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I am the Queen of Darkness

Now shut up and leave me alone. Put your original songs/poetry/whatever else you want us to see (writing-wise) on here.

3/28/2008 #1
I am the Queen of Darkness

here's your song, tyreek:

I promise you that almost every week, or month, I'll have a new song in here!!!!

Here's one I wrote back in November 2007, it doesn't have a chorus, but if you read and think of one, I'll be happy to put on in here...Although it might seem like a poem, I wrote it to be a song...my bad..

Love=Lies Betrayal Heartbrake Depression Addiction Insanity

Lies are told to cover up the things we regret,

but when the truth comes out thats when we start to forget ,

About whoever and whatever made us lie in the first,

We also forget that this just makes things worst,

For the one who we lied to,

But it gets better for the one who’s lieing to you

Betrayal is next step in the game called love,

The only one who sees it comin is the lord above,

If you happen to get caught in a web of lies,

Betrayal will soon catch you slowly burying you alive,

Trust is earned thats what they say,

But never trust anyone that is my way.

Heartbrake Oh ma this one takes the cake,

It’ll leave have you stayin up into the early dawn with one hell of an ache,

Yea for awhile you’ll think Man aint life a Bitch,

But aslong as you keep this in your head you’re six feet deep in a ditch

Depression worst one of em all,

Everyday staying up wishin someone would call,

Hoping and praying for it to be alright,

Knowing there’s noone there to hold you tight,

I never thought I would go through this shit,

But it all happend cause of that one bitch....

Addiction next on on the list,

sex,drugs,acohol, all that shit,

It’s madness,

Causing so much sadness to you,

For all those who haven’t been true,

To themselves and you,

Just remember suicides one call away,

After all who do you have to turn to anway?

Insanity one more thing in love,

Things get so crazy when you fall in love,

It’s impossible to tell where this story goes,

Is my lover a roller or is she hoe?

Paranoia indoubts your mind,

As I infuse you with every twist, every rhyme,

Theres no point in covering up ur crazy,

Guess what....ur girl just had a baby, Damn....

3/28/2008 #2
I am the Queen of Darkness

The rest I put are mine.

Title: (there is no title yet... XD;;) Written on November 9, 2007

You only see me when I'm acting odd.

For you to love me, I pray to God.

I pray in my heart for you to notice me,

But deep within me, I know it can't be.

I still watch you, looking for any hope,

But turn around and look like a dope.

I know it's impossible for me to please you.

I know it can't happen, no matter what I do.

Sure you'll respond as if I'm your crush,

But then down the toilet, my heart, you will flush.

Why would you hurt me with so little care?

If you acted like you liked me, it'd probably be a dare.

This situation is so unfair!

My heart you have torn and stamped to the ground.

I know eventually I will be found

Deep, deep in this pit.

Side note: that was written when I was humiliated in front of James, my rl crush, and yeah... I was down about that, but then he laughed, so it turned out okies.

3/28/2008 #3
I am the Queen of Darkness

The rest I put are mine.

Title: (there is no title yet... XD;;) Written on November 9, 2007

You only see me when I'm acting odd.

For you to love me, I pray to God.

I pray in my heart for you to notice me,

But deep within me, I know it can't be.

I still watch you, looking for any hope,

But turn around and look like a dope.

I know it's impossible for me to please you.

I know it can't happen, no matter what I do.

Sure you'll respond as if I'm your crush,

But then down the toilet, my heart, you will flush.

Why would you hurt me with so little care?

If you acted like you liked me, it'd probably be a dare.

This situation is so unfair!

My heart you have torn and stamped to the ground.

I know eventually I will be found

Deep, deep in this pit.

Side note: that was written when I was humiliated in front of James, my rl crush, and yeah... I was down about that, but then he laughed, so it turned out okies.

3/28/2008 #4
I am the Queen of Darkness

My longest one yet... from last night (November 12, 2007)

YOu think you wanna go into my mind?

