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ZadArchie

Story: Time Waits For No OneContinued!

Author: Conjuror of Words

Fandom: Kung Fu Panda

Violation(s): Chapter 6 is a non-story announcement chapter. Author ignored review and published new stories. Compliant


Story: RWBY: What if?

Author: Weiss Schneezed

Fandom: RWBY

Violation(s): Chapter 5 is a non-story announcement chapter. Author ignored review and published new stories.


Story: high school dxd the halloween musical special

Author: PresidentRiasGremory1990

Fandom: High School DxD

Violation(s): Copyrighted song lyrics and chat/script format where the song lyrics are. Author ignored review and updated other stories with copyrighted song lyrics.

Deleted


Story: LustClan

Author: ThornTheRouge

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): MA explicit content, author's note/character list chapters, and accepting character requests via review. I was making some progress with this author until our fun little "fantard" from the Worst Response thread and his friends started talking to this one. Managed to convince the author to keep the work up. Author has since posted new stories.


Story: The Woman In Red

Author: Sparkles21

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author did promise me they would take out the explicit stuff. But, recently saw them leaving reviews on another story I was reviewing, several days after we had had our conversation, but no changes to their story.

Compliant


Story: The Gadd Files

Author: NormanWhitesmith

Fandom: Mario

Violation(s): Accepting ideas via review. Author contacted me to ask for help and ideas, but instead decided to update other stories rather than fixing this one.


Story: I Could Fall In Love

Author: Doggerwolf

Fandom: Teen Titans

Violation(s): Copyrighted song lyrics. Author sent back PMs with excuses like "It's too stressful to make changes" and "You're not the boss of this site."


Story: What Would They Say

Author: Queen-of-the-Merry-Men

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and updated other stories on profile.


Story: All of You

Author: Once-Upon-A-What

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update story.

Deleted

2/4 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 2/8 #2,131
DarkSiren49

R&R'd on all of yours' Zad. Working on CS now.

Feb. 11th: Now working on reports in the CS.

2/4 . Edited 2/11 #2,132
ZadArchie

Story: A lovers way of affection (Goku x Gohan)

Author: hamzy

Fandom: Dragon Ball Z

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Twice now, I've reviewed a story by this author for MA content. They wait several months, delete the story I have reviewed, and post a brand new MA story. This to me screams that they delete the story to avoid the reviews, thinking the problem will just go away, and have learned nothing.

Deleted


Story: Greenpool: The Reboot(Uncut and Awesome!)

Author: JP-Ryder

Fandom: Teen Titans

Violation(s): MA explicit content and copyrighted song lyrics in chapter 7. Author ignored review and updated other stories.


Story: Hindsight

Author: Lala Kate

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and updated other stories.


Story: Pups and the Breakup

Author: BabyDJ2COOL

Fandom: PAW Patrol

Violation(s): Chat/script format. Author tries to use the "it's too hard" excuse.


Story: Stolen (Rebooted)

Author: Pixeleve

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): First chapter is a double-post of another story on their profile. Author continuously argues that because the second chapter isn't a copy, everything's fine, we don't offer any "real" solutions, etc. Author then blocked me.


Story: When the Clans Move to Twolegplace

Author: Pebblewish

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): Second chapter is a non-story character list. Also, judging by the review page, it might be interactive SYOC territory as well. Not 100% sure. Author ignored review and updated other stories. Compliant

2/11 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 3/4 #2,133
MrGoodyTwoShoes

Story: A Naruto Version of Yu-Gi-Oh! Duel Monsters (Japanese Version) Author: NaruHinaF Fandom: Naruto: non-story character list and announcement that author is planning on writing a story. Author has nothing but similar to this on their page and claims "but I am writing a story, I just ant people to know about it. Plus, people pm me saying they like this".

Deleted

2/12 . Edited 2/12 #2,134
Whimsical Symphony
Doing some reporting. Sorry for being scarce. I should be around a little more next week since I have my reading week.
2/12 #2,135
Metal Navy

Story: Journey to freedom Author: MGstars Fandom: Once Upon a Time Violation: Interactive by replying to reviews. Author is adamant about not changing it.

2/12 . Edited 2/13 #2,136
DarkSiren49

R&R'd on Navy's and one of Zad's. Your suspicions on When the Clans Move to Twolegplace was correct Zad, there was a character sheet in 9. Tried to review on Greenpool and Hindsight to, but it seems I've been blocked. Working on the rest now.

2/18 #2,137
ZadArchie

Story: You Promised

Author: Scarlet Yeager

Fandom: One Piece

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update the story.


Story: Ask Or Dare Ninjago And Nexo Knights!

Author: DashieTehKnight

Fandom: LEGO Nexo Knights & Ninjago

Violation(s): Interactive truth or dare written in chat/script format. Author ignored review and updated other stories on profile.


Story: Fester

Author: Whas'up

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author had asked follow-up questions about how to fix it and seemed eager to work on changes. Author has since updated other stories on profile without changes to this one. Gentle reminder may be all that's necessary.


Story: Movie Night

Author: AOBZ

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author continued to update the story with an author's note arguing that by giving the fair warning it was M, everything was okay. Be aware, author has about four pages worth of reviews since then full of defenders.

Goody note: Author has since updated summary to include "Spoiler alert: Porn happens. This is porn". Fair to say they know and don't care or based on their reviewers/defenders posting don't think the rules apply to them. Wouldn't be shocked if they think Zad and myself made up the rules given the attitudes.


