Daughter of a Phantom: Deleted Scenes
(More Coming Soon)
Hello fellow Authors and readers of FanFiction, well it's been one heck of a year, and exactly one year ago, I published the first chapter to a little story of mine. And in that one year, not even I could for see that it would become one of the most reviewed, favored and followed Danny Phantom fanfictions of 2013. I am just blown away from its success and I owe it all to you. And by you I mean you, the authors and readers. If it wasn't for you Daughter of a Phantom wouldn't be what it is today. Thank you, all of you who love this story and are eagerly awaiting the sequel; Mother of a Phantom. So to celebrate the one year anniversary of Daughter of a Phantom, its success and to bring more enjoyment and entertainment to my loyal fans; I will be giving you special scenes. These little segments are what I had originally planned to have in the story but I ultimately cut or changed because I decided against it, thought of a better idea or something else. But to celebrate, I typed some of them up anyways, so I hope you enjoy these bonus scenes, and if one of these scenes is liked enough, I might, just might, considering on which one is liked the best, I just might edit Daughter of a Phantom to include it. So without further ado, here are my Daughter of a Phantom, original ideas, alternate scenes and deleted scenes, or as my friend Blak-Ice would say, Daughter of a Phantom EXTRAS!
But Before I begin, I want to give you a list, the scenes in this list were originally going to be in Daughter of a Phantom, however, these scenes were cut when I decided to make sequels, therefore, the scenes listed below are ones you will not be reading because they will in fact be in the sequel.
.Youngblood meeting Dani
.Dani practicing and training with her father
.Dani having her first period
.Danny being interviewed
.The Ghost Hunters trying to study and capture Danny at every turn
.Trying to get Dani education
So those are some of the things I wanted to have in this story, but I'm saving for the sequel, so use your imagination if you must have an idea of what they may be like. Otherwise you will have to wait until Mother of a Phantom comes out, please don't ask me when, if you want a date, the earliest I can have the first chapter out is between March and June, however now you can enjoy the scenes I wrote for you.
Deleted Scene: I was originally going to have Danny, on the first night of being Dani's father have a nightmare of him failing to protect Dani, but then I decided to cut it because I could then use it if I ever decided to have Nocturne return, and because he's showing up in the sequel you will actually see this scene in the sequel. But I will give you my original version, the one that will show up in the sequel will basically be the same, but told in a different way. So this is a kind of deleted scene sneak peek thing, anyways enjoy.
Danny suddenly found himself in a dark room, complete darkness, with the only source of light being his own glow. He didn't remember coming here, he didn't even know where here was, the last thing he remembered was putting Dani to bed. Suddenly a dreadful sound filled the air, catching his attention, filling him with dread as his advanced hearing picked up the sound, it was his daughter.
"DADDY, HELP ME!"
Danny felt himself become full of dread and fear, he turned in the direction of the sound, there was a faint light almost being consumed by the darkness that surrounded it. Danny started to run towards the light, but he felt the closer her got to it, the farther away it became. He mind was racing with worry and anger, fear and rage, who in their right mind would go after his little girl, okay frankly every one of his enemies, especially Plasmius. Danny got closer to the light, he lunged towards it, and the light enveloped him. Danny then fell to the ground, which was uncomfortably cold. Danny looked to see where he was, only to see a familiar and horrifying sight.
Danny stood up to find himself in Vlad's lab, his computer running data and his tools and experiments working in the back ground. Danny turned to look in the center of the lab, and his eyes fell upon the one thing he didn't want to see or believe. Danny walked over to the centre of the lab, his eyes locked on Dani, who was strapped into a table, cut up and covered with Ectoplasm. Danny was overcome with sadness and shock, then Dani noticed him, she was still alive, but barley.
"You lied."
What… Dani don't speak I'll get you out of he-"
"You lied to me, you said you wouldn't let him take me, you promised me that you wouldn't let anything harm me."
"Dani, I..I.."
"You said I was your daughter, that you'd protect me no matter what, you lied, just like Vlad did, you're the same."
"Dani I'm nothing like Vlad, I'm your father, I'm sorry I failed you, Vlad's going to pay, he's not getting away this time, no one is ever going to hurt my baby girl ever again, I love you Dani, come on I'm getting you out of here."
Dani just looked at her father; Danny could feel tears forming in his eyes. He had no memory on how this happened or how he got here, but his daughter was hurt, hurt by the same monster he said he'd protect her from, this was all his fault. Danny just looked at his daughter, the next few seconds were complete silence, and Danny was waiting for his daughter to respond to him. Dani just looked at her father, and gave her answer in almost a whisper like voice.
"Liar!"
