This is my first story so it kind of sucks

Jayy POV
Oh, just look at him. He is so beautiful. I wish I could tell him how I feel. I sighed as I got up and went to my room. Sometimes I can't stand to be near Dahvie. See, the problem is that Dahvie is straight. He could never love me.

Dahvie POV
Jayy has been acting so strange lately. I should go see what's wrong. I got up and walked to Jayy's room. I knocked.
"Hey Jayy, can I talk to you?" The door opened slowly and I could see Jayy. He looks like he'd been crying.
"What's wrong Jayy-bear?" He looked at me sadly as he walked to his bed. I crawled into bed with him. I held him as he cried. After he was done he looked up at me and said "Dahvie, if I tell you what's wrong, will you promise not to hate me?"

"Oh! Jayy I could never hate you."

"Dahvie," he sighed "I really love you; I know you're straight but just seeing you with all those girls. It just kills me!" He said as he hid his head into my side. I sat and thought about what he said. I honestly like him too but I've been too scared to admit it.

Jayy POV

"I really love you; I know your straight but just seeing you with all those girls. It just kills me!" I hid my face in his side. I hope he doesn't hate me. I started to silently cry as he just sat there and petted my head.

"Jayy, I love you too. I truly do. I just haven't been able to accept that i feel in love with my best friend" he said as he kissed the top of my head.

Should I continue writing this?

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