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If you can fix it up, yeah. Would help out a lot. I'll read over it in the meantime.

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Role: Nike; Goddess of Victory, dealer of praise and accolades, Semi-ruler of Celebrations and sports.

Name: Palodasci ("don't shorten it, fore you may as well shorten her title and domain", i mean, like you can shorten it but she don't like that.)

Gender: Female

Sexuality: Pansexual

Personality: Palodasci is one of the older Gods, helping Metis take the throne. It is Rumored that her very presence brings invincibility. She is confident, graceful, and Loves testing peoples hearts. She is incredibly wise as she deals with every victory and defeat, is always down to party, and sings songs of, you guessed it, victory. Everything is a sort of game to her, she wants to see if those around her are worthy of their renown. Palodasci is also very analytical which a lot of the time leads her to political discussion for arguments make the best games, of which she takes pride in winning. BUT, she isn't a sore loser and will always gladly grant victory to those who deserve it. Her anger though is that of the titans before her. She holds grudges very easily believing "Victory turns its back on those who upset Valor." She likes to refer to her self as victory and others who seem valiant as Champion.

Appearance: Palodasci has an athletic curvy build with toned arms wide hips and muscular legs. She is nearly 7ft! with golden brown skin and long blonde hair usually in a braid or ponytail. She has strong, golden, eagle wings the length of her body. Eyes hazel and she wears golden dresses and armor. Has a tendency to blindingly glow when triumphant. Also she loooooves eyeliner!!!

History: She helped in the war against the titans, as Zeus's Charioteer and Palodasci now stands tall as one of the great judges of Olympus. Even though her speed rivals that of Hermes and her power dictates success and failure of Gods and Men many see her victories as that of Ares or Athena and so she begins to envy them and many other gods for taking the glory. (Sort of ironic seeing that she grants glory, GRANT YOURSELF SOME GLORY AND QUIT WHINING!) Her competitive nature always deterred people from her but she can always rely on her siblings Zelos, Kratos, and Bia to back her up as the four warriors are bound to each other. Over the eons she has seen a lot of Thanatos, as her work tends to give him work.

Abilities:

Transmutation- the ability to manipulate objects into gold at will. This is done every time she crowns a victor and bestows golden gifts. Though she can't turn live creatures unless they haven't upheld their appointed victory, in which she may feel betrayed and curse them into golden statues.

Wings- allow her to fly at unimaginable speed, and create billowing winds. But strong gods can withhold the wind. Lying under her wings may also heal ones wounds, but never resurrect.

Heavenly whip- A golden whip that wards off the likes of any who get in her way. The crack creates a sort of force field. Her whip is also used to control her golden statues. But it can be taken, just as all of her objects. (Rationale, she's kind of sure to get you success, how does she help give victory if she herself is defeated)

Golden Shield- In its' reflection she sees all forms of conflict and for more pressing or entertaining events is there in person. Also its s shield because. . . Shield.

Shifting- She can shift into A Golden lioness, a symbol of ferocity and pride.

Chariot- A Golden chariot to fly great victors to mount Olympus, and hold all of her dang crap (Gold weighs a ton)

Other: Palodasci has an affinity to the sky as well as the sea. Her affinity with water is because of her mother styx. And she doesn't have a physical domain, as her's is an idea.

(Oh and question, how do I join the fun?)

Role: Athena, Goddess of Wisdom, Reason, Intellectual Activity, Literature, Handicrafts, Science, Defense, and Strategic Warfare

Name: Athene

Gender: Female

Personality: Athene at her core is a curious, inventive individual who spends great lengths of time exploring the world and beyond. She seeks to gather all knowledge that can be learned and use that knowledge for the betterment of all those around her. She is not a wholly kind person, however, as she has some difficulty with grasping the emotional impact her actions can have. She often puts the needs of the many over the needs of the few, and her assistance, both towards mortals and other immortals, clearly reflect her views.

Appearance: Being known as the grey-eyed goddess, Athene's most prominent feature is her bright grey eyes that shine with her godly power. She often takes upon a more human-like form, being of about average human height, though with a physique and set of features that most would find attractive, yet displaying her physical prowess. She wears light armors that suit her constant forays into the world as she explores. Over her armors, she wears a thick, hooded cloak crafted out of leathers of powerful beasts and owl feathers.

History: Athene was born into the world through the thoughts and blood of Zeus. From the moment of her "birth", Athene was ready for battle and exploration. She took quickly to her role in the Olympian Pantheon, ruling the domain of Wisdom handily. Through her efforts and actions, Athene helped the worlds of both mortals and immortals grow into the grand displays that they were meant to be. Her knowledge and skills have only ever grown greater with time, though even as the goddess of wisdom, she has not learned all, as none ever could. Her relations with both mortals and immortals has earned her the many tools at her disposal, and she now seeks to use them to take herself to heights never before achieved and pave the way for others to follow.

Powers:

Voice of Athene - This power allows Athene to communicate freely with owls and snakes. This can also be conferred as a blessing to mortals for them to use for the same purpose.

Divine Brush - Athene's primary tool for combat and exploration. This amazing object appears as an extremely large paintbrush that can "draw" things into the world. It also has a secondary function that allows the brush bristles to narrow together and sharpen, creating a psuedo-spearhead, allowing Athene to use the Divine Brush as a spear.

Aegis - Athene's most famous tool. This divine object appears as a large, circular shield with the face of a gorgon imprinted upon it. The gorgon face cannot petrify those who look upon it, but it will strike a debilitating fear into their hearts. When not in use, it appears as a small pendant that hangs from a necklace around Athene's neck.

Silverwing Cloak - Athene's cloak made of owl feathers. This can turn into a large pair of silvery, feathered wings at will, though they will return to normal in the presence of water.

Limitations:

The Divine Brush cannot be used over water and it cannot draw any objects that would come from the sea into reality. The Divine Brush cannot create mortal or animal life, but it can draw plant-life into existence.

All mortal and animal entities will always feel the fear produced by looking upon Aegis, barring unforseen circumstances that might affect it. Godly entities may attempt to resist the fear, but it will be difficult for less powerful gods.

Other: N/A

Unless True or Rose have qualms with anything present, I don't see anything wrong here.

Accepted~

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