Sorry guys this is not an update.
I'm not a professional. I don't write for a living. Some of you may. I don't. I can take criticism. I will try to fix my grammar issues. Sorry. And for the person who reviewed and said something along the lines of 'I'm reviewing yours why can't you review mine?' I have not been on this site in a long time. The only reason I updated was because, I knew some people actually read this and are waiting for an update. So I updated. But, if you have the nerve to review something like that at least have the courage to put who you are.
Have a wonderful day.