got out of it. He then ended the match.
"Winner by knockout" he had to say that because Kiba was surely knocked out "Uzumaki Naruto!"
Medics now came as the peeled Kiba's face of the wall. Everyone saw blood on the wall as the Inuzuka was put on the stretcher.
"Kiba-kun!" Hinata yelled as Kurenai jumped down the railings and went to her student.
Naruto was just walking up the stairs. He joined a group looking at him.
"That was uncalled for Naruto" Shikamaru said frowning "you didn't need to do that"
Everyone soon gathered around him.
"Shikamaru's right there was no need for such brute force" Asuma said as he saw Kurenai coming back while Kiba was taken away.
"He wanted it quick" Naruto answered him "who am I to deny that" Asuma's eyes narrowed.
"Where did you learn to fight like that Naruto" Kakashi asked he knew Naruto wasn't good at Taijutsu.
"Not from you that's for sure" he said draping Kiba's jacket over his shoulder.
"Instinct" Gai said "that was all instinct"
"Instinct, really find it hard to believe that" Ino said she was shaken at how Kiba was beaten. It was brutal.
"We all saw Ino" Naruto said irritating her as he leaned on the railings. This girl was seriously stupid.
"Naruto answer Kakashi-Sensei" Sakura said she was also disturbed and wanted to know where Naruto learned to fight.
"as I said not from him" Naruto smiled at Sakura and Kakashi. Sakura frowned as did her Sensei
"That's Kiba-kun's jacket" Hinata said when Kurenai came now. Her eyes landed on Naruto.
"Kiba has a broken arm. It was broken in two ways. He also has a broken nose and his spine was almost fractured" Kurenai told them the damage. The Genins gasped.
"I don't know where you learned to do such behaviour Naruto" Kurenai's eyes narrowed
"Enough" the Sandaime spoke getting everyone to look at him "Kiba was defeated. This is an exam he knew the rules"
"But…" Kurenai tried to explain when Naruto spoke "look, he fought me and lost. It could have been easily me if I went easy on him. So I wonder would Kiba get any words from you all"
Kurenai didn't respond nor did anybody else.
"I thought so" Naruto finished holding Kiba's jacket.
"The nerve of this brat" Kurenai's eyes narrowed. She saw Kiba's jacket "give it to me"
Naruto raised his eyebrow "you mean this thing"
"That's right" Kurenai held back a hiss
"Hmmm" Naruto analysed the jacket and read the label. It was a small sized jacket "not my size anyway" he then threw at Kurenai who caught it.
"Naruto-kun, Kiba…" Hinata spoke in her usual reserved soft voice.
Naruto looked at her.
"Hey you alright" Naruto smiled cheekily at a little blue haired girl who wore a blue kimono.
The girl suddenly ran off to her bodyguards who came "lady Hinata did he hurt you!" one of them said.
Hinata just hugged one of them burying her face into their leg.
The Hyuuga bodyguards assumed the worse.
"Why you no good brat!" the charged at Naruto who tried to explain "look, I didn't mean it" the bodyguard didn't listen when Naruto ran.
Hyuuga Hinata, this girl stalked him wherever he went ever since that day. She fainted when he got close. Naruto's eyes narrowed slightly. She saw his troubles and didn't do anything.
Naruto didn't even know her so dismissing her was easy. The screen now was changing as everyone looked at it.
"Worry about your match" he just said surprising a few people. Hinata flinched at his tone and looked down. Kurenai's eyes narrowed at him.
Nara Shikamaru vs. Kin Tsuchi
Hayate called out their names when Shikamaru sighed "A girl? Mendôkusai"
Their match didn't last very long either. Kin had had Shikamaru caught in her trap for a few moments, but Shikamaru had pland and and out done her. Using his Kagemane no Jutsu, he forced her to hit her head against the wall. She knocked herself unconscious and Shikamaru was declared the winner.
After Kin was carried away on a stretcher, the screen flashed again, revealing the combatants of the next fight. Sabaku No Kankuro VS Tsurugi Misumi
When this match started it went by quickly. It seemed everyone wanted to beat Naruto's record as Kankuro's opponent Misumi was able to stretch his limbs wrapped around Temari's brother's and threatened to crush him if he did not yield.
When Kankuro didn't relent Misumi crushed his neck only to find out that Kankuro really was puppet surprising Naruto and everyone on his platform.
After that Kankuro came out of the bandages, showing that he had hidden himself inside and had been using chakra strings to control Karasu's movement. Then several spikes had stuck out of Karasu's body and impaled Misumi who was died immediately. It was now: Shino VS Zaku
"I will make this quick" Zaku commented as he jumped down to get the battle underway.
