This story has been abandoned. Sorry, but this is a fun hobby and I didn't have time to keep up with it.
Second, I'm happy for all your reviews, except for notes about typos. I get it, there are typos in this story, if you notice one and want to send me a message privately, that's appreciated. Sending them publicly is just not helpful and its annoying, especially when they are accompanied by smug little asides. It's not cute and the fact you identified that I misspelled someone does not make me you impressive. Also, doing it as an anonymous guest is just sad. Who has the time?