Lemons in the following fanfic... Don't like it don't read it(i heard writing lemons improve you descriptive writing so I'm trying it!)this is my 1st lemon so don't kill me!I am not very good at this so don't blame me if this is rubbish!PLEASE REWEIW!Warning Rape scenes!

Moto-Moto's P.O.V.

Gloria looked around...

She was supposed to meet Melman here, but he was nowhere in sight and suddenly there was a dead weight on her back and something warm and hard pressed against her thigh a she suddenly knew what was happening!

"Moto-Moto! Get off me!"

"No,No my sweet,I have waited weeks for this ,my sweet!"he muttered into her ear.

'get off!My virginity is for melman and melman alone!''Screamed Gloria...

Suddenly he plunged in to her and 'popped her cherry'! She screamed in pain and pleasure though she tried to force herself not to enjoy it as her cummed into her and screamed his ecstacy to the heavens .His cum going deep inside her,threatening to fertalize her eggs, getting dangerously close...

"GLORIA!''Shouted a voice behind the two

Gloria looked up and saw melman!

''Melman...I'm sorry... he raped me..."

''HE!HE!" chuckled Moto-Moto...

Tree months later...

''Push Gloria!''Shouted Melman as he hoped desperately that they weren't Moto-Moto's...

''two beautiful cross-breed( Giraffe X Hippo )"...

They weren't THAT hippo's kids!

Sorry if that was short but it was my 1st! I didn't quite Know what to write but it was OK I guess...

PLEASE REWEIW!No flames please!positive helping critisizing is ok...

Thanks! Tigerlilykitten out!PEACE!