My last story didn't end to well, all my files were deleted, right when I was rewriting them to. But oh well, look to future as they say! So, as you are most certainly aware, I will be using all previous advice I had received from the nice people on this site. Just want to say, E, Thanks for the advice, I was rewriting the chapter if my last story based on what you said, and I appreciate your constructive criticism. Butt please be aware to the rest of you, I am still learning. I appreciate any and all advice. Thank you for your time, and please be patient with me.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or Asuras wrath.
The fight was going so well. Augus had Asura pinned to the earth, running his sword through him from orbit. Far fetched as it may be, gods can basically do anything, so stabbing someone from orbit doesn't seem impossible to them. But, then, Augus did not take into account Asura's hidden power. He watched as Asura gathered his Mantra, and struck his wsord snapping it in half, destroing his remaining arm. Augus had hit the ground, and the sword flew out of his hands. Asura had grabbed it with his teeth, losing his ither arms in the battle with his teacher, and stabbed him with it, cutting him open for extra measure. Augus dropped to the ground, and Asura turned to his teacher, with rage in his eyes.
"Heh heh heh, yes... That was one hell of a battle." Augus spoke weakly. "What now? Where will that anger take you?" As he was talking to Asura, the girl from the village Asura protected was coming to the crater where they were in.
"You are not me..." He spoke again. "Yet you continue to fight..." It was at this point that the girl had appeared on the top of the crater. Asura had sensed her and looked.
"Baruma." She said in the language of the locals. Asura and Augus didn't know what that meant, but still accepted whatever she said.
"You no longer need my training." He said as he raised his hand towards Asura. "The one who stands in the end... Is righteous." He gave a weak chuckle. "Asura... Walk the path that you must." And with that, he lowered his hand.
Augus was dead.
As his body started to vanish, Asura only stared. He would do what he must to rescue his daughter.
But this story is not about Asura. It is bout his pupil in another world. A pupil with countless amounts of potential and power, which was wasted as his family sought to neglect his training. This is the story of the pupil he taught, and his adventure. But mostly, the development of him as a person. He will find out if he is just the son of a hero, the brother to a princess, and the demon of a village, or if he is the hero the world needs, a person who is free of hate, and the student of a Demigod.
This pupils name was Naruto.
Clearing, Land Of Grass.
Augus had woken up. He was sure he had died in fighting Asura, but here he was. Was it all a dream? Perhaps. He felt considerably weak for some reason. Opening up his chest cavity to look at his Mantra core, he found that it was only giving off a faint glow instead of the beacon it usually was. This could only mean one thing.
Augus was low on Mantra.
He could also no Mantra flowing into him. That was not surprising. He was a creature made of metal and robotics, he could not generate Mantra, only take it into himself. That was the thing about humans, they had the ability to use Mantra, but the old laws forbid it. Since he was using Mantra to just stay alive, he would soon die. If he didn't fight he could delay that process. But Augus had other plans. If he was going to die, he would pass on his teachings. But not to some fool who didn't deserve it, only someone with the right heart and mind could learn from him. And he was pretty sure that he would not have a lot of options. The only person who passed is requirements was Asura.
With that in mind, he had no time to lose. Augus would not be forgotten. He set out to explore, to search for his next pupil, and teach him the ways of the Mantra warrior.
So what do you think? It has been short, but keep in mind it was intro chapter. I don't want to hear any reviews on how short it was. As time goes by they will get longer. next chapter is about Naruto, and it might or might not take time for me to write it. I will use any and all advice given to me from my last story and this one. You can sort of say that my last story was training.
Please excuse any spelling and grammar errors.
Until Next Time!