Go deep, dark inside and see what you'll find.

The first level is hope, not very deep within.

That's all the hope you'll see in my skin.

Then you'll see love and passion next.

Love greater than can be said in any ol' text.

Then you'll see sadness, now we're getting deep!

I'm so sad, for hours I won't say a peep.

Now let's really get into my head,

There I wish that I could be dead.

I think of him, the one I love,

And how I want to die and go above.

I think of how I yearn for my mom;

She's the one I would call 'da bomb.'

I think of how I want the to see

How nice it is that I can be.

I wish for death, for anything bad;

I wish to re-live the pain they all had.

I want to be hated, yet love at the same time.

I know that I am not worth a dime.

I want them to know that I truly care,

That all this pain I dare not bear.

I remember my baby, Dusty's the one,

And how fast his little life was done.

I dwell on the pain and fear of my past,

And how their eyes, upon me, they'd cast.

I think of all the Hell I've gone through;

The only solution is to be true.

I know I deserve all of this Hell,

Yet with all of my might, I yell.

If my life was over, would anyone know

All of the pain, that on me, was bestowed?

I don't know if anyone cares,

But this hellish life is so unfair!

I have been put through so much pain;

Yet, I wish it'd all happen again.

I know I deserve any Hell I get.

They just smile, and my head, they pet.

They pretend to care, but I don't they don't.

I wish they'd understand, but in reality, they won't.

Yes, I realize that I have sinned,

But I know I still have the chance to win.

I kinda believe in God, but kinda, I do not.

While I'm cold, I also feel hot.

I know what is right, and I know what is wrong;

For the comfort of loving arms, I long.

--END--

3/28/2008 #5
I am the Queen of Darkness

okay, next one XD

Title: Third-Degree Written November 12, 2007.

In my heart lies the sting of guilt

Because I know I'm the reason she was killed.

I know I'm why she decided to die;

She never even said goodbye.

The pain lies deep within me.

I wish they'd all just let me be.

But I feel the eyes burning through my head,

And I hear the minds wishing I were dead.

But they're not the only ones with this wish.

I think of death as I wash off my dish.

No one truly knows me as they think they do.

It's all as if I'm new.

They assume I'm who they think I am,

And act as if they give a damn.

But does anyone truly know me? No.

I don't run as they think I go.

I run on the pain I now I've earned;

Like a papercut, or a third-degree burn.

--END--

*Me

3/28/2008 #6
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: (none yet)

It's a foggy day outside

And snow sets on the mountain side.

It's bitter and cold and reminds me of you

And all the things I wanted to do.

I watch as the scenery flies past the van;

Tears, from my eyes, I fan.

The leaves are so beautiful in the trees,

Making me think of howit could be.

No matter where I look, I see us.

Even when I see kids riding on a bus.

As I watch kids walk to school,

I remember how you were such a fool.

I watch kids exit their cars,

Eating chocolate candy bars.

They all look so happy and look so far off

As I remember how my life should be scoffed. (line changed)

I hate this life I am forced to live,

Because though I recieve, what do I give?

Nothing but fear and pain,

The very things That I am to gain. (changed)

--END--

*rl james

3/28/2008 #7
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: "I know how you Feel"

"I know how you feel"

These words are so unreal.

They all act like they've been through so much,

But try living my life, that'll give u a hunch.

I was so happy up 'til nine.

I always lie when I say I'm "fine."

I always have dreams with you in them;

To me, you're special as a rare gem. (line changed)

I love and miss you, and you back

Because you're gone, a loving mother, I lack.

You will always be in my heart

And never from me, will you part.

I wish I could be held in your arms.

There, I would be toasty and warm.

--END--

*my mom

3/28/2008 #8
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: (None so far)

It makes me sad to think of you

And all the crap you had to go through.

It makes me mad when I hear them say

That people like you should be locked away.

Who do they think they are,

Acting like they are better, by far?

It makes me sad to think of what was on your mind;

People can be oh-so blind!

