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Georgasaurus

Ohai, troll. GTFO and scratch for attention elsewhere.

11/17/2010 #61
Ashley Greenwood

Im sorry I am not a troll Im sorry you all think so

11/17/2010 #62
obi-glasses

Since I refuse to ruin my sanity on the grounds of curiosity just this once, I reviewed Georgie's ... uh, the one with the Joker and the character being written out and all that shit and stuff.

What are you looking at?!

E!OSHITIALMOSTFORGOT: Review http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6430572/1/Hidden for meh, please?

11/17/2010 . Edited 11/17/2010 #63
Shinsou808

Reviewed Hidden. *phew* My review on the "Hobbit" story would be a waste of time as, frankly 46 reviews for a 30k fic is plenty. Asking for more across multiple boards is petty. Just stop. I think after 46 reviews you should have a basic understanding of what is demanded for improvement. Do you even read their advice?

Can someone review Guns of Fate? Feel free to review any chapter (or the whole story) if you wish but I'd prefer some feedback on the most recent one.

11/17/2010 #64
Chiaztolite

Reviewed "Guns of Fate". I think the review was successfully submitted and I could see the number of reviews increased but could not find it on the page. Perhaps it's just taking longer time to be uploaded? Shinsou808, let me know if you can't see my review.

If anyone is a fan of Inuyasha, or don't mind reading Inuyasha fanfics, I'd like some feedback on either one of these:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6227175/1/Rulers_of_Four_Directions

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6251342/1/The_Story_of_Higurashi_Seirin

Thanks!

11/18/2010 #65
Magical Mistress Sarai

I reviewed Rules of Four Direction. I greatly enjoy the technique employed in the story.

I'm looking for reviews on Naruto: Kurashio. I really would like some opinion on the characterization of my OCs or the plot in general (dealing with the action scenes and the pacing) because I've gotten very little feedback in that area.

11/18/2010 #66
Chiaztolite

Reviewed Naruto Kurashio. I really enjoyed the chapter, especially the fight scenes. Great work.

This time, I'd like to request a review for The Story of Higurashi Seirin.

Thanks in advance!

11/19/2010 #67
Hamfast Gamgee

Reviewed the story of Higurashi Seirin. Interesting tale, though Anime is a fandom I don't know at all! Well, seen as my last tale wasn't totally well received, how about someone reviwing this old one I wrote a little while back from an old TV series,

There'll be some changes made today! Chapter 1, a Goodnight Sweetheart fanfic - FanFiction.Net

Thanks, Ham!

11/22/2010 #68
Magical Mistress Sarai

Reviewed "There'll Be Some Changes"... I was never really a fan of the movie, and my feelings for the fic were about the same; however, I tried to give some grammatical advise on dialogue...

I have a new fic I've started and I'd like some thoughts on the premise: The Apprentices of Baker Street

It's a re-imagining of mid-to-late 1800's, Victorian England history (making twists and turns on old favorites like Sherlock Holmes, Jack the Ripper, Professor Moriarty, and Sweeney Todd) using characters from the Naruto fandom. Why? Because I can. Haha.

11/23/2010 . Edited 11/23/2010 #69
Tovath

Reviewed "The Apprentices of Baker Street. I only have basic knowledge of Naruto so I might have missed some things, but it was very enjoyable and I hope to read more of it soon.

I would like someone to look at Suikoden Fantasy. It could use some reviews.

11/24/2010 #70
Bitter Sea Light

*post*

11/25/2010 #71
Chiaztolite

Reviewed "Suikoden Fantasy". Unfortunately I don't know anything about the fandom but I hope my comments on the technical aspects of the chapter are useful.

If anyone could review Ch 14. of my Inuyasha fanfic "Rulers of Four Directions", I'd appreciate it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6227175/14/Rulers_of_Four_Directions

Thanks!

11/28/2010 #72
Fear The Pika

Reviewed "Rulers of Four Directions". Like with what Chiaztolite said, I know nothing about the fandom, but hopefully what I suggested can be of use.

