I've come to a dead-end in this story. I'm going to end this story and rewrite it sometime in the (hopefully) near future. I AM NOT putting it up for adoption.
I know where I want to go, but I screwed up some details, so that can't currently happen without me having to go "and suddenly...!" or "then this really unlikly thing happened right when it needed to."
If you would like to be notified when I post the rewritten version, do not remove this story from your favorites/following list. I'll PM you guys when I do.