It annoys me, what they think they know;

They talk like you deserve to burn down below!

But they dont know, the woman you were

It makes me wanna growl, "Grr!!"

They are so stupid and blind to how you feel

And the way you had no way to heal.

I hate them and think they ought to die.

You were wonderful and you were mine!

I hope to never hear those words

About how you were dumber than birds.

They should all just shut their mouths.

And I hate it here in the south.

What were you thinking to kill your bod?

It makes me sad... mom.

*my mom (obvious by last line XD)

3/28/2008 #9
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: none Written: November 7, 2007

My heart is broken,

Unable to be mended.

There it lies,

Broken and bended.

It has dents and scars,

Hurts and pains.

In this living Hell,

There's little I gain.

I just want to die

And never again come back,

Because I know

To him I mean jack.

I wish I wasn't born,

Then all would be happy,

Because they never

Would have met me.

I cut my mind

Into little chunks,

As I write this

On my bottom bunk.

The one thing I wanted,

A solo was the one,

Off with it they went

And from myself, I run.

I hate it!

Right when I felt peace,

They had to do THAT to me,

Now, my life, I wish would cease.

But I am too weak

To take my own life,

So I relax just a little

And put down the mental knife.

---end---

*me

3/28/2008 #10
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: Strong Pain Written: November 3, 2007

I don't have to take this.

Why do you cause me so much pain?

Why can't we just

What do we gain?

Chorus:

The hurt is so strong,

I feel like I am dying, slowly.

I know that it is wrong.

Why do you talk so lowly?

You claim that you love me,

But go off withought even tellin'.

Did you think I wouldn't see

That your heart, to someone else, you were sellin'?

The hurt is so strong,

I feel like I am dying, slowly.

I know that it is wrong.

Why do you talk so lowly?

Now you say you feel hate,

But I all ready knew that fact.

You went on a date

And made her a pact.

The hurt is so strong,

I feel like I am dying, slowly.

I know that it is wrong.

Why do you talk so lowly?

Bridge:

I hate when I'm lied to.

Did you think I didn't know?

Well, if you did, I knew.

Are you just tryin' to cause me woe?

The hurt is so strong,

I feel like I am dying, slowly.

I know that it is wrong.

Why do you talk so lowly?

I hate when I'm lied to.

Did you think I didn't know?

Well, if you did, I knew.

Are you just tryin' to cause me woe?

Are you just tryin' to cause me...

The hurt is so strong,

I feel like I am dying, slowly.

I know that it is wrong.

Why do you talk so lowly?

*random

3/28/2008 #11
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: All Alone Written: October 20, 2007

Sidenote: This is a song (same with Strong Pain)

Why did you leave me all alone?

You don't even call me on the phone.

Why did you leave me all alone?

As I sit

In the dark

With nothing to do,

All I think

Of is you

And what you put me through.

Why did you leave me all alone?

You don't even call me on the phone.

Why did you leave me all alone?

When I look

At the rain,

All I think of is you

And all

of the pain

That you put me through.

Why did you leave me all alone?

You don't even call me on the phone.

Why did you leave me all alone?

What did I do to you?

Why do you put me through

This pain?

And why are you hurting me?

Don't say you cannot see

My eyes watering with these memories.

Why did you leave me all alone?

You don't even call me on the phone.

Why did you leave me all alone?

*i think i made this one about my mom originally... i think :/

3/28/2008 #12
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: Because I Know

I know I will never catch your eye,

So why do I bother even tryin'?

I know I'll not get what I want;

I feel as if I am being taunted!

Why do I even bother?

Why do I try to get your heart? Gr!

Because I know

It is not possible.

Because I know

My dreams will never come true.

All I want is a lifetime full of you!

What can I do

To get close to you?

I know you will never see me that way.

Why do I try to get you to everyday?

I know you will never think of me.

I feel like I may as well let this be.

Why do I try anymore?

