Alright, sorry I know you guys were expecting a new chapter with this note, but a few reviewers have brought my attention to something regarding the latest chapter. I had hoped I had changed it enough but looking back over this chapter and the one done by Big Z1776 and rereading over it I have to agree, it is a carbon copy.
I apologise to BIG Z1776 and to you guys as well, you deserve better than this, so I'm going to be deleting this chapter and taking a good hard look at future chapters as well, basically I'm going to be giving this story a complete overhaul, and this will take a little bit of time. Give me a month and I'll re-begin the story again.
If you have any further questions or thoughts on the story then by all means PM me and I'll try and get back to you. Thanks again.