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Aish Sheva

^ Exactly what the title says. Post your links here.

3/18/2009 #1
storm-brain

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4571902/1/Daughter_of_the_Olympians

I think this one needs help with emotions and setting descriptions as well as some plot issues.

3/18/2009 #2
Aish Sheva

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4933510/1/Percy_Jackson_The_ThirdFourth_Blood_Brother

Oh, dear. GARY STU ALERT!!

3/19/2009 #3
Jason Strong

Sheva, did you flame it, because it was deleted.

3/19/2009 #4
storm-brain

O_o

Hey guys, out of all the Veritas we're the only ones on the forum. Can you do a little adveritsing?

3/19/2009 #5
Jason Strong

I can PM Raechelle, she's the only Verita I know of.... but then there's Athena's Hatchling. I'll take care of them.

3/19/2009 #6
storm-brain

I'll talk to Mighty and try and recruit some newbies.

3/19/2009 #7
Jason Strong

I'll PM them now... I hope they'll use the avatar.

3/19/2009 #8
storm-brain

same. If we could get a huge population with the avatar...

3/19/2009 #9
Aish Sheva

I might use it. I'm considering it...but I like mine so much...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4934776/1/Interview_with_the_gang

Needs major CC/perhaps a flame or two.

3/20/2009 #10
Aish Sheva

O_O Apologies for the double post but I found another one...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4935961/1/Athena_vs_Poseidon_and_Thalia_vs_Annabeth

Oh, dear.

3/20/2009 #11
storm-brain

I CCed them both. well, the first one more of a flame.

3/20/2009 #12
Jason Strong

Aww... I didn't get to look at it! They deleted it pout

Oh well, off to the next one.

3/20/2009 #13
storm-brain

:-(

3/20/2009 #14
Jason Strong

I got the other one though, the originality of it was impressive, but the writing form was sloppy. The Veritas need to open a beta reading service or something, where the story has to go through at least the three of us, me storm-brain and Sheva before we send it back. Just so they know it's good, and filled with EMOTION.

And speaking of emotion, in my new story, storm-brain, I dedicated chapter five to you. Read the dedication :P

3/20/2009 #15
storm-brain

ok

3/20/2009 #16
Deleted84493

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4571902/1/Daughter_of_the_Olympians

I think this one needs help with emotions and setting descriptions as well as some plot issues.

Yeah, she PM'ed me asking to beta, so I'm working on getting her to improve her descriptions slowly and surely so I'll try and fix these in future chapters

3/21/2009 #17
Jason Strong

Haha. Look at this reveiw that was directed at us in the Athena vs. Poseidon story.

Wow! You guys are acting pretty obnoxious, whether you know it or not. I know AA13 aside from fanfic, and though she makes a few mistakes now and then, so does every one of the some odd amount of persons in this world! She's an amazing author, needless to say, and though I've never read Percy Jackson and the Olympians and whatnot, I know she's trying her hardest to seem as realistic as fan fiction can get. Can you please pointing out her errors? FYI, SHE'S AWESOME! Love you, *mea*!! :D me 3/21/2009 #18
Deleted84493

...She's never read Percy Jackson, but from this, she can tell that her friends fic is amazing?

3/22/2009 #19
Jason Strong

Isn't it arrogant?

3/22/2009 #20
Deleted84493

yeah, arrogant, what I was thinking

3/22/2009 #21
storm-brain

it could just be well written and stuff.

3/22/2009 #22
Aish Sheva

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4909202/1/Welcom_to_The_Willow

Urgh. She even spelled the title wrong.

3/22/2009 #23
Deleted84493

... That's quite horrifying, I mean, how hard is it to spell welcome?

Nice review on there though :D

3/22/2009 #24
Aish Sheva

Geez, that was a while ago. The author and I got into a gigantic argument about it. XD In the end, she admitted that her story WAS bad and asked me for tips on how to improve it!

3/22/2009 #25
Jason Strong

Ha. Yeah, it's like spelling Aphrodite wrong and not fixing it. Plain lazy.

3/22/2009 #26
Deleted84493

I hate it when people get the gods names wrong, it's a pain in the neck

3/22/2009 #27
Jason Strong

I know.

How hard is it to spell 'Hera' without spelling it fifteen different ways.

hera

Hare

Reah

Haer

and so on.

3/22/2009 #28
Deleted84493

I saw someone repeatedly spell Zeus 'Zues'

3/22/2009 #29
storm-brain

that might have been me...

3/22/2009 #30
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