I know, you you, I am just a bore!

Because I know

It is not possible.

Because I know

My dreams will never come true.

All I want is a lifetime full of you!

What can I do

To get close to you?

Is there nothing I can do

To make you feel the way I do?

Is there nothing I can say

Or should I just go away?

Because I know

It is not possible.

Because I know

My dreams will never come true.

All I want is to be near you,

But I may as well go away because...

Because I know

It is not possible,

Because I know!

Because I know

My dreams will never come true,

Never come true,

Never come true,

Never come true,

Because I know!

*rl james

3/28/2008 #13
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: Why'd U Go? Sidenote: This is a song I wrote and that some of you heard... see if u can recognize it. :)

I nkow it's all a lie

When you say that you want me to leave.

All I can think of is "Oh my"

As my chest starts to heave.

Why'd you go (why'd u go?)

Away from me? (Go away from me?)

Where'd you go? (Where'd u go?)

Why can't u see? (why can u not see?)

That I need u (I need u)

To be happy (be happy)

So please return to my arms tonight.

I long to be with you again,

But you claim that you don't want me back.

It hurts to know what you're thinking.

I know there's so much I lack.

Why'd you go (why'd u go?)

Away from me? (Go away from me?)

Where'd you go? (Where'd u go?)

Why can't u see? (why can u not see?)

That I need u (I need u)

To be happy (be happy)

So please return to my arms tonight.

You've returned (you've returned)

To my arms! (to my loving arms.)

And I know (and I know)

There'll be no harm! (I'll come to no harm.)

Now I can (Now I can)

Can be happy! (Be happy)

'Cause you've returned to my arms this night,

'Cause you've returned to my arms this night!!!

---end---

*random

3/28/2008 #14
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: See the Love

You say you don't ever wanna see this face again,

But I know it can't be true, at least I hope not, Ken.

You tell your friends to ignore me and your little sister as well.

But what did I do to deserve such a Hell?

You say you don't love me, but I can see it's all a lie.

I can still see the love when we look eye-to-eye.

Your eyes glisten sadly as my voice starts to shake.

I ask you, "What the hell, do you really need a break?"

I start to tremble a little bit more.

As you act all angry and try to start a war (used to be call me a little whore--that's what it was in the recording... thus blanking it out. XD)

You say you don't love me, but I can see it's all a lie.

I can still see the love when we look eye-to-eye.

I whisper three words, and these are what they were,

I said, "I love you," As my eyes began to blur,

With tears, and...

Now you say you love me and I know it's not a lie.

I can still see the love when I catch your little eye.

Now you say you love me and I now it's not a lie.

I can still see the love when I catch your little eye.

---end---

*random

3/28/2008 #15
I am the Queen of Darkness

Title: Hobbies Written: October 23, 2007

Everyone know I love to sing.

I feel like I'm flying on angels' wings.

It stops me from being mad too long.

If I can just sing a fun little song.

I also like to write tunes;

Who cares if I look like a loon?

I am a big fan of poems.

I like to write and know 'em.

It makes me happy to write one well.

Maybe one day they'll sell!

I try to make them end where they make sense,

Like right here; now you owe me six cents.

---end---

*random

okay, so no one jumps down my throat AGAIN, I am just leaving up my topic till I can get all my poems up, but I HAVE TO GO.

. bye. *storms off*

3/28/2008 #16
ScorpioSkellington

Angel

(Verse 1)

From the day that I first met you,

Knew that you were something special,

Couldn't believe there was someone like you in my life,

Even through all the madness,

That caused each of us sadness,

We found a light to brighten up the strife,

And now you're the one thinking of,

Man, I've fallen hard in love,

I just wanna be with you,

I swear I'll travel around the world,

Forget about them other girls,

You're the only one I want in my life

(Chorus )

Sent from the lord above,

You're all Im thinking of,

And what Im feeling for you, girl, its that good love,

Can't no other man,

Do to you, what I can,

So, my Angel, let's leave this world together,

Just you and me forever.....

