Mermaid Melody, the hidden series part 1
A Mermaid Melody Fanfic Re-write by: Over-The-Black-Nexus
Old version 'The Wedding' by: MermaidPrincessLilian
I don't own the original 7 chapters of this fanfic but I do own the other god knows how many chapters that are to come. I'm adding in lots of other ideas from fanfics that I never really want to put out there. This is the first one I'm really writing, so I hope I do a good job. Criticism is welcome, but please, NO FLAMING ME! I will not stand for flaming and I find it mean when others do it to other people here on FF too. I hope MermaidPrincessLilian will like my re-write. She stopped writing it a year ago but I liked the line she was working along. This is going to be on-off uploaded along another fanfic which I'm making, not saying what it is yet, though it is another mermaid fanfic, kind of addicted to writing them.
Nexus: So, please enjoy this we-written and updated fanfic.
Luchia: So… you're doing an Authoresses corner?
Kaito: Why wouldn't she, it keeps her entertained, plus when new characters come into a story, they come here to hang out. We also annoy Nexus about her fanfic ideas and scripts for chapters, messing about.
Nexus: As thanks to a pre-done roulette spin, Nagisa will be doing disclaimers for the first 7 chapters, then we'll see who does it for the next 7. Oh Nagisa…
Nagisa: *sigh* Nexus doesn't own Mermaid Melody or the original 7 chapters of 'The Wedding, it's new name being 'Mermaid Melody, the hidden series part 1.'
Hanon: Aww, there's my cute little m-
-is hit by Mermaid Melody manga book.
Nexus: Every time one of you tries to reveal a story line, I will throw a manga book at you, it will distract you.
Hanon: Oh please, like's that's gonna, Ooooh, Kaito looks hot in this.
-Luchia boiling. Luchia: Hanon! Stop staring!
Nexus: I'm just gonna leave them to fight it out whilst I give you chapter 1. Please R&R at the end, even if you don't have an account now, be a guest and REVIEW ME! I work faster with more reviews…
Chapter 1: An unexpected visit from home
Well, it's the end of pure. The end of a season of torture with Mikeru and Mikaru. Nikora made a suggestion that Kaito should move into the Pearl Piari with the Princesses. We all know the fight with Mikeru is over, but with new dangers always on the horizon, Kaito couldn't afford to be too far away from them. Naturally, he agreed as it would mean getting to live with Luchia. He eventually sold off his apartment and moved in perfectly fine.
Life had been peaceful over the next few months. No sea demons had appeared to attack them, no more girls trying to steal Kaito, they backed off more than usual. Life seemed pretty good now.
Only, life was like this, until that one night I suppose.
On that one night, a mysterious ring…
"I'll get it!" A voice shouted running down the stair case. It was Luchia. She had changed a little in a few months, she'd grown here hair out a little longer so it was down to just above mid-back now yet she still kept her two ribbons in her hair. She was wearing different magenta pyjamas now as well. She ditched her long sleeved top for a vest top instead and kept the bottoms. She was also wearing fluffy pink bunny slippers with chibi bunny faces on them and ears popping out the top.
She rushed down the stair case to open the door to see someone she hadn't seen before. Well the person seemed familiar to her but Luchia couldn't quite put her finger on it.
"Yo, Luchia, long time no see," the strange said.
Luchia looked the person up and down, the figure frowning.
"Luchia, you don't recognise me? Take another good look at me."
Luchia took another look. The figure was a female with sea blue/ green coloured eyes, soft hair the same colour that came down as a soft wavy bob with jaggered straight fringing (look at Mint from Rio Rainbow Gate, then you'll see what I mean). She wore a pretty fluffy light pastel orange coat with a white fur collar and dark purple leggings, more close to black. On her feet were white boots, almost like Luchia's red pair but there were fewer laces on them, making them wider and they also had a black X on the back as well. Just so we all know, she's Meru's sister.
Luchia could only think of one person. She had to be.
"There's no way it's you… Yukairi?" Luchia asked.
