Shout out to Captain Fox 77 for some pretty spot on criticism about the tiny glimpses of Kyuubi. I decided to change a few things about that last scene, so this chapter is mostly new stuff. And another shout out to UlforceDiizoid,as well as everyone else, that took the time to point out mistakes.
Breathless, Naruto dropped his burning cheek to her damp shoulder blade, and kissed her gently before lapping up the stream of red liquid rolling down her back.
It was a satisfying thought, but it startled Naruto enough for him to jerk slightly upwards. "Oh my God, I bit you!" He cried out with horror. "You're bleeding." He told her, but she didn't seem to be listening as she continued to whimper and shake against him. "Sa-Sakura-chan?"
Naruto hadn't noticed that she was still writhing beneath him. Her ass was still pushing backwards, grinding against his semi-hard cock that was threatening to slip out, but the movements of her hips were so small they were almost non-existent. It was like multiple aftershocks were forcing her to move against him.
He noticed then how deathly quiet she was. "Sakura-chan?"
She was so quiet for so long that when she did let out a long moan, it was more of a gasp for breath. "Ooh…fuck." Her choppy voice made him blink with surprise.
"Are you still coming?" Naruto stopped as she turned her face towards him.
"Fuck, fuck, fuck," she cried out as if it was all she could manage. That, the walls of her vagina clenching tighter around him, and rush of liquid that seemed to gush out let him know that she was still having an orgasm.
He shook his head in disbelief. He was good, but he wasn't that good. Especially since he'd acted like an untrained school boy most of the time. He dawned on him that she must have been even more turned on than he was. The thought excited him and he dug the fingers of one hand into her hips to help her, lifting her onto him, and his other hand wrapped around to rub against her clitoris. This time her scream shook the walls of his bedroom and she reared back, only his chest against her back keeping her from falling. He used his cheek to nudge her hair out of the way and trailed enthusiastic kisses against her ear, her neck, her jaw.
Her arms reached back and warped around his neck, pulling his face into her. Thumbing her clit he let two fingers span down so he could insert the tips of them into her. The added fingertips against his cock were enough to make him surge forward, but then she let out a gust of air and stilled. Her arms slipped from his neck and her knees dropped like jelly. She dropped against the bed, completely limp and exhausted. Her face turned so that the side of her face was visible to him as she panted softly.
He waited for two minutes before pulling out. As much as it pained him to do so, he didn't want to hurt her, but he still let her ass cushion him as he bent down to kiss her between her shoulder blades. "Are you okay?" He whispered between each peck.
She let out a laugh. "That was amazing!" She screwed her back around, lifting her upper body up to look at him, her face alight with happiness, glowing even. "I don't think you have full control of Kyuubi either!"
He frowned, looking at her curiously. "Why do you say that?"
"Your eyes tinted red and your finger nails and teeth got longer," she said.
"It's not that I was out of control. We just wanted the same thing," he said, worrying his lip as he settled on the bed beside her. He reached forward, only hesitating for a second, before tenderly brushing her damp hair out of her face.
"The same thing?" She raised an eyebrow as she sluggish pushed herself onto her side so that they faced each other. "To—um—have sex with me or to bite me?"
His mouth curved upwards, noting her embarrassment as she spoke. When she was turned on saying 'fuck' wasn't a problem, but when she wasn't she could barely manage saying sex. It was so cute he wanted to squeeze her to him. "Both really," he said and paused as he dropped his head against his folded arm. "Did I hurt you?"
She shook her head. "No, it just stings a little. I'd try and heal it, but I can't move. Plus last time I couldn't heal it."
"You definitely can't heal this one. It's a mating mark." He looked at her nervously. "I-I didn't make it permanent, at least I don't think Kyuubi made it permanent, but it will be there for awhile. I hope that's okay."
She gave him a dreamy smile and raised a limp hand. "I'm weak as a kitten. You'll have to come get me. I really want to snuggle, under the covers, with you."
His brows furrowed together at her obvious lack of response. Was she trying to pretend she hadn't heard what he'd said? "So, is it okay? Do you understand what it means?"
She raised a finger and pushed it against his lips, silencing him. "It is okay. I do know what it means. If it is permanent, neither of us can stray, and we'll be together until we die. If it isn't permanent, we'll make it permanent."
He was stunned. "What?"
Sakura laughed and shook her head. "You just don't get it do you? I am in love with you. I love you. I have for a long time."
He couldn't stop the smile tugging at his lips. "I'm slow sometimes," he said with a shrug, slowly scooting off the bed and reaching for her. Lifting her up into his arms he walked to the head of his bed, turning down the covers before placing her underneath them. "I think you might have to tell me daily, hourly even."
When he gave her a devilish grin, she licked her lips, and pulled at his arm, making him slip under the covers with her. "I think I can do that," she said and stopped suddenly, her eyes widening as he straightened out against her body, feeling his erection that never really went away. "Again?" she asked with surprise.
"What can I say?" He shrugged nonchalantly. "You make me hot Sakura, without even trying. You always have."
With a short, startled laugh, she dropped her head against the soft pillow and flipped part of the blanket over her head, scooting down the bed. "What are you doing?" he asked.
When he felt her hand touch his thigh he jolted with surprise. The lump shape her body made under the blanket slithered, until she was between his legs. Curious, Naruto nipped at the covers with his fingertips and a cry lodged in his throat at what he saw. Her mouth, hovering over his dick as her cocky smirk and almost glowing green eyes met his. Snuggling could definitely wait.
Again as it stands, this story is complete, but I am writing a stand alone chapter of Naruto/Sakura in the near future. I haven't started it, but I have made the decision to write it, for those of you who wanted more anyhow. Hope you all enjoyed the rewrite and additions.
Thanks so much to everyone who took the time to review. I try to respond individually to them, but sometimes I forget, so here's the big 'thanks for reading.'