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*King's Room*


"Yo Boom! Makinzie's plan totally worked!" I said.

"That's awesome bro! Hey, what are you gonna wear?" Boomer asked.

"I don't know probably something-something awesome! Like what everyone would like to wear before the end of time." I said.

"I have a perfect idea!" Lanny said coming out of nowhere.


I ran up to the tallest room in the castle which was the King's room of course. I don't know what happened to Candace, maybe I just ran faster than her, plus she was wearing heels. When I got there I saw Boomer and Lanny sitting on the bed as if they were waiting for someone. Boomer noticed me while I was trying to gasp for air. Suddenly the bathroom door opened and I noticed Brady wearing a white polo coffin-shirt (Don't look it up Google, I just made that up) you know those shirts people wear when there in a coffin. (To be honest I don't know what they really wear.)

"Makinzie, what happened? You look terrified and scared." Boomer asked noticing I was still exhausted from running.

"What's more scary is Brady's outfit! What happened? Who died?" I asked while looking at his outfit.

"What? He said he wanted clothes that people would like to wear before the end of time." Lanny said.

"Yeah, not when his time is ended!" I said as Candace came in. Candace quickly noticed Brady's outfit.

"Ugh! Did you just steal some clothes from the commentary?" Candace said while looking at Brady.

"How did you know?" Lanny said slowly.

"I don't know what else to wear!" Brady said.

"Brady, just wear normal clothes!" I exclaimed

"This isn't your wedding yet!" Candace added. We then both looked at each other and laughed remembering what we were talking about with Mikayla.

"I guess…" He said as we finally stopped laughing.

"Would you relax, your date is going to start in 5 more hours." Candace said to Brady.

I quickly handed Brady a small bottle with some kind of liquid.

"What's this for?" Brady said while he took the bottle.

"It's for whatever is growing or dyeing in your feet." I said then walked away.

"Hey! My feet are naturally smelly!" He yelled as I left.

*Shredder Beach*


I am setting up Brady and Mikayla's date with the help of Candace, but in fact she was totally annoying! She's always like "No don't move the flowers on the right side!" or "Place that flower petal near the side of the chair!" oh I really wanted to hit her with the chair that time, but I couldn't because apparently she knows more about decorating then I did.

"Would you get rid of that stupid smiley face balloon? It's supposed to be heart shaped!" Candace yelled while she pointed at the round shaped balloon.

"Oh that's not the only stupid thing I really wanna get rid of right now, and trust me it won't be a smiley face." I mumbled angrily.

"What did you say?" She said while placing her hands on her hips.

"Nothing Maam!" I said with an angry grin.

Finally someone called Candace from her TV show which was apparently about to start.

"Oh no, I have to go! One of the reporters got slapped by a seal for asking if his mom was a dog. Hhmmm… should I talk about Mikayla's date?" Candace asked.

"Oh yeah sure! I bet Mikayla would not try to haunt you down or kill you while sleeping." I said sarcastically.

"On second thought, I'll think of something else." She said before walking away. Thank god she's gone! A few minutes later, I just realized it was already 5:30 so I went back to the castle. I slowly pushed the front doors and found Mikayla thinking while walking in circles around the throne room.

*Throne room*


"Mikayla calm down!" I said trying to stop her from walking in circles.

"DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN!" Mikayla yelled. Wow I haven't seen Mikayla this intense since King Bryan left.

"Cuz…cuz, CUZ!"I said finally stopping Mikayla.

"I'm sorry Makinzie, but it's just that…I reeaaallly don't wanna go out with him!"



"Reaaly? Reaally?"

"REAALLY!" Mikayla said in anger.

"Hmm…you sure?"


"Really?" I said with a serious face.


"Really?" I said crossing my arms.

"YES!" Mikayla yelled.

"Really?!" I said raising one eyebrow.

"YES!" Mikayla said.

"Is it, because you're afraid that you might like him back?" I said as quickly as possible.

"YES!-wait I mean no? Yes? Wait what!?" Mikayla said nervously.

"AHA! You hesitated!" I said pointing at her.

"…F-fine! Maybe a little tini-tiny crush." Mikayla said while she sat on the couch.

"HAHA! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! Oh and of course I KNEEEWWW ITTT! That's right Kinkow my cousin is inlo-" I suddenly felt a hand pulling my arm.

"I swear if you weren't only my cousin, you'll be rolling down a deadly hill covered with poisonous spiders going to a direction of a stinky swamp that's inhabited by large alligators." Mikayla whispered in a terrifying and threatening tone as if smoke was coming out of her nose.

I slowly gulped as I slowly moved Mikayla's hand away from my arm. Mikayla still gave me a deadly glare.

"He-he v-very f-funny Mikayla ha-ha y-you almost got me there." I said very nervously and terrified while I slowly walked backwards grabbing my small cross body bag then 2 seconds later… I ran as fast as I can upstairs, screaming at the top of my lungs while waving my hands crazily around the air.

*Kings Room*


A few minutes later I went to check on Brady, to see if he was ready for his date with Mikayla. I went inside the King's room and discovered Brady wasn't there and Boomer was just watching T.V.

"Boomer! Where's Brady?" I asked.

"If I tell you, you probably won't believe me."

"Did he go to school?!" I gasped.

"What no that's insane! What I'm trying to say is he showered!" He said while he turned off the TV.

"Okay…" I said.

"No you don't get it, he showered, 8 times!"

"SHUT UP!NO WAY! THAT'S FREAKIN' IMPOSSIBLE!" I said shocked and surprised.

"YES WAY! He brushed his teeth, and even washed his clothes! then ironed them!" Boomer yelled back.

Then Brady got out of the washroom dressed in clean shiny clothes and his hair was also shining. He wore this blue plaid shirt, black jeans, and black skate shoes.

"Do I look okay?" Brady asked while he approached us.

"Brady! You look like a King!" Boomer exclaimed.

"And you smell like a- like a- Like A PERSON!" I said.

"Why thank you… I think?" Brady said.

*Shredder Beach*


We used the King Cruiser to go to shredder ! The place was amazing! There was a path of red rose petals, a few heart shaped balloons, and there was a dark blue flower in a beautiful vase placed on top of a small square table with a red tablecloth. There was also 2 tall fire torch that brought light to the area.

"Whoa! Fanncccyyy." Boomer exclaimed

"Wow. It's so…so simple and-and nice!" I exclaimed.

"Thank you, I did this all by myself!" Makinzie proudly said.

"Candace helped you didn't she." Boomer said.

"…y-yea a little." Makinzie confessed.

"I can't believe I'm finally going out with Mikayla!" I exclaimed.

"Yeah me neither." Makinzie scoffed.

"Hey Makinzie, is there something we we're supposed to do?" Boomer said.

"Huh? What do you mean?" I said a bit confused.

"I don't know, but it feels like we're missing something." Boomer continued.

"Yeah… me too, I feel like were forgetting something…" I said trying to think of it.

"Well if we both didn't remember it, it's probably not that important." Boomer said.

"Good Point!" Makinzie said.

Authors: Hhmmm…what did they forget to do? I don't know if you guys know, but if you do, try commenting it. I wanna see if you can figure it out.

Disclaimer: This fanfic story called "When Will He Give Up" contains some characters and parts from "Pair of Kings" which is originally created by Dan Cross and David Hoge on Disney XD. This fanfic story is for entertainment purpose only and it is not the official story line (unless Disney wants it to be LOL Just Kidding but you'll never know XD) No copyright intended, Thank you in advance for understanding and not suing me! ^_^