The words stung in Danny's heart, he backed away like he was in pain. Seconds later Dani dissolved into ectoplasm and poured onto the lab's floors, forming a puddle of green goo around Danny. Danny looked down, he could see his reflection in the liquid, but it wasn't his, it was his. Danny fell back in surprise and fear only to smack into the back of a wall. Danny turned around to see his shadow being projected onto the wall; then it started to change, until it resembled a familiar vampire looking figure. Seconds later the shadow of Vlad was standing in front of Danny and his menacing laughter filled the air. Danny was petrified in his shock and fear, and it all came to an end when the shadow came closer to him, and he was enveloped in darkness once more.
Danny jolted awake; his sudden movement sent him crashing to the ground. Danny picked himself off from the ground, his breathing rapid and a little sweat running down his skin. Danny looked around as he gathered his surroundings, his memory coming back to him. He was in his room, he had fallen asleep in his chair, and Dani was safe and sound, still tucked into his bed and sleeping. Danny breathed a sigh of relief; everything he'd been through was just in his mind, just a dream, no not a dream, a nightmare.
Deleted Scene: What happened after, I cut this scene because this scene felt like it could be cut and wasn't needed, also I didn't need to make my story anymore darker than it was.
The agent ran off, happy that he was going to be able to hold his little girl again. His joy filled heart was suddenly cut short as something else replaced the feeling in his heart; joy was overcome with the long, cold grip of death. With that the felling of death overcame and consumed him.
Danny watched the agent fall to the ground, blood pouring out of the hole in his chest. Danny turned around to see Vlad standing on the stage, his hand raised and smoking, having just fired a ghost ray. Danny felt even more rage fill him, now Vlad has left a poor innocent girl without a father, Danny's eyes refocused on Vlad, and he continued to walk towards the monster, preparing to rid the world of him forever.
And Just for Comedy: XD
The two Halfa's charged at each other, but it was Danny who got the upper hand as he grabbed Vlad's fist and turned it away, before delivering a blow to the older Halfa's face again and again and again. Danny then dropped to his knees, what he was about to do would usually be uncalled for but he didn't care it would put Vlad in pain. Danny raised his fists and started to use his enhanced speed and strength to punch Vlad's crouch multiple times, like he was punching one of those punching bags used in training rooms. Vlad's face was replaced with a comedic face of pain, he managed to lift his knee and hit Danny in his head sending him back, allowing Vlad to retreat, albeit barley as his hands went to his crotch.
"I'm in pain!" Vlad screeched in a high pitched voice.
The next second two duplicates of Danny appeared beside Vlad and grabbed him. Danny, the real one at the other end used his Ecto energy to create a flat surface above the ground. He then looked at the duplicates and nodded at them. The two then forced Vlad down until he was lying on the flat surface of the construct. They then used their increased speed and strength to slide Vlad across the surface, Vlad was screaming all the way, as his face collided with Danny's steel fist at the end which was suddenly flying towards him and bringing him to a stop as the construct vanished beneath him. Danny then proceeded to start kicking Vlad again and again.
Deleted Scene: Danny's Speech, I originally had Danny give a speech before the GIW during the battle between him and Vlad when they tried to kill him again. I cut it because I plan on doing one later, plus Danny was dying he doesn't have time to make speeches. Plus some things would have needed to be expanded upon and it makes Danny to overpowered.
"Like I said I'm not just any ghost, you like to think of yourselves as experts on ghosts and your expertise is that they are nothing but dangerous filth that must be exterminated, yet ever since I appeared you've noticed things about me, that I'm different, I don't act like other ghosts, I'm a mystery, and you've been wondering what makes me different, what's so special about me, even though the answer has been staring you in the face this whole time, right under your nose, the answer to why I'm so special is because I AM Different, I am stronger, faster, smarter and more powerful than any other ghost who has ever existed or likely ever will and my power increases every day. The reason everybody tries to kill me is not just because they hate me or I stop their plans although that is a factor for some, but because they fear me, they fear what I am and what I might become, I have walked in futures where the world has been destroyed by a being of pure evil, I have dethroned kings and tyrants, defeated a madman who controlled reality, I've fought everything from monsters made of meat to an overgrown root, living weather to the horrors of Pandora's Box; I have saved Amity, the world and The Ghost Zone so many times, I never stop, I never stay and I never ask to be thanked. I have seen things you would never believe, I've sacrificed many things for what I do and I know things, secrets that mustn't be told, knowledge that must never be spoken, and you still try to trap and kill me, didn't anybody tell you that there's one thing you never put in a trap, if you value your continued existence, if you have any plans about seeing tomorrow's dawn, the light of a new day there is one thing you never, ever put in a trap, me, that's the reason why I'm different, I'm a mystery, a question, hiding in plain sight, the question that has been a thorn in the side of every ghost hunter and expert for the past three years, who and what is Danny Phantom, I am Danny Phantom and I'm not just any ghost!"
Alternate Scene: Vlad's original fate was different, I was originally going to have Danny use the Ghost Gauntlets to separate Vlad's ghost half from his human half, using the thermos to contain Vlad's ghost half, while leaving the human Vlad to the authorities or GIW. I abandoned this idea after realizing that the gauntlets were from the alternate future and I would have to come up with something to explain them existing here, true I could say Danny kept them but then they wouldn't exist in the first place and…timey whimey. I also decided it was good enough just having Vlad spend some quality time with Dan, here's that scene as it would have played out.
