So I'm posting this story that I'm so in love with it. I started writing it the second I got the idea and I couldn't stop writing it till I was done.
I really worked hard in it and it was difficult since I was writing in Rose's POV as much as I got the chance. I thought it should be something that not a lot did it. I mean I'm writing a blind girl's POV after all. **No offense intended**.
I'm not sure if it was OOC but you need to know that the real Rose wasn't blind so don't get too upset about that.
This is just a prologue and here's the deal, I need a lot of review to update. And I mean serious reviews 'cause I've story with hundreds of visitor and only eleven review so that totally unfair for me and the effort it took. So please Review and tell me what you think.
Declaimer : VA is owned by the amazing Richelle Mead I only own the plot and the story line and any additional character I wrote.
Summary : Rose is a blind girl by birth, she was never in love or got together with a guy. What happened when she went to visit her cousin and best friend Sydney was her meeting with the womanizer of Sydney's friend Adrian Ivashkov. Spending the summer in Rose's father's beach house made a lot of events and some drama as Dimitri Belikov, Rose's best guy friend, came to spend sometimes with her there before he got married to some girl.What's going to happen to them as they discover things they never knew were exist.
Can You Be My Eyes ?!
I left the building with a big sigh. Finally I was done and my vacation started. I was so excited about this vacation. I needed it.
I noticed a guy running and slammed to a girl. She fell. "Ouch."
"You foolish. Can't you see me running or you're too lazy to move out of the way?!" He shouted at her collecting his papers.
She smiled. "Well, it's the first one."
"What?!" Apparently he didn't notice what she was talking about.
"You asked if I didn't move 'cause I didn't see you or 'cause I'm too lazy. I told you I chose the first one. I can't see, you on the other hand has two eyes but you don't use them at all."
Then she was feeling for her cane that fell from her when the guy hit her. I walked to them and took the cane. She looked at my direction like she could see me, deep brown eyes, eyes I never saw such a pair like those. "Here." I said and put the folded cane in her hand.
"Thank you." She said and turned to the guy who was still staring at her. "Can you stop staring?! You know I'm blind not a freak. There are plenty of me in this world."
She laughed and walked away while feeling out the wall of the building. "Hey can I help you?!"
"I don't know can you?!" She said with a smile. I never saw such a smile.
"I can take you to wherever you want to go." I told her.
She turned to me. "I don't want to trouble you but thanks. I can find my way."
"I don't have anything to do. For real."
She just shook her head and kept feeling out to the next building. She smiled when she find the door. "See, now you can go without being guilty about the blind girl who was lost." She walked in the building leaving me shocked.
Told you it's prologue. So if you want the interactions between our characters and the first chapter then you need to review. A lot. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
Love you a lot.
By happy and in love.
CRAZY TO MY BONES.