Chapter Eight : Factory of Kisses

dr moustachio girl - what? kurt wagner is captain america? now im lost...

chi - mwahahahaha you're back! this was the high point of your day? awwww, that's so sweet! and i know, i really loved the twilight part too ;P... never liked edward cullen... never liked robert pattinson either... (or whatever his last name was) is was just to... happy, in the end... i loved it too... it was pretty kickass if i don't say so myself;P

booklover1498 - damn... well that wasn't very nice...

xxMusicNinjaxx - :P

irony - OMG! i know... it's difficult... but there are lives outside of fanfiction, they're not as fun... but they are there...

tokyogirl7 - hahahaha... im glad you liked that little peice in there, i was waiting for someone to comment on it ;P and you DID! i have a dog at home, but he only likes me because i give him treats ;P and i love re-reading all the sibling parts... i have brothers myself, and despite the fact that they're roudy, loud, hit on all my friends, distract all my friends, compete with me for EVERYTHING and always tease me... they're fun ;P hahaha

You ever wonder why it is some people sleep better when it's hot out... or perhaps when it's cold? Because... You know... I always slept better when it was cold in my room. And not a little chilly cold... this was full out winter time, store a container of ice cream on my desk cold. It was the only way I could sleep.

Alright, now how about this one? Ever wake up feeling, oh I don't know... alive? Like you're just opening your eyes for the first time, you've got this, energy that no one else could ever dream of matching. And it almost feels endless, like you'll never be able to get rid of it? You just feel on top of the world, like your starting a new...

Okay, now have you ever woke up and broke the foot board when you stretched? Opened your eyes and managed to see every fleck of dust that was floating in the air? Hear the water boiling downstairs on the other side of the house on the stove?

No... ha... well you can imagine my surprise when I woke up this morning. Because I swear to God I planned on sleeping in until like eleven o'clock, and to my surprise, as well as my family's, I was up at seven o'clock.

Mind you it WAS a school day, and I WAS in bed at eight o'clock the night before...

Don't ask.

Now, any sane person would be freaked out by this fact that suddenly... I felt like the effing Ruler of all Awesomeness in the World. But to be quite honest, I really do remembering feeling like this before. It was like an old memory, like breaking the same bone twice. The first time, you pass out, and it hurts like hell, and you think you'll never know greater pain, nothing will ever feel the same. Then second time it happens, you're shocked for like, what... fifteen, twenty minutes, then you remember the pain from before, but you don't remember it hurting this bad, then your like 'oh damn, I remember this!'. It's like dejavu... except it sucks a hell of a lot more.

This, I remember this feeling. Not like it's some freaky weird PMS shit or anything... but I know I've felt this before. Like you've been plugged in over night while you were sleeping. Then all of a sudden you wake up and feel like the god damned energizer bunny on steroids... yeah, that's how I felt right about now.

"Legacy better get her fat ass out of that bathroom if she wants to sleep good tonight." Peter mumbled from his bedroom as I smirked and shook my head.

Oh yeah, super sonic hearing could have some advantages.

"Hey Trav... yeah it's Peter." oh shit, now this could be interesting.

Pause... it was Travis's turn to speak... now him, I couldn't hear. "Naw, bitch wouldn't let me in her pants yet. But her ass is so big I'm surprised she can get it outta them suckers..."

Oh god, previous statement revoked. This was not going to be fun.

"Legacy! Peter's here!" Maria called up the stairs. Thank God... save me now.

"Yeah M, he's kinda been here the whole month since we moved in!" I yelled back down as I shook out my wet hair and grinned at the comfort of my baggy grey sweat pants, and bright orange tank top. Heading towards the stop of the stairs as began to make the long journey to the breakfast table for some food.

"No Legs, I meant Peter Parker." she chuckled as I froze mid step and looked up to meet the amused eyes of the very intellegent, very attractive Hot-Peter.

"Good morning Legacy." he grinned as I smirked and shook my head. Figures, the one time my mother decides to be non informative, is the only time I needed her to be. "I figured since they were having the Science Fair today, and that wasn't really your thing, I'd see if you wanted me to show you around some of the city. If that was okay with you of course Mrs. Kellar." he smiled as I smirked and shrugged my shoulders.