(Verse 2)

Now, you say there are other guys,

Who also want you want you in their lives,

I just wanna say leave them alone,

But then I see the pain you growing through,

And do all I can to comfort you,

My Angel, tell me what it is you want me to do,

Cause I swear you're......

(Chorus)

Sent from the lord above,

You're all Im thinking of,

And what Im feeling for you, girl, its that good love,

Can't no other man,

Do to you, what I can,

So, my Angel, let's leave this world together,

Just you and me forever.....

(Final Verse)

Girl, Im tellin you , just you and me,

That's all I can see in these eyes of mine,

For without you, my life is incomplete,

And girl without you, I swear I'd go out of my mind,

Oooooooooooooooooooooh(Hehe)

(Chorus 2x)

Sent from the lord above,

You're all Im thinking of,

And what Im feeling for you, girl, its that good love,

Can't no other man,

Do to you, what I can,

So, my Angel, let's leave this world together,

Just you and me forever.....

(Hope you like it!!! ^_^) Guess who this one's about? *wink*

3/28/2008 . Edited 3/28/2008 #17
I am the Queen of Darkness

Hey, just to let y'all know, my friends and i are starting a new comedy series and we have the intro. it's a youtube thing XD

3/28/2008 #18
I am the Queen of Darkness

With tear-filled eyes, I sigh

I’m sick of all of this heart-break

And all the pain you cause

Why do you insist to point out

All of my endless flaws

Why can’t you see me for who I am

And not all of my mistakes

Why do you keep on

Causing my heart to break

It hurts deep down, Not even that deep

The way that you treat me

I know that I deserve so much more,

So this crush I’m going to leave

3/28/2008 #19
I am the Queen of Darkness

I can feel my heart growing dim;

I can hardly feel it beat within.

The pain of knowing you don't see me the way I see you

Makes the tears burn all the way through.

If only you knew.

I am in so much pain at this time.

I only wish you could be mine.

Why did you ignore me like I wasn't there?

The pain of the memory is too much to bear.

I should have told you there and then,

But I didn't know what to say; it's like I'm only ten!

I am so confused, what do you want me to do?

Do you want me to leave you alone or do you want me to cry, "Boo hoo?!"

Now my favorite holiday will be ruined unless this turns around.

But I can't see you caring, so for depression, I am bound.

I hope my V-day comes out brighter than it looks.

Well, time to study; time to hit the books.

3/28/2008 #20
Skygate

As a break from the emoness and lovey dovey stuff, i composed some nature Haikus for ya'll

**Oh the snow, so clean

So pure it falls to the earth

Like an angels wings**

**Tsunami, so large

Even bobcat does not smile

The pain is too much**

**Wildfires like red death

comsumes the life of the trees

and they will perish**

**Baby powder rain

Swirling storm of crystal tears

Now they are all gone**

6/19/2008 #21
AStringTheory

I finnally did It!! I made something that didn not relate to blood, emoness, dieing or anything. *^^*

---The peace has come, changing the world

Spreading light into their hearts.

The angels take to the skies, as the trees beind in the wind.

And you were dancing as if nothing mattered---

---Bound feathers melted into the sky

What flies are silver wings

Claw into the deep wind

And become the power to cut through---

6/19/2008 . Edited 6/19/2008 #22
AStringTheory

I finnally did It!! I made 2 things that didn not relate to blood, emoness, dieing or anything. *^^* And no, these are not Haikus they are just very short...poems? I dunno, it randomly popped into my mind.

The peace has come, changing the world

Spreading into their hearts.

---This one is more or less talking about the apocalypse--

A could of lead blackens the sky

Everything fades to grey...

The worlds darkest hour had begun

-----And now some quotes from my math teacher---

"It doean't matter how much time I put ito this because you all suck anyway."

"It is NOT okay to act like an a**hole in this class!" (yes she said the word)

"Shut up!!"