"Well I must give credit where it's due Daniel, you've defeated me, come on then, end it."
Danny raised his arms into the air; the silver gauntlets were glowing with green energy. Danny's eyes were focused on Vlad, who was on his knees in front of him, badly bleeding and beaten. Suddenly Danny's fists opened and long, razor sharp, silver spikes ejected from the fingertips of the gloves; while this was going on Danny's mind was somewhere else, he was remembering this, this felt all too familiar. In another place, in another time Vlad had used these same weapons to remove Danny's human emotions after the loss of his family and friends, which then lead to horrific and tragic results. But as Danny started to doubt this, he looked at Vlad's eyes, which were of red, glowing, weak, but still bright with all his inner and vile evil. Vlad has had ghost powers for twenty two years, twenty two years he had been using them for his own evil intentions and desires, Vlad had used them for the wrong purposes, for too long, he will not use them wrongly again, not one second more, he was going to make sure of it.
With that Danny brought his hands down, Vlad screamed in pain as the ten long daggers pierced his body, creating even more holes for ectoplasm to pour out and stain the ground. Amity screamed in shock and horror, but Danny wasn't done. Danny used his remaining strength to lift Vlad off his feet, into the air, and started pulling. What Amity saw next they would never forget. They saw the evil being suddenly split into two people, Vlad Masters, billionaire and mayor of Amity fell to the ground on the left, while the evil ghost Vlad Plasmius fell to the ground on the right.
Additional Note:
When I was deciding what Danny's trials would be, the one that was most difficult for me to work on was The Trial of murder as it had switched ideas and elements so many times. I originally intended Damon Grey to be the one Danny has to kill, which would have made Valerie chase him through the city, recklessly causing destruction in order to kill Danny, now I will give you guys this chapter, but it won't be today, because I will really be writing two chapters, I will be adding them when they are done.
My Inspiration:
.The reason I wrote Daughter of a Phantom was for one reason and one reason only, it was a story I wanted to hear. Those of you who read my authors notes would have heard this all before but; I was a recent new addition to FanFiction, I was writing my own stories and reading others, I always saw Dani as Danny's daughter and I was glad that I found out I wasn't the only one, there was a whole genre of these fics labelled as Daddy Danny. I read them but there wasn't any that I wanted. What I wanted was a story that truly captured the characters and likeness of the show, one that had character development, relationships, an amazing story and something unique and the closest I found were Dani's Back by Jennythe3 and 2 Halfa's Plus 1 Human Equals a Family by Blak-Ice. These two stories helped inspire Daughter of a Phantom and one day just for the heck and fun of it, I typed up the first chapter and posted it, the rest is history.
I check its progress a couple hours later and I was blown away, it was then I decided that I would finish writing this story as I realized that I wasn't alone. I wasn't the only one wanting to hear a story like this, there were many others; FanFiction is a place for fans to write their own stories of their favorite things weather being movies, cartoons, games or anime. This whole time I was waiting for someone else to write the story I wanted to hear, why should I wait, this is FanFiction, so I sat down and wrote Chapter 2, than 3, than 4 and you know the rest. Then there's the fact that so many people love this story, and so many big names included. Well I've said this before and I'll say it again, as long as you guys love and are willing to take the time to read and review my stories, I will be around to tell them.
I would also like to apologize to codywoodward.5382 and Novak94, these two have done fan art for my story and I forgot to include them a couple chapters ago, I'm so sorry, but here you go, here are the links (hopefully) that will take you to their art. Just take the spaces out, I don't know how the links really work.
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So to end, once again thank you all, if you haven't already please favorite, review and follow, I suggest you follow because then you'll know when the sequel comes out
The Storymaster1000
*Update: Shortly after posting this Extras part I took a look at my plans for the sequel and...I finished planning it, that's right I have planned out all 60 chapters, my writing and creative talents and my enjoyment of it took over and I just finished planning out what I will do, I am at the very point I was a year ago when I posted the first chapter, so the good news is, at the moment I am typing up the prologue and first chapters of Mother of a Phantom and, if everything goes well and I finish The Hunger by the end of the month and Thirst after that, I can say that the first Chapter of Mother of a Phantom will be released the latest on April 3rd 2014, wait a minute isn't that the 10th anniversary, it is, okay then
*Update 2: I have finalized my decisions, I really, really want to start writing Mother of a Phantom, so I have decided, through thought and coin flipping, to first of to wrap The Hunger up by the end of the Month, then start writing Mother of a Phantom over February and March ready for it's April release, I have decided that I'm going to hold off on Thirst until October due to it's content, in October I will be taking a slight break form Mother of a Phantom to finish Thirst, so this means I can hopefully release Mother of a Phantom weekly.
Mother of a Phantom: Coming on April 3rd 2014