"Oh honey, I'm Maria Jones... Legacy is our adopted daughter." she smiled, saying it as if it were the easiest thing in the world... which in all truth really did seem all that easy. I mean, I was their adopted daughter. I wasn't blood related to them. And that fact shouldn't bother me. Myabe it wasn't the fact that she had said it... maybe it was the WAY she said it. Like it was no big deal. 'Yeah, she's our adopted daughter. It sounds mean, and it makes her feel insecure, but that's okay. Because it's the truth.' Like... I don't know about other adopting parents, but I'm pretty sure the first thing they say to hot guys is, 'oh no, she's not my daughter, she's adopted...'

"I see." he said polietly as I smirked and shook my head. "Well I could wait for you to get ready Legacy, unless you wanted to go to the science fair-"

"NOPE LET'S GO!" I yelled quickly. Like hell I was going to that damned science fair. Besides, a whole day with Hot-Peter... I could live with that. It could be some type of struggle, depending on what we were doing... but anything would be better then the science fair.

"So did you really have a reason for asking me out on this date today?" I demanded as we walked down the street. The heavy car fumes and toxic scent drafting through the space that divided through the two of us. "Because, to be quite honest... you really do look like the kind of person that would enjoy something like that."

"This is a date?" he asked almost incredulously as I smirked and nodded my head. A big grin on his face as I chuckled and continued on walking.

"You don't want to go on a date with me? Because I'm not blowing my own horn here, but I'm a pretty attractive date." I smirked as he grinned and nodded his head, his eyes looking a million miles away as I sighed and looked from his handsome face to the path infront of us. We were off on a side street, not so busy as to have to plow through all of the never ending body's, but busy enough to have witnesses encase Peter decided that I was indeed very, very attractive and wisk me away to do the deed.

Haha, just kidding.

Did you really think I was serious?

Not that it would be really surprising.

"Oh yes, the most beautiful girl I've ever seen." he grinned as I smirked and looked down at my outfit. Blue, ripped jeans that, to be quite honest, highlighted my very long thin legs perfectly. A white hoodie and a red 'Spartans' hockey varsity jacket from our old school. I mean, it wasn't the most fashionable, but it wasn't sweats. And my hair could have been worse. It didn't exactly look the most flattering up in it's usual messy bun, but it looked a hell of a lot better then that sick Brittany Barbie's hair from school. And THAT was saying something.

"I don't know whether to be flattered or offended." I admitted truthfully as he laughed a full, deep laugh and grinned.

"Legs, is everything okay?" he asked suddenly as I turned to look at him and he watched me carefully. Almost as if his eyes were boreing into mine.

"What do you mean?"

"Is everything okay?" he asked again. "Come on... you gotta know what I mean." he laughed as I stopped and turned to look him straight in the eye. Happy that he caught on quickly as his body sized mine up and I smirked.

To be honest, nothing was okay. Nothing would ever be okay. But they couldn't know that, they couldn't understand. No one could. No one would.

I didn't even understand what was going on. I didn't understand why this was happening to me... of all people... me! It was like someone up there had it out for me, and bad...

"Is everything okay with you Parker?" I asked with a smirk as he sighed and gave me a look that suggested I shut up.

"Why do you ask."

"I don't know, why did you ask... you started this." I smirked. "You certainly don't know how to sweet talk a girl on a first date Peter. Are you sure you know what you're doing?"

"I'm not really the best at relationships Legacy."

"And I can't do science to save my life, and I hate big cities. But look... here I am, in the big Apple, registered at a highschool specifically designed for the scientifically enhanced." I grinned. "We are perfect for eachother!"


"Kiss me Peter Parker."


"Kiss me..."

"Umm- now?"

"No Peter, next spring..." I spat back before grabbing both sides of his face and stretching on my toes to plant my lips against his. He tasted like oranges and mint gum... not the best combination... but still incredibly intoxicating. I felt his arm slip around my waist as his hand gently cupped the right side of my face and I grinned like the stupid shit-eater I was.

Pulling back slowly. I took a deep breath as he tried to catch his breath. "You're right... we're over." I cut in nonchalantly as he smirked and shook his head.

"Like hell." he whispered out and pressed his lips to mine again. Completely tearing away every sane thought I had left as I melted into his embrace, completely satisfied with the fact that it was he that was holding me up.

"I could get used to this." I grinned.


"Are you any good at baking cookies?"

"I'm good at buying cookies."

"Fair enough."


"I wasn't sure if I should call rape or not. I only like men kissing me that can successfully provide cookies."

"Well then I'll buy out the whole damn factory."

"I can live with that."

:) did you like it? FINALLY THEY'RE TOGETHER!

just to clear it up, she HAS been in NYC for a little while now ;P

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