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Makkah Mac

I like it, but can't review 'cuz I don't have an account on that website.

5/21/2008 #91
Trippy Hippie

Same here.

5/23/2008 #92
Irlndiglo-Fairy

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5/24/2008 #93
AmeliaRose

i guess. my story isn't that great though

5/24/2008 . Edited 5/24/2008 #94
Berlioz II

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5/25/2008 . Edited 6/21/2008 #95
Emergency Exit

Um, hey. I wrote a Half-Life 2 fic a while back that I'd very much like to be reviewed. Constructive criticism extremely appreciated. This is like, the first thing I've done that isn't a parody, poem of humorous, so.. yeah. It probably sucks.

Not to be a review whore or anything, but I'd like at least one person to pick it apart before I write Chapter Two, because at this point I'm not entirely sure I want to keep writing it, even though I have a super kickass ending in mind. /pimping

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4259789/1/Side_to_Side

Thaaaanks.

5/25/2008 #96
Royal Typewriter

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=4278953

I got really excited about this idea for Sweeney Todd, and I feel like it's going pretty well, but I haven't gotten nearly enough feedback about my original characters and their place in the story. I don't know, I'd been hoping for some thoughts on their dialogue, mannerisms, general fitting into the story, setting... :)

It's really fun to write, and I get a lot of hits, but I'd really been wanting some insight.

#118 Today, 8:46amReply Mod Edit . Report Abuse . Delete Post .« 5/27/2008 #97
hpdrfan1

hey :D new to this forum! i kinda need some reviews 4 my clique and harrypotter stories! and dont judge me by 'muggle transfer' thats my wrst story, i just had the idea cuz its a unique plot...plz review, and 4 those who r interested, cld someone join my forums?

5/27/2008 #98
Reptar Bars

New D/J slash fic!

=D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4273015/1/Toppings_on_The_Sundae

It's all dialogue. I've always wanted to do one of those, and this idea kind of slammed itself onto the paper.

:P

So, it'd be great if someone could review that. You don't need to be familiar with the fandom to get the sweetness of it all.

:3

5/29/2008 #99
alexb007

I wrote a story about Nick Jonas that I'd like to get reviews for. It's called 'Nick's Other Side'. Please check it out as I haven't gotten any reviews for it and I want to know what people think.

6/4/2008 #100
Rallag

I got one Oblivion Poem that nobody has ever reviewed in the whole historey of my time on ff.net.

6/5/2008 #101
otherrealmwriter

I just sent you a review for it even though I don't know the fandom all that well. ;) It was a nice poem. You avitar is cute by the way Rallag

6/5/2008 #102
Hiro Konobu

Second chapter of pokemon fanfic that I'm working on could anyone please review it?

6/5/2008 . Edited 6/5/2008 #103
Chop Top

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4084684/1/The_purifying_of_Ramsay_Street

Please review my story, i am awar some of the spelling is off so please review the content, i.e. plot etc rather than spelling. P.S. the spelling mistakes are very minor my spellcheck doesn't work.

6/10/2008 #104
Trippy Hippie

Will do.

6/10/2008 . Edited 6/10/2008 #105
gnygsbgsu

Here's a story of final fantasy x. And x is roman for 10, incase you didn't know. It's about 2 kids who get sucked into spira, where everyone's IQ is about 400 less than 0. This story includes Bitchslapping, OOCness, more bitchslapping, and a mysterious girl named Ally Stocks who dies repeatedly throughout the story! Humor/parody/adventure, rated t for teen.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4310088/1/Final_Parody_X

Readers beware; you're in for a scare.

6/16/2008 #106
elfeicho

review mine and i'll review yours :)

my stories are extremely interesting, anyone can enjoy them.

(if its not extremely boring)

6/16/2008 #107
otherrealmwriter

Just reviewed one of yours. It was certainly interesting and had it's funny moments like I said in the review.

6/16/2008 #108
gnygsbgsu

What about mine? I review yours, but you don't hold up your end of the deal? That's just mean. =(

6/17/2008 #109
gnygsbgsu

Maybe now I won't give you the antidote...

6/17/2008 #110
gnygsbgsu

Is anyone even here? Could someone pllleeeeaaaaasssseee review my stories?

6/17/2008 #111
otherrealmwriter

I just reviewed your Naruto one. It's funny. It also depends on the fandoms and stuff too. Some stories get more looks at than others.

6/17/2008 . Edited 6/17/2008 #112
gnygsbgsu

read the final parody x one. It's my best work.

6/17/2008 #113
otherrealmwriter

Okay. But I don't know the fandom too well......

6/17/2008 #114
otherrealmwriter

Just reviewed. ^_^ You are certainly good at random humor. XD

6/17/2008 #115
Ifab1ndiya

Want to read my Cinderella fic? Just posted the last ch, wondering how it seems. Haven't received any feedback..

Oh & whoever reads that fic, I added music with links from my profile. Pwease try it! It's fun! xD

Relm, I have to review your stories, once! xD

6/17/2008 #116
elfeicho

I reviewed it. pretty good.

6/17/2008 #117
Ifab1ndiya

Really? Thanks so much!!! There is a poll and some annoucment in my profile if you are interested! xD

6/17/2008 #118
Ifab1ndiya

Really? Thanks so much!!! There is a poll and some annoucment in my profile if you are interested! xD

6/17/2008 #119
Mignun

Yeah, I'm re-writing a story for Sky High. I was wondering if anyone could review it. Here's a link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4333444/1/Freeze_Me

6/19/2008 #120
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