"Woud you like to be here for a another year?"

And now my two attempts at making a song. The first was supposed to be emo but the second was supposed to be happy but then I kinda got into a lonely mood.

"Blood" by me *^^*

For the expense of punishment Banish the hocuspocus that causes ecstacy and brings you to reality In the end is a prayer and Through hesitation you'll find the existence of regret Through everlasting pain your horrible evening is a reccurance Keep on dancing between the sky with prayers in the sky Until now what you don't know did exist With your fingertips follow the path in that dirty dark sky At the exit of the bright road what is waiting for you? Took you to heart but you didn't know The hatred that had given birth has taken its toll And turned into poison which is killing you silently Bad Broken Bright Light Loss Lustrious Objection Organization Open Oddessy Origins Omnious Deranged Darkness Death Never ending fighting and plains Your name is written in the sky ------------------------------------------------------------------------

"Cold" by me

Outside blood is raining Your tears are raining My life is draining Can't hear the screams that keep evading the night Soaked from a crimson tide invading whats the last fight Smile, death will not be proud of a suicide so old Volume, music will not be loud for a sound so bold While, the sin tries to caress my body to cold Can't hear the screams that keep on evading the night Soaked from a crimson tide invading what's the last fight Fall into nothingness there's nowhere to hide Ignite the anger throw out all goodness inside Enrage the wild beast and unleash your demons Cause when you step out the cage There's nothing to stop you from going insane Outside blood is raining Our trears are straying My life is draining The hate is still raging can't contain it Can you hear it? Can you hear it? Listen to my painful screams etched into the night Drowning in a crimson flood I fall in this last fight You can feelit and you can taste it But you'll never forget what happened to me Your first friend, I lay here cold Forever as you stare me down You, the cold murderer.

6/20/2008 #23
razgrieve

ummm lets see....haiku.....

is this a haiku?

Here I type and type away,

not really knowing.

6/20/2008 . Edited 6/20/2008 #24
Chiisai Shiroi Wolf

um...the second line only has 6 syllables..

6/20/2008 #25
Skygate

hyper-san, of course they arent Haikus, just look at em.

Raz-san, yeah, she's right, thats not a haiku. And usually Haikus have some kind of mystique and curiosity about them. If you want a structured poem to tell a story or express something, that would be a sonnet

6/20/2008 #26
AStringTheory

Haikus are fun!

6/20/2008 #27
Slyphen Frazer

There is no where to post this on the site so....

(Need help with title)

In a recent war a rebel faction seized control of the country Tibreniaf rom the ruling family of Cablenot. This usurper instilled a new order, leaving fear and destruction upon the populace. The new emperor and his army of monstrous creatures and mutated beasts have turned the once kind and quiet country into a threat to the world. Someone has to stop the emperor before he proceeds with his plan to take over the world...because, if he is not stopped the world will be plunged into the darkest and direst of ages...

Chapter One

The door creaked open as quietly as was possible for the seventy-five year-old hinges. Two hooded figures made their way through the throngs of men, men who were either well on their way or already were, deep into a drunken state. The two men approached the bar, where a man stood wiping the inside of a dirty glass with an equally dirty rag. He turned his bored gaze upon the two travelers; fourty years of bartending had honed the bald, toothless man's sense of possible danger leaving him instantly alert.

The shorter and thicker of the newcomers quickly ordered a Dwarrow ale for himself and a fine wine for his companion. Then gathering up the drinks, he turned and followed his willowy friend. The taller man led the way across the room to a seemingly empty table. Underneath his magical hood, he smiled and turned away, leaving a drunk halfling to his quiet snores between the legs of the table.

They found a truly empty table in a far corner and both sat with their backs to the wall. When a serving wench came by to make sure that everything was alright, she was sent scurrying away by the ale drinkers low growl. The tall one just shook his head and they were left unbothered for a good while. For an hour they waited and watched the door, the ale quickly disappearing while the taller one sipped his wine.