Story: Fnaf the complete saga

Author: jima2164

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): First chapter is a non-story list of author's notes. Author responded by posting another non-story chapter.


Story: Total Drama All-Stars Rebooted

Author: Zevoros

Fandom: Total Drama Series

Violation(s): Copyrighted song lyrics in chapter 1. Author ignored review and updated profile.


Story: Redfeather's story

Author: Redfeather8829

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): First chapter is a non-story cast list. Author ignored review and updated profile.

2/18 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 2/19 #2,138
Metal Navy

Story: The Brother's Grimm Chronicles: THE TALES OF REMNANT BOOK ONE Author: weasel AKA boundedsumo Fandom: RWBY Violation: AN as full chapters. Author has given up on writing apparently as he updated all his stories with the same note.

2/18 #2,139
ZadArchie

Just checking in. Due to continued site glitches slowing down loading speeds for pages, I can't complete my usual checks on stories I've reviewed. So, I'll just stick to reporting on the CS this week.

2/24 #2,140
MrGoodyTwoShoes
Just checking in. Due to continued site glitches slowing down loading speeds for pages, I can't complete my usual checks on stories I've reviewed. So, I'll just stick to reporting on the CS this week.

I think it's safe to say that this week's site glitch has really messed with things for everyone so I'm willing to call it a mulligan and say to folks to work where they can, look at the CS (especially the high priority stuff) and we'll add to things next week.

as a bit of a comment/addon - it's been a while since I've seen a review section that was a complete echo chamber and hivemind but that one fic you brought in Zad really takes the cake. Today they even had someone say the rules don't apply to them.

2/24 . Edited 2/24 #2,141
DarkSiren49

Trying to work on reports now.

2/25 #2,142
WargishBoromirFan

Logan: My First Fictional Story by Loganator356 - From the tipline: in the wrong category (finally dropped some anime references in the second chapter) and interactive reader insert (and the formatting's so bad there may be other issues I missed). I've been PMing him mostly about his more recently updated work, which has MA content when it's not a non-story, but been bashing my head too hard against this wall to drop a review on the other one. Deleted.

Seeking Home by Roach10302 - Non-story challenge. Author is a repeat offender, though at least his latest attempts a plot. Hopefully a gentle clue-rod ought to work for both, but more hope with this one than the former.Deleted

2/28 . Edited 3/1 #2,143
Metal Navy

I know I'm on hiatus, but this is the last story I'll leave here until my return.

Story:The Librarian Author: LeoTheQueen Fandom: Twilight Violation: MA content. Author doesn't want to fix it.

2/28 . Edited by WargishBoromirFan, 3/1 #2,144
ZadArchie

Story: winter lyoko continued

Author: justimtaylor48

Fandom: Code Lyoko & Rise of the Guardians

Violation(s): Chapters 1, 2, and 5 are non-story announcements. Author came posting onto the WA forum, and several other members had reviewed them about this problem. Others posted the same warnings on the thread this author started. It was on this thread where I posted essentially the same thing I would in any ordinary review. Author ignored warnings and updated profile recently.


Story: Guess The Warrior Cat!

Author: gracefulhorse

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): Story is a non-story, interactive game. Author ignored review and posted new stories.


Story: Singing your Shades

Author: Don't trust your eyes

Fandom: Fifty Shades Trilogy

Violation(s): Copyrighted song lyrics are present in the story. Author ignored review and continued to update the story.


Story: A Denial of Freedom

Author: Brosephg

Fandom: Toaru Majutsu no Index

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and updated profile picture.


Story: Falling Fast

Author: PurplePix13

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and posted new stories.


Story: Schoolies

Author: Relliurad

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update story.


Story: The Demeaned Mistake

Author: thecrazystorywriter14

Fandom: Zootopia

Violation(s): Story contains copyrighted song lyrics. Author ignored review and updated their profile.

Compliant - lyrics removed


Story: Getting Familiar

Author: DarkHumor131

Fandom: Pokemon

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and posted new stories.


Story: Tugging on Heartstrings

Author: NonaRose

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and posted new stories.


Story: And if you're not made for me

Author: FollowThatConvoy

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and updated with two non-story chapters. Please note, there are several defender reviews on this one as readers try to convince them to leave the story as is.


Story: Warriors Lemons

Author: Chasestar

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update story.


Story: The New Prophecy

Author: HappytheExceed16

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update.


Story: Lily the shishkabab

Author: The Bodacious E

Fandom: Loud House

Violation(s): Originally, this was MA content. Author changed it to a one-liner spam story. Given how many such stories exist on author's profile, I'm calling troll on this one. Report Only


Story: Rizzles song fanfiction

Author: kenziestar

Fandom: Rizzoli & Isles

Violation(s): Author uses copyrighted song lyrics. Author sent back a negative PM response indicating they don't care.


Story: The Collar

Author: littledragonflyson

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Found this one after several defender reviewers kept claiming this one was so much worse than all the other stories I've reviewed in this fandom. So, they have their adoring fans to thank for this. Author ignored review and continued to update the story.


Story: Truth or Dare!

Author: Chica the pirate

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): Accepting requests and ideas via review. Author ignored review and continued to update.


Story: Love is a complicated thing

Author: Isakindofnormal

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and continued to update.


Story: Fnaf World

Author: Bladedmist

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): Chat/script format. Originally also included you-based language. Author removed that, but insists that chat/script is the only way that readers can understand who's talking. Compliant

3/4 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 3/