"Good luck Shino-kun" Hinata smiled at boy who nodded "good luck Shino win this" Kurenai smiled at her student who frankly was the strongest in her team.
When the battle started Shino looked at Zaku and spoke "you cannot use your arms. I suggest you forfeit."
Zaku smirked "you're teammate was that bitch that got a major beatdown right. Then my answer is…" he then raised his only working hand "hell no bitch! Zankūha! (Decapitating Airwaves)" he then shot an airwave by which Shino dissolved into bugs when it hit him shocking the man.
Zaku kept doing that until in the end Shino managed to have bugs inside his air hole disabling the technique Shino then warned him not use his technique but the sound ninja didn't listen and in the end his arms became useless making him fall unconscious.
The group were amazed "wow Shino is strong" Ino was astounded while Chouji nodded as he greeted Shino who came up the stairs to meet them
"Well done Shino" Kurenai praised her student who nodded at her while Hinata praised as well
"Yeah well done Shino" Naruto added praise the rookies soon praised the Aburame as well.
Kurenai looked at him and he raised his eyebrow at that.
"Naruto we will talk later" Kakashi said touching his shoulder.
"Why" Naruto asked looking at him
"No reason" Kakashi smiled
"Oh but I thought you wanted to see me. If its no reason then we wont talk later then" Naruto's answer surprised everyone now. That was a smart comeback that they thought he wasn't capable off.
Kakashi was just surprised he had no choice but to ask now "I just want to know what you learned"
"Academy, training etc" Naruto raised his eyebrow "I learned what you taught us"
"I haven't taught you to fight like that" Kakashi pointed out.
Naruto smiled "exactly you haven't taught us anything" surprising everyone again Naruto shrugged off Kakashi's hand that was on his shoulder.
Kakashi had no reply, he was put into a situation that if he pushed for more information he would be seen neglecting his students.
"We will talk later Naruto" Kakashi just said
"Just make sure it's for a reason this time" Naruto added finishing the conversation.
Shikamaru was surprised, Naruto just out talked his teacher.
"Naruto-Baka how dare you say that about Kakashi-Sensei" Sakura was about to put Naruto in his place when the Uzumaki pointed at the screen.
Names have come up and it was….Haruno Sakura VS Yamanaka Ino
Sakura sweated a bit when Naruto touched her shoulder. She looked to see him smiling at her.
"Don't worry Sakura, show Ino what Kakashi-Sensei taught you. He did teach Sasuke after all" Sakura flinched. Naruto looked at Kakashi and smiled "right…Sensei"
The Jounins now knew Kakashi didn't teach them shit. Kakashi closed his book now carrying a serious expression. He went to Sakura and touched her shoulder
"Good luck Sakura" Kakashi gave an eye smile Sakura nodded.
"Good luck Ino" Asuma said his team nodded at her.
"Win this Ino" Chouji smiled, Shikamaru just nodded. Ino nodded back.
Kakashi and Naruto were looking at each other. The blonde was smiling while the Jounin had a serious expression.
"Sensei lets watch" Naruto said "Sasuke has become much stronger with your teaching. Ino wont win then"
"I get it Naruto" Kakashi said ending the matter.
"Then you know we cant talk later as I will have some serious training to do" he responded.
Kakashi was silent as a crypt.
Gai was disappointed, Asuma shook his head and Kurenai looked at Naruto. He was different then she was told.
The fight between the two girls started. Naruto was indeed right witnessing Sakura face off against her rival Ino,was the most pathetic thing everyone has ever seen. Words and weak attacks were exchanged between the girls as they battled with academy style Bunshin(Clone) until Ino managed to catch Sakura with her clan's jutsu Shintenshin no Jutsu(Mind Transfer Technique). Ino was going to force Sakura to say that she forfeited.
"Damn this is pathetic" Kankuro said as Temari nodded Gaara just watched.
"Aren't you going to cheer her on" Kakashi smiled. Naruto gave no reply but just watched. She never cheered for him in fact was against him. Silence was golden and Naruto will be silent. Kakashi frowned under his mask.
He spoke now "She was trained by the great copy ninja. Sakura needs no luck" Kakashi's eyes narrowed now.
"Kakashi what you done was most unyouthful" Gai said frowning "its not something you'll do"
Kakashi felt eyes on him and didn't respond. Everyone just carried on watching.
"Well he did now" Naruto added sensing Kakashi's discomfort god he loved the feeling. The Uzumaki remembered everything and he knew Kakashi was training Sasuke alone. His stupid self was truly stupid but not anymore.
