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The Alexeyevich family, a weak mage family now based in New York City for about 200 years of lineage. The Alexeyevich family have been syphoning magical energy from the holy Grail wars in the hopes of using the magical energy to create their own Grail. However for the Grail to be fully manifested in our world it required a grail war. The Alexeyevich family would go to hire 7 magus to fight their war for them. However the immersion of a new grail alarmed the clock tower them in turn sending 7 magus
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9/3/2017 #1
Trace Carter

Name: Alexander Fraga McRamos

Nickname: Alex, Four-Eyed Hunter, Hound

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Straight

History: Alex was born into Fraga line with the Mystic Eyes of Prana Sight, and developed his skills with magecraft and his eyes, becoming a member of the clock tower specializing in tracking and hunting down targets for the Enforcers. He admired Bazett and pushed himself to become as strong as he can be, making use of reinforcement to aid in combat, becoming a Magus Killer and granted the title of Magus Hunter due to his unique skillset. He also has an Origin of Seeking. it allows her to hunt down her targets and to find their location. She uses it to be proficient with tracking spells and to use her special guns with great skill.

Personality: A cold hunter that works for the Enforcers. he shows no mercy to her opponents and sees honor as a concept only suited for bedtime stories. he admires Bazett and seeks to become strong like her, ignoring the scorn from the Magus in the Clock Tower that look down on him for his more active application of magecraft as opposed to the academic view held by most. Because he looks up to Bazett and has had to deal with the scorn of being a young member of the Enforcers, he strives to find a path in the world that is truly his and to find who he is besides simply the Magus Hunter.

Appearance: Alex is a slim person with a toned and muscular body that has no body fat and lots of muscle. He has long white hair that hangs to his neck with short messy bangs in the front. He has pale skin and red eyes when using his Mystic Eyes and icy blue eyes when not. He stands about 5'8 and has a black dragon tattoo that curls around one arm, stretches across his back, and curls down the other.

Clothes: He wears a black coat over light kevlar armor and a black military mask over his face with a voice changer. He keeps various weapons in the coat as well. casually, he wears a red shirt, black vest, and black pants and glasses.

Item (this is any object magical or non magical it can even be food and and alchemy kits. This is optional of course): Twin pistols that have been modified into mystic codes that fire off bursts of prana instead of bullets by drawing from his own circuits. 3 fragrach saved away.

Strengths(No more then 3): An expert tracker, skilled in martial arts, skilled at runecraft

Weaknesses:(No less then 3): not so skilled with the more abstract forms of magecraft (such as formalcraft or alchemy (meaning he stinks at casting ranged spells and creating anything but rudimentary bounded fields)), can be overpowered if his strength, speed and agility are rendered useless in a fight, needs glasses to see properly so can be hindered if they are broken, not that good at hypnosis, the strain put on his body by the runes and reinforcement drains his stamina and if he pushes himself too far, such as on the level of a Heroic Spirit, he runs the risk of burning out and being rendered helpless and immobile as his body has used up every last drop of energy and has begun destroying itself internally. At his strongest, he can only fight for three minutes.

Likes: working, fighting, training, meditating

Dislikes: idiots, people that judge and look down on him, people that are inefficient

Special skill (What kind of magic are they most proficient in. Or are they good with anything else non magical in particular. this is optional of course): he specializes in runes, reinforcement, and tracking spells

He can use runes to enhance and strengthen his physical abilities and combines them with reinforcement of his muscles and body to augment his strength and speed to incredible levels, allowing him to fight with Dead Apostles and such as part of his job. His eyes give him the ability to see prana to an extent. He can see auras around people an objects that he can use to detect mysteries and track people by following the residual traces of their Prana. His skills aren't unbeatable though as his magical enhancements take a toll on his stamina and reserves and can burn him out if he pushes himself too far in a fight.

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Affiliation: neutral

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9/6/2017 . Edited 9/13/2017 #2
Nubby King Of Beasts

Can u maybe go more in depth with their magical abilities? Like explain what exactly they can do and to what extent. Include the eyes in the as well

9/11/2017 #3
Trace Carter

edited.

9/11/2017 #4
Nubby King Of Beasts

Ok so the weakness. Let's start with that first. Not being skilled in abstract forms of magecrsft isn't what I see and an exploitable weakness jus tdie to the fuck that in general he is already s skilled mage in his field.

Now with the speed strength and agility weakness. This is basic too basic. Anyone is at a disadvantage if their outskilled like that. Your basically telling me someone absolutely has to be better to get a slight advantage.

And with the glasses what are the odds his glasses are gonna break? Will we see that as an actual weakness being utilized is a question.

So if you could tweak those and make them more exploitable. Not to the point where it's easy to beat him just to where it makes sense

9/12/2017 #5
Trace Carter

edited.

9/12/2017 #6
Nubby King Of Beasts

Ok so let's see. I'm willing to let the glasses slide as a weakness as long as I see it brought up a few times in combat.

Also with the speed and agility/Strength weakness maybe it would be better to say something along the lines of "Due to exhaust bit on his body by runes his stamina can easily take a great toll" just a suggestion cause the being better at Speed agility and strength is to broad. That's about it make a change to that and you should be good

9/12/2017 #7
Trace Carter

edited again.

9/13/2017 #8
Nubby King Of Beasts

So before I give it the big Approved. How strong is his strongest? Sorry I'm making this such a long process but it only takes one strong OC to make or break the forum you Know? Like is his strongest on the level of a heroic spirit like it mentions at some point is possible but draining. Or is his strongest at some other level

9/13/2017 #9
Trace Carter
His strongest is at a level comprable to a heroic spirit with average stats. So most berserkers could crush him and most lancers can outpace him. If he maintains that fir too long he can suffer internal injury from overtaxing his body
9/13/2017 #10
Nubby King Of Beasts
I mean 30 minutes Is long enough for being that powerful. I just don't know if I'm comfortable with a master having that Calibur of power. He'll be able to off ny other serbmt he wants really .
9/13/2017 #11
Trace Carter

edited to three minutes.

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