For the second time in an hour, the rusty hinges squeaked as the door opened. Two more figures entered, both wearing traveling cloaks with frayed edges and low hats to hide their faces. They were both female, one probably about seventeen by the curve of her body, and the other maybe fourteen. They both stared at the ground a few feet in front of them, the smaller clutching at her companion's hand and arm, holding on tight in this unfamiliar place. They approached the bar, and the old man looked at them curiously.

He was not a sexist man, but this was no place for unescorted young women. When they reached the bar he set his glass down and walked to stand in front of them. He gave a warm smile and asked "How can I serve you ladies?" The older one surprised him with her answer: "We need work." He fumbled over a few words before saying "This no place for a young lady." She tipped back her hat and gave him a look at her face.

It was strikingly beautiful, but he saw in her eyes a fear and wariness he had never witnessed in a woman this young. His heart melted and he called to the one bar maid.

"Give these two a proper bath and put them to work in the kitchens." He said, and she nodded. She turned away, indicating that the two should follow her, but she was stopped by a stocky prescence in front of her. The thick, ale-drinking man who had arrived an hour ago leaned forward totally ignoring the surprised women who had bumped into him. The two girls instantly fixed their horrified stares on the hidden face and they started to back away, but the younger one bumped into someone as well. The taller man stood behind them. He leaned forward slightly as he said, "Excuse me, misses? Me and my friend here need to talk to you outside."

And on that note, the thicker one lashed out, grabbing onto the older girls upper arm. His grip, however, loosened immediately as the bar wench drove her knee into his groin, and the bartender shoved the thinner man away. He was an old man, but he had spent many hours training his body, and he easily vaulted over the table and pinned the man to the floor. He turned his head slightly so he could tell the girls to leave, but they were already gone, the door banging open and closed on its hinges.

The man with the aching groin fumbled to his feet, pushed the bar wench away (Not too hard, mind you) and stumbled for the door. The thin man pinned to the ground muttered under his breath, holding his arms over his face to protect against the angry bartenders strikes. The bartender recognized what the muttering was, though, and tried to get away. Unfortunately, magic is not so easily dodged. He felt a powerful tingling in his fingers and toes, which was quickly replaced by a horrible numbness. He slumped over to the floor, and the tall man was up and out, running to catch up to his brother.

The two loped along after the fleeing girls, the two strange men falling to all fours and running as a dog might. The smaller girl looked back and screamed, but the older one just urged her on faster.

"They are catching up!" the smaller screamed, but the larger did not look, she just ran. Then she was not. All she remembered was pounding feet and the feel of the sweat rolling down the back of her neck, and the tight hold her sister had on her hand. Then, she was upside down, her slick hands sliding from the other girls grasp. The rope-trap she had stepped into pulled her into the trees hanging over the road. The smaller girl gave another scream, both hands reaching for the sister that had been taken from her. She looked over her shoulder to see that their pursuers had slowed and were walking upright again. Her hands turned to fists and her long brown braid suddenly stuck out straight behind her head.

Magic can be accessed several ways. One is through mental discipline, another is through instinct. The final and most unreliable way is through rage or fear. Both of these emotions provided a conduit for the energy, and she felt it buzzing within her, sending her braid out in a whipping frenzy. Now, simply accessing magic is not the key to using it. It must be focused in order to be used. She snarled at the two men, and turned her body, setting her feet, and throwing her right arm straight back. Her left arm came across her front, her fist touching her right shoulder.

"PYROGA!!" She screamed, whipping her body around so that her right arm arced out in front of her. The moment she began the turn a wave of fire flowed from her fingertips and scorched through the nearby trees, whirling across the way to splash into the two men...only to be dispersed by the tall man's shield. She snarled and set her feet again, preparing for another blast. She didn't get that far though. A tingling began in her fingers and toes, and she recognized the paralysis spell for what it was. She tried to focus her mind and fight it off, but she was on her knees, then lying facedown in the dirt, tears rolling out of her eyes.

