SORRY TO DISSAPOINT MY READERS BUT THIS IS NOT CHAPTER 2
IT IS A RANT ABOUT MY LATEST REVIEWER NAMED Nessie WITH SAN ON IT
Please don't mind me answering all of HER COMPLAINS IN this "NOT ACTUALLY CHAPTER 2 POST"
Starting with the very first comment…
Semi okay smut. Wow you shouldn't have said Okay if it was just semi because OKAY is already lower than GOOD.
SECOND Terrible grammar…? Didn't you read my PROFILE…? I'm a NOOB when it comes to writing right? Well, I can't blame you if you didn't read IT but AT LEAST I informed you NOW… I'M NOT A PERFECT WRITER. I can create lots of mistakes…
3rd… the smut sucked? Really woman really? It's like just sugar coating… You compliment me and then insult it after? Wow…
4th "but I still think it would have been much more effective to have two really hot rounds, or maybe three, instead of four rounds of barely descriptive crappiness (which, by the way, is not a word, apparently XD), followed by truly shitty just-telling-what-happened."
Said Nessie with xD smile on her face
Ok I'll give u a ¬_¬ look for that… HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! "SHITTY JUST TELLING WHAT HAPPENED…?" THE FUCK WOMAN JUST WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TRYING TO IMPLY HERE…? YOUR AWESOMENESS? YOUR PERFECTION?
NO! IT'S YOUR DAMNED ATTITUDE IN REVIEWING.
5th "Whenever a fic ends with something like "And they stayed up all night" (or the equivalent), I get kinda annoyed. I mean, if you're going to say something like that, show it."
The reviewer said with now I can't tell her face anymore ROFL.
You shouldn't have red those poor FICS then. I bet you even used your annoying charisma to pull the shit out of them with your FUCKING REVIEWS… Really, I feel so bad for all of those people…
6th So… Your point is like you're expecting this fic to BE THAT AMAZING? You even said that 'so that us readers will be like "0_o how can they keep GOING?!" '
No woman… You're the only reader that has that kind of reaction… Didn't you read my REVIEWS? Yours is like:
"OH HI GIRL I CAME TO RUIN YOUR BEAUTIFUL REVIEWS! AND YOUR HORRIBLE STORY MUAHAHAHA"
Seriously, use your fucking head…
7th oh holy fucking llama… IT IS POSSIBLE IN FANFICTION
8TH Your opinion wasn't even correct in the first place… KUROKO TETSUYA IS LIKE OOC HERE THAT'S WHY HE'S NOT SATISFIED NOT BECAUSE OF MY NARRATION. Fuck this… Seriously…?!
9th "but other than that I could totally see why Kuroko wasn't satisfied: It hadn't taken very long, according to how you described the smut, for them both to cum. Which would mean that Kuroko, at least, is completely justified in wanting more."
The annoying woman said once more…
Woww… FYI, EVERY AUTHOR HAS DIFFERENT STYLES/TYPE OF WRITING A FUCKING STORY FOR DARNED HEAVEN SAKE
10th NO… YOU ARE ALREADY REACTING STRONGLY… PLEASE RE READ YOUR MOTHERFUCKING REVIEW WOMAN. And pls SHUSH THE FUCK UP ABOUT MY GRAMMAR MS. PERFECT.
11th "So, anyway, more description! Make it more explicit, and you have a smut-fic. Keep it how it is... I dunno. It barely showed me any pictures (I usually get pictures in my head from reading)."
THE SAID WOMAN TYPED AS I THINK WAYS OF HOW TO KILL HER IN SLEEP
SO NOW WHAT? TELLING ME TO ADD YOUR FUCKING SUGGESTION/DEMAND ON MY STORY… NO FUCKING HELL I WILL LISTEN TO YOU NOW THAT YOU ANNOYED MY HAPPY DAY.
IF IT BARELY SHOWED YOU ANY PICTURES THEN WHY BOTHER READING IT?
YOU EVEN CONTINUED UNTIL THE VERY END JUST TO INSULT THE FUCK OUT OF ME…
12th If you want PERFECT STORIES BUY TWILIGHT, HARRY POTTER, HUNGER GAMES… oh wait *CHECKED YOUR PROFILE*
Oh my… YOU EVEN HATE TWILIGHT? I feel so bad for Stephanie Meyer-sensei then…
OH GOSH EVEN HARRY POTTER MOVIES….
NOW… I'M NOT WONDERING WHY YOU GOT NERVES TO WRITE THIS SHITTY REVIEW…
IT REFLECTS YOUR SELF…
OK SO… IF YOU REALLY WANT PERFECT STORIES
DON'T EVER READ MY STORIES WOMAN… ENGRAVE THAT IN YOUR FUCKING MIND AND GET THE HELL OUT OF MY STORIES…
As you see I'm so OOC everytime I get these Piece of a Crap Reviews.
You're the only reviewer that I want to SLAM DUNK IN THE FACE.
Sorry DEAR REVIEWERS FOR THIS HARSH "NOT ACTUALLY A CHAPTER" thingy…
But these people deserves a proper comeback…
So excuse me…
So what do you expect me to reply then? The matured one? Oh no I'm too young for that, I'm still a high school student who is currently LEARNING everything...
And no Guest-san... I will Continue posting Fics because A lot people expects me too...
It's not embarrassingly immature but A WAKE UP CALL FOR THOSE PEOPLE WHO NEEDS TO LOWER THEIR EXPECTATIONS MORE. THOSE PEOPLE WHO LOVES TO INSULT OTHER PEOPLES WORKS AND TO CRITICIZE IT.
And also There are better ways to point this out so that I can correct them, And that proves what she reviewed was also IMMATURE.
I don't care if I got flamed because I know I'm that PERSON WHO SPEAKS FOR MYSELF. THANK YOU.
*W* Lemme love you... Sorry but, I have no Intention of making another chapter for this story :(
But no worries, maybe I'll make another Soon..? I guess ;)
You know what Darling? Author-san loves u very much and wants to hug u tight while u wait for my upcoming kikuro fic ;) yes, because of u I'll be doing one again :D
Oh my Honey, my sweet sweet honey~ thanks for that review. I love u to bits ok...