So when I asked for responses to my question, I received reviews from about 1/30th of you, mostly telling me to do whatever I wanted to.
So, as you may have noticed, I started this story again.
It's so much better now and I am much happier with it. If you followed/liked this story, I really recommend reading "Alternative Rebirth" , which is a much better-written version of this, and will contain the same characters and scenarios. Don't you worry.