a.n. Hello there! I know you were expecting a chapter, but please don't go just yet!

This note is here to tell you that I've reworked all of the old chapters, and there's new, more detailed information in them that wasn't there before. A lot of the interactions are different and clearer as well, and parts of the plot have changed (and as I'd like to think, improved).

I'm working on chapter five as we speak, but I want to hear what you have to say about the previous chapters now that I've replaced them. I need feedback, otherwise, I won't be able to get chapter five out by my deadline (which is very near, on June 30th)! I don't want to write into a void, so tell me what you think, even if it's critical.

Reread the chapters (or read them for the first time) and tell me what you think!

Much love,


P.S. I know I'm not supposed to post author's notes as chapters all by themselves, so I might replace this author's note with the chapter. But if I do, you won't get an update notification. But if I delete this chapter, all comments you leave for this chapter disappear as well, right? Tell me what you readers would prefer and I'll do it. :)