This is my second LOTR poem, and I like it a whole lot more than my first attempt! Please review! Any constructive criticism would be welcome!

READ: No intended slash! I realize the word "love" is used, but it's not that kind of love! They are just closeclose friends!



Here I sit in a house of joy

Where the fair elves dwell

But joy has no place in my heart

While you are not well

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I know you've never known such pain

As you did that night

And no one knows if you'll pull through...

Please come back to the light!

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My tears are falling fast and thick

As I hold onto your hand

You can not leave me master, dear!

Not ever, do you understand?

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I need you here beside me

I just can not live without

I love you more than life itself

Though I've just figured that out

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Your skin is cold to the touch

And your face is deathly pale

Your eyes are closed in slumber

You look so thin and frail!

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It seems that you will never wake

Until one day you do!

I'm overjoyed, but not surprised

As I knew that you'd pull through

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Your blue eyes sparkle once again

Your hand feels warm in mine

You give to me a lovely gift:

A smile like pure sunshine

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Here we are in a house of joy

And it fills me up inside

I make a promise I intend to keep:

I will never leave your side