The Suffering RP
Become an escaped prisoner or guard in Carnate and destroy the malefactors. Can you make it off the island? If you do, can you survive Baltimore?
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Age (Can't be under 18 unless they're not prisoners or guards):

Occupation (Inmate, CO, etc):




Weapons (two only):

Insanity Mode Form (if they have one):


7/25/2010 . Edited 7/25/2010 #1
Akuma no Musuko

Name: Frederick Thompson

Age: 28

Prisoner or Guard: Prisoner

Bio: Despite killing dozens of people and being incarcerated in one of the toughest prisons in Maryland, Frederick was actually arrested for, get this, tax evasion, and received what was noted as a 5 year sentence. In reality, he was given the death sentence. He was just a year from death when hell broke loose and the malefactors gathered. It was actually, for him, his freedom.

Personality: Quiet, cold, brutal killer, can warm up to people he likes and trusts.

Appearance: 5'11", average skin tone, black hair that goes down to his shoulders, gray eyes, soul patch on his chin, standard prison jumpsuit, white sneakers.

Weapons (two only): Sledgehammer and a revolver

Insanity Form (if they have one): "see profile picture"

Extra: He can sense auras, eliminating the need for a flashlight. He will also, however, hallucinate and see the ghosts of everyone he killed.

7/25/2010 . Edited 7/26/2010 #2

Name: Tony "The Typewriter" Greens

Age: 35

Occupation: Inmate

Bio: Tony was a Mafia Hitman, and was currently employed in a Diamond Heist. He didn't kill anyone, as instructed. However, he was convicted earlier for killing numerous rival gangs with Automatic weapons, hence the nickname "The Typewriter."

Personality: Rude, but also somehow able to be kind at rare times. Usually Laid Back and Relaxed. Bad Temper.

Appearance: Eventually, he gets rid of his prison uniform, and takes back his favorite clothes: A Black suit, Black tie, white shirt, Wing tip shoes, and Classic 80's Ray Ban Sunglasses. (Resevoir Dogs Ref) He looks similar to Al Pacino when he was in Scar Face, and a little bit Pierce Brosnan 007.

Weapons: Tommy Gun, (Later Modified) Defribulator.

Insanity Mode Form: Like Two Face. Half his suit goes opposite color and becomes clean in contrast to the black side's dirt and whatnot. the other half of his face goes opposite into a horrible deformed face, with ghost white hair, contrast to his black hair.

Extra: While sleeping, when he has a bad dream, he Laughs in his sleep, and eventually starts to cry.

7/29/2010 . Edited 7/31/2010 #3
Akuma no Musuko

Cool, a mobster. Accepted.

7/29/2010 #4
The Ghost Child

Name: Jaycen 'Reaver' Victory

Age: 18

Prisoner/Guard: Prisoner

Bio: Jaycen is the youngest prisoner this island has seen..also the most dangerous of them all..He killed 30 guards within a matter of minets apon landing on the island..they tried to kill him but there efferts were for nothing as he seemed to enter a different state of mind as they were about to kill him. They locked him up in his own cell block as they found any other cell block they put him into, everybody but him seemed to die. His victims were found with hundreds of stab wounds and cleanly sliced into neat strips of meat, they had no idea what to call him and chose the first word that came out of his mouth when they found him, Reaver .When hell broke lose the guards set him free to even the playing field against the deamons. There's a rumor going around that Jaycen is some kind of demonic monster.

Personality:Normal Jaycen: A quiet, peaceful fellow most of the time but he also has a alternate personality which is the killer. Killer Jaycen: A inventive, brutal, quiet guy.

Appearance: A 5'7, semi tan, short blond hair, green eyes, he wears a blood spattered straight jacket with holes on the left and right sides to show he's also wearing a normal prison jumpsuit as his arms are coming out of the holes, black boots.

Weapons: Two Katanas

Insanity form: The Upper half is a giant red six armed Slayer with long chains with spikes at the end of them on his back, ( eight , two for the upper section, two for the upper middle section, two for the lower middle section, and two for the lower section and all starting by the spine.)save the head is attached still while the lower half is that of a giant spider.

Extra: Normal Jaycen seems to make everything brighter by him being around, while Killer Jaycen causes great madness/insanity to everybody around him. He really turns into his insane status.

3/26/2011 . Edited 3/27/2011 #5
Akuma no Musuko

While the description sounds cool and all, I think being able to kill 30 guards in a matter of minutes seems a little too powerful. Then again, the whole 'berserker mode' seems to clear things up at least, so I guess it would be okay. Maybe you could at least make that section as sort of a rumor that could possibly be proven true when the Malefactors hit.

Other than that, Jaycen seems pretty interesting, especially with his Insanity Mode form. He's accepted.

3/27/2011 #6
The Ghost Child

What do you want the rumor to be and I'll add it.

3/27/2011 #7
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