Jasmine's Day Off-Credits
Most of the credit for this story goes to Veronica Vera the author of my favorite comic Bittersweet Candy Bowl and to Oliver Bareham, the person who edits the pages and maintains the BCB site. They make a great team.
This story is currently incomplete, but I'll do my best to have it finished in a week or so.
It is also kind of violent and if you get squeamish while reading about stories with violence then avoid reading any further.
I created this story to be able to experiment with fight scenes and hospital scenes, so don't be surprised if there is a surgery or more in this story.
The story is meant to be read half drama/serious and half comedy/lighthearted. Loaded with surprises, tears, and I guess love/hate relationships or something similar to that.
Comments are welcome because I apparently like talking to people.
No prologue this time, just read and enjoy/hate/ignore this story.
Oh, I have to warn you about chapter 15, do not read that chapter yet. If you do, then don't ask me to post chapter 16 right away. I can't do that since it seems weird to me... then again so does most of the stuff I typed for this story. I'll shut up now.
Edit 4/14: I forgot to mention that there are no fan characters in this story... I just try to give the characters somewhat creative names and forget to mention who I imagined them as. Doctor: Older version of Mike? Surgeon: Older version of Paulo? Neurologist: Older version of Lucy? I put question marks because it is up for interpretation. I just imagined them as being those 3 characters as I was playing along... oh and the Cop was supposed to be Roger, but I don't know enough about him to imagine how he sounds or acts.
Edit 4/16: I messed up and posted chapter 9 from my first story and put it in here... might make everything more confusing if you don't read a whole chapter from a story so hopefully I fixed it. Sorry for anybody that made it that far. As a consolation prize have 3 more chapters. Hey look we finally get into that surgery part. Yay?
Edit 4/17: Here have 5 more chapters. I hope you enjoy them. Now we get to the part that made me think of the Doctor as an older version of Mike and the Neurologist as the older version of Lucy. You'll find out more about who they are dating later. Also, I thought I would be done by 4/20, but that is not looking like a possibility. I have 2 huge projects to work on for school this week. Sorry.
Edit 4/26: Sorry for disappearing for over a week, but I want to make sure I don't disappoint my parents with my grades. Here have 5 more chapters and I'll try to get close to an ending soon(I have no idea when or how, since I added so much more than I expected, but it will hopefully be soon).
Edit 5/15: Well I don't deserve forgiveness for this so I'll just get on with it. Enjoy the 15 or so chapters I just put up while I enjoy finally being done with college... for this semester anyways. I'll still have to work 5 days a week, but I will be able to post more often. I decided on not having a premature ending... I'll just have to forget about those due dates I had. Radiologist: Older version of Sue? Paula is the child of the Surgeon(older Paulo) and the Neurologist(older Lucy). Mitch is the child of the Doctor(older Mike) and the Model(older version of Sandy). I still have some more of the story left, but I'm still deciding whether I should go that route or pick a different path. *sigh* I'll probably disappoint somebody no matter what I do.
Edit 5/20: ... I really don't know what to say about these next few chapters... umm, some of the people I have shown, liked it but it is kind of sexual and I'm normally not comfy with reading those kinds of stories. You can skip Jasmine's Day Off-Chapters 48-52 and go straight to the current page if you want... I would not mind one bit. The neurologist kind of explains what happened in a(poorly planned) sentence, that the doctor does not believe since he doesn't remember a single thing from the previous night. As far as he's concerned it is just another attempt at a prank. click the down arrow and go to 53 if you want to skip some chapters I worked hard on. Just do what makes this experience more enjoyable.
Edit 5/22: Here have 8 more chapters and 2 new(somewhat important) characters an older version of Jessica as a Female cop and an older version of David as the Male cop that happens to be her partner. You can already tell these chapters are going to be interesting.
Edit 6/3: Six more chapters for now. I now I should have put up more, but I need to make sure it all flows properly and these weird scenes are throwing me off. Here's a little heads up: These chapters made me feel uncomfortable when I typed them so there is no need for you to read them if you start feeling uncomfortable.