The fight carried on as Sakura somehow kicked Ino's spirit out of her body and they resumed their fight which ended in a double knockout from the equal haymakers the girls gave each other. When it was all said and done and both girls came to a bit later they made up and their friendship was mended somewhat.
"Aww their friends again" Dosu said in a sarcastic and mocking chuckled while Temari smirked..
The rookies minus Naruto were all frowning at the other end of the platform.
"A draw…well look at that she did need luck" Naruto said "well done Kakashi"
Kakashi's eyes narrowed he will speak with his student for this defiance. That he can promise.
Hyuuga Neji VS Hyuuga Hinata now has come up this was the shocking one for team 8.
This was interesting Naruto looked at Hyuuga Neji walking past him.
He remembered this bastard alright.
"Why try dobe, fate has decreed you will never be a Ninja"
His eyes narrowed. Damn it these memories were pissing him off, what the hell was he doing back then.
"Hmph you should give up lady Hinata it is your fate to do so" Neji arrogantly smirked as he looked at her and walked down the stairs.
Hinata looked sad as Kurenai put her hand on her shoulder "Hinata don't let him get to you do your best"
"Okay…thank you" she then went to begin her fight against Neji. She looked at Naruto who turned away from her. She was determined not to let him down "I won't let you down Naruto-kun"
To everyone especially to Kurenai this match was the most impressive fight she has seen as her student and who she saw as a sis fightt like a true Shinobi fighting Neji equally. She looked at Naruto it was all thanks to him. Remembering what he did to Kiba she frowned. However Hinata fought with grace and elegance expected from a clan heir. She had to give credit where it was due.
Alas that wasn't enough as Neji in the end simply overpowered her with the Jūken and expected her to fall but she didn't give up and kept striking.
It was a dance of two strong Hyuugas to everyone but in the end Hinata lost.
She tried to get up and coughed blood shocking Kurenai and everyone.
"Why do you continue to struggle against fate" Neji stated. Naruto's eyes narrowed at what he said.
"I….Unlike you I won't let my fate hinder me…I…I...will move forward" Hinata spoke weakly.
Neji couldn't believe it this weakling dared to say he was struggling against fate. He was the rookie of the year "how dare you!"
In anger Neji rushed at her aiming to kill her by striking her in the heart
Hinata smiled sadly and closed her eyes but the blow didn't come because when she opened her eyes Kurenai was there holding his hand. Neji was being surrounded by the male Jounins
"Hinata well done" Kurenai spoke making her smile a bloody smile "Tha…thank you Sensei" she then fell unconscious
The Jounins let go of Neji once Hayate took over. Kurenai set the girl down "she is critically injured" medics ran to her and done an inspection.
"We must take her to the hospital quick she needs treatment right away" a medic spoke in shock to his partner who nodded and put her on a stretcher.
Kurenai nodded "I will go with you" the medics nodded when she left with the medic.
"Failure" Neji scowled walking off. Naruto's eyes never left Neji's not one bit. The Jounins all went back to their platform.
"Alright the final round shall now begin" Hayate said when two names now came.
Two names came up and it was….Sabaku No Gaara VS Rock Lee
"YOSH! It's my turn!" Lee exclaimed proud making his teacher scream in glee
"Go my student!" Gai gave a thumbs up and Lee jumped down to fight Gaara who was waiting patiently.
When the two Genins started the battle it was the most amazing fight one has ever seen from Genins.
Gaara's sand defence was a shock to everyone except his siblings but Lee's speed once he took out his weights was unbelievable. He amazed even Gaara and even landed a hit on him shocking his siblings.
However that was not enough yet but then Gai with permission allowed Lee to do his trump card. "The 8 gates"
When Lee released all five gates he amazed the whole crowd Naruto started to shake has he had a look of utter inspiration.
"Amazing such a thing can exist" he thought awed. There was so many amazing things, Naruto realised that if he faced Gaara, he would not stand a chance.
"Damn it what was I doing all this time" he was truly foolish playing pranks, running after a pink haired girl and eating ramen all day. While he liked ramen he would waste his whole day on it/
Lee exploded on Gaara as the area became a battlefield shocking everyone even the Jounins and the Hokage.
However soon Lee's body gave in as Gaara had a second defence and that helped him withstand the spandex taijutsu user's attacks.
When Lee fell due to the in pain Gaara used this opportunity to crush his feet and arm as he tried to run away but didn't make it.
Gaara was about to finish him off but Gai stopped him saying he will protect Lee with his life shocking him greatly as Gaara remembered his uncle.
Gai left with Lee to the hospital.