Now if I could get a review on Chapter One of my Pokemon story, Missing Links, I'd love you for the next two minutes.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6476462/2/Missing_Links

Thanks.

12/16/2010 #73
Georgasaurus

Reviewed.

Not particularly bothered which story of mine is reviewed, but should my would-be reviewer choose to look at 'tw1l1t3', please bear in mind that I am aware that the early chapters are shit and I hate them with a passion more intense than the burning of the sun.

Or something.

12/16/2010 #74
Magical Mistress Sarai

Reviewed and read all of Tw1l1t3... I'm looking for reviews on Naruto Kurashio again. Should anyone be inclined to read the whole thing and give me their thoughts? I would love them for a long time, but I'm particularly looking for thoughts on the last three chapters.

12/18/2010 #75
Hamfast Gamgee

I haven't quite read all of Naruto Kurashio, but I have read the start and the last 3 chapters, despite not knowing much about Naruto. I thought perhaps a bit more relationship ideas and a bit less intense fighting might be good, and some of the advice towards Ninja's was a bit contradictory, now wonder some of them are confused! though I liked the start and overall the tale seemed decently plotted and well-written.

I would appreciate a review of this Star Wars little talelet of mine, thanks! Ham.

Endless Star Wars, a Star Wars fanfic - FanFiction.Net

12/22/2010 #76
Magical Mistress Sarai

Reviewed Endless Star Wars.

I'm looking for reviews on The Apprentices of Baker Street (it just updated, but I'm looking for con-crit on the story as a whole); though I would also take reviews on Naruto: Kurashio as always. ;)

Much love to people who help keep this game moving!

12/30/2010 #77
bajuwa

Just reviewed the prologue for Magical Mistress Sarai's story: The Apprentices of Baker Street

Although I've only read/reviewed the prologue so far, I will continue on to the other chapters as soon as I can =)

I'm new to this whole thing, but I'm looking for reviews on my mythological/fantasy/nature/not-quite-a-fanfic story: Elementalist

I know it's long, but I would appreciate reviews on the latest chapter(s) if possible as the prologue has many reviews already ^^~

12/31/2010 #78
Tovath

I reviewed the Elementalist. I hope you will find it useful bajuwa.

I could still use some reviews for Suikoden Fantasy.

1/1/2011 #79
Mistress of DarkSerpents

Hey, *waves*

Looking for reviews for my stories, the two that are most popular that I have written apparently.

Underworld fandom: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6504455/1/Blood_Bonds

Twilight fandom (yeah, it's Twilight. I like it, so what): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6596731/1/Second_Chances

please, please, please, review

1/5/2011 #80
Mistress of DarkSerpents

Hey, I gave you your review for that story you said needed reviews. So, yeah.

Anyways, I'm practically begging for more reviews for Blood Bonds and Second Chances. Please.

1/6/2011 #81
Cerulean City

Hey, I gave you your review for that story you said needed reviews. So, yeah. Make sure it's a review of the person directly above you before asking for a review; thanks!

1/6/2011 #82
The Forbidden Truth

Reviewed Second Chances. I'd really appreciate if someone would review An Innocent Affair. Thank you~!

1/10/2011 #83
Onyx Gallan

If anyone still reads Spyro fics, I've got a new one that I would like some good feedback on.

It's about Flame though so I hope you like it. Plus it's sci-fi and post apocalyptic.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6616916/2/

1/11/2011 #84
Onyx Gallan

I reviewed An Innocent Affair. Good Twilight Fic. Very descriptive too.

1/11/2011 #85
Persephone999

I've just reviewed Flame of the Arch. Could someone please give me some feedback on You Can't See Me?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6596383/1/You_cant_see_me

1/12/2011 #86
Onyx Gallan

I will do that for you.

1/12/2011 #87
Persephone999

Thanks. I should warn you that this isn't the best thing I've ever written.

1/12/2011 #88
Onyx Gallan

I've reviewed it.

1/12/2011 #89
Tr0llzaya

Reviewed, Flame of the Arch.

2/3/2011 #90
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