A few moments later, the voice that had spoken out of the tall man's hood reached her ears. He said "Get her down, please." She heard a slight grumbling, then the sound of cloth falling to the ground, and then the sound of trees creaking.

"I will take care of the flames." the voice continued. Though she couldn't see it, she had an idea of what he was doing. He set his feet and held both hands out straight in front of him, fingertips touching. Then he drew his arms in close, hands touching his chest, and said "Brosba." She heard his grunt, and the man's eyes widened behind his hood as the magical energies that imbued the flames with life flowed into him and he stumbled slightly. The girl felt the paralysis spell suddenly vanish and she instantly rolled over reaching for the dagger hidden beneath her cloak. She hesitated slightly when the man turned to look at her and chuckled.

"You have...A lot of power..." He gasped out, then fell to one knee. He took a deep breath and stood up, then looked into the trees. His companion dropped from them, the older girl slung over his shoulder. The younger girl's eyes went wide; her sister was hobbled and gagged, but at least she was alive. Her gaze travelled to the man holding her sister and she gasped as she recognized what the man was. He had thick red hair that fell to his shoulders. He also had an equally thick and unruly red goatee about five inches long. Those, however, were not his most astounding features: his ears, triangular dog ears, were perched on top of his head sticking up out of his thick hair. He also had a long, thick, bushy tail that matched his hair in both color and texture. She turned her gaze onto their other captor who was pulling his magical hood off of his face; the enchantment that kept his face hidden rolled away, revealing a face similar to his companions. His ears were the same color, and his goatee was smaller. However, he had long, slick, black hair pulled into a neat and intricately braided pattern. It was a wizard's braid.

"You...You are Skolls!" She gasped, and the two turned to stare at her, the red-head smiling indulgently.

"What did you think we were?" He said mockingly. "Werewolves?" Upon speaking this last word, his mocking tone was gone, and instead it was laced not with sarcasm, but with pure and utter hatred. The young girl gulped, then she smiled as her sister landed a fierce headbutt inbetween his ears. He growled and dropped her to the ground.

"I am Tarkell." The wizard said. "My...grumbling companion is my brother, Rakna." The speaker gave a polite bow. "And you are Jodara and Reudinia Cablenot, the rightful heiresses to the throne of Tibrenia." The bound girl, Jodara, narrowed her eyes and gave a soft growl, a growl very similar to the one that Rakna gave the barmaid scant hour ago. Tarkell looked down at the prone young woman and snapped his fingers, a look of apprehension crossing his features. "My apologies, your highness, I forgot to untie you!" He reached into the pockets of the brown robes he wore under his cloak. He reached into many pockets before he placed his hands on his hips and thought to himself trying to figure out where he put his cooking knife. Reudinia looked at him and said "May I?" as she held up her dagger.

He looked at her, confused, then said "Ahh! Of course, of course." Reudinia giggled at this strange man, then crawled forward over to her sister and cut her loose, and they quickly embraced. Then Jodara turned her gaze on Tarkell, obviously the kinder of the two, and asked "What do you want?"

Tarkell smiled apologetically.

"Why, we are kidnapping you, of course!"

8/15/2008 #28
Paige Joy

Hi, I'm new to this whole thing, and I was wondering...would this be the right place for me to post my original stories/novels? If so would I get feedback from it?

8/21/2008 #29
Panduck

Oh, honey. You are new.

Oook; get ready for some tutorials.

First: if you'd like to post a fanfiction you go to your account and upload the document (under documents). From there it will pretty much tell you what to do. If the story is an original (not a spin-off of someone elses using their characters) then go to Fictionpress.com

My advice to you is that you explore both sites a bit, as well as your accounts which has instructions on how to do everything, read some fiction and some fanfiction etc. before you do anything. It will help to familiarize you to the way things work on both websites.

Did you get that or do you need more specific instructions? :) hope I helped...

8/21/2008 #30
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