"Man that was amazing" Naruto looked at Neji "you have an amazing teacher. Want to swap."
"No" Neji just replied looking stoic.
"Why not" Naruto pointed at Kakashi "he's the copy ninja"
"He will not benefit me" Neji just said, he didn't want to speak with this dobe.
"Oh my god Kakashi" Naruto looked shocked at his Sensei "he just called you useless. That's violation of conduct right there, what is it called. Something subordinate" he looked at Shikamaru now who answered him "insubordination"
"That's the one!" Naruto said smiling at Kakashi "forget about what he said Kakashi, you're not useless because you'll help me in my training right"
Naruto smirked now he wanted to see this fool's response.
"Ma" Kakashi gave an eye smile "later okay"
Naruto groaned he tried to act like his stupid self "but…Sensei that's what you always say. Sakura and Sasuke got stronger why not me" Sakura now heard the non added suffix to her name and looked at him/
Kakashi's single eye went wide a bit.
"You humans are funny" Kyuubi chuckled he watched everything and was amused
Naruto froze, the fox chuckle brought that fear again and just froze.
"You know what forget it, I'm used to your excuses" Naruto dismissed Kakashi "you don't benefit me"
"Naruto!" Sakura yelled when she froze. Naruto now looked at her, his expression was dark,
"Not now" he just said and Sakura just shut her mouth.
"I will need to speak with the Hokage about this" Kakashi said when Asuma touched his shoulder "What you did Kakashi will need to be told. The boy will tell"
"I…I know" Kakashi just said looking at Naruto
The last match was "Akimichi Chouji vs. Dosu Kinuta".
Chouji lost pretty quickly. He simply couldn't win against Dosu's sound techniques. Even with his "Baika no Jutsu" and his "Meat Tank" he wasn't able to win against the Oto-nin.
"You will tell me everything" Naruto whispered to himself.
The fox heard but didn't reply.
The preliminaries were soon over and the winners stood in a line getting congratulated by the Hokage and briefing them on what's to come.
"Okay now you will get a tab telling you who you will face in the final exams" Hiruzen gestured Anko to get the box of tabs and give them to everyone to pick.
"Alright everyone pick a number" Anko went to everyone who put their hands inside the box and pulled out a tab. Anko winked at Naruto when he got his. The Uzumaki raised his eyebrow at the eccentric woman.
"What are your numbers" Sarutobi spoke. The Genin's answered.
"3" Gaara drones.
"5" Kankuro says.
"7" Temari calls out.
"1" Naruto says.
"9" Shikamaru responds.
"6" Shino responds.
"2" Neji spoke softly.
"8" Dosu said.
4" Kakashi responds in Sasuke's place.
"Okay the match-ups for the Finals are the following : 1st match Uzumaki Naruto versus Hyūga Neji, , 2nd match Uchiha Sasuke versus Subaku no Gaara, 3rd match Subaku no Kankuro versus Aburame Shin, 4th match Subaku no Temari versus Dosu Kinuta finally Nara Shikamaru faces the fourth match victor," Hayate calls out the formation.
"That concludes the second phase of the Chūnin Exams. You each have a month before the Finals to prepare yourselves and get stronger. Any questions?" the Sandiame asks.
"Does the winner automatically get promoted?" Shikamaru lazily points out.
"Not necessarily, the winner of the Finals may not be promoted at all. Likewise the losers might get promoted or no one at all. If you show you have both the ability and mentality to be a Chūnin then you will be recommended for a promotion. From there it will be up to your Kages or council to decide" the Hokage informs them.
This satisfied most of them so when he asked for any more questions no one raised their hand.
"You all may leave and rest and good luck." The Third Hokage waved his hand to conclude the Chunin exams as the Genins saluted and all left.
Sarutobi Looked at Naruto and he knew he had to speak with him in the month interval. Kakashi wanted to speak with his student right away.
"I will get stronger" Naruto looked determined as he now had some serious training to do. Considering he was weak as hell! He was facing Hyuuga Neji. Naruto smirked this will be interesting. But first he needed answers. He will speak with that damn fox.
I will update this tommorrow since the next chapter is done. So review guys okay. As you have read Naruto dislikes how he lived so far. The way Kiba got beaten shows how Naruto doesnt like the way he was treated. Dont worry Naruto will act accordingly, he wont be all nice he has no reason to be. If you want a more descriptive version on how Kiba got beat and where I got the inspiration from. Go to Youtube and search Ultra combo 2 femme fatal thousand pounds at 1:32 minutes. from that fight was my inspiration. Badass huh.
That would be all. So please review okay, cheers.