A wide smile hit Yukairi's face. Just to be clear. Yukairi belongs to me, she's a mermaid from Luchia's kingdom who hasn't been seen since she helped Luchia get ready for her 'coming of age' Ceremony.
"Princess Luchia-sama, you remember me!" she cried whilst leaping into a huge hug with Luchia, which she gratefully returned.
"I've haven't seen you in ages Yukairi, I hope everyone at home's been okay, yes?"
"Yep they've been fine, in fact-" Yukairi began to say until she was cut short by a loud voice.
"YUKAIRI!" a loud voice shouted from the top of the staircase. It was Luchia's 'sister' Nikora. She had a similar set of pyjamas on as Luchia but her bottoms were like a pair of short shorts. Also, all of her clothes, even the slippers being the same, were a slightly lighter shade of purple than her hair, now tied in a spiked bun as usual.
"Ni-Nikora-sama!" the surprised Yukairi now standing straight before her.
Nikora sighed and smiled at the two. "Honestly Yukairi, took you a while to get here," Nikora began coming downstairs to talk to the two.
"Huh, you mean you knew she was coming all along Nikora?" Luchia asked, slightly annoyed at Nikora.
"Yup, I'll explain more in the kitchen, matters to do with your Kingdom nonetheless."
"Nikora!" Luchia shouted, trying to grab her attention to ask her another question. Sadly, Nikora seemed to be ignoring her. She was about to shout again, until she heard a loud yawn from the top of the staircase.
"*yawn*, what's all the shouting about Luchia, trying to get to sleep seems impos-"
Kaito stopped his sentence when he say Yukairi in the house. Someone he had never seen before.
"Luchia, who's this?"
"Oh yeah, Kaito, this is Yukairi, she's safe to tell secrets too, she's a mermaid from my kingdom and Yukairi, this is Kaito?"
"Kaito-kun? Well then, Kaito, who are you exactly?" Yukairi asked. She felt like she had seen him before somewhere.
"Well, I'm Domouto Kaito, last Panthalassa Prince of the Seas and Luchia's boyfriend. What about yourself?"
"Like Luchia said, I'm a mermaid from her kingdom. I work as one of the many servants in the palace but I was one of the more closer to Luchia. We're pretty close friends back ho-"
Yukairi was cut short once more. People in this place need to stop being cut short, they're all tired though so cutting short happens a lot.
"Yukairi, Luchia! Get your butts in this kitchen now. We have really important matters to discus." Nikora shouted as loud as she could.
"Coming!" the both replied running into the Kitchen.
"Kaito," Nikora also said. She'd hear Kaito's voice in the hallway and thought his timing was almost too perfect. "Since you're here, we can discus even more important matters as well, SO GET YOU'RE ASS IN HERE!"
Kaito just stood there, his ears getting over the ringing sound her shouting voice left. "I'm coming," he replied sounding really tired.
Once Nikora had gotten everyone sat down in the kitchen, she gave everyone a drink of tea before beginning to discus the important stuff.
"Well, I was going to start with asking about the conditions of Luchia's kingdom back home but now Kaito's here… hey Yukairi, how well are preparations going?
"Preparations, you told me to hold them off until they both agreed to the, thing." Yukairi simply replied.
"Wait, what thing me and Kaito need to agree to?" the curious Luchia asked.
"Well, since you're a princess and Kaito is a prince of the sea, you're both old in the mermaid world for marriage. And as part of your requirement as a Mermaid Princess Luchia, you're just going to have to marry Kaito," Nikora said smiling as much as she could.
Nexus: Sorry if chapter 1 seemed kind of short. This is my first ever fanfic like I said.
Luchia: I wouldn't worry too much. You've left it at a point that you feel is right until the next chapter starts.
Kaito: We will warn you now, most chapters are not overly long but in the future, some chapters will be a lot longer. This chapter was kind of just the basics. More information will be given in the next chapter about stuff.
Nexus: Thank you Kaito.
Everyone including Rina and Masahiro now too: See you all in the next chapter.
Nexus: Give it a few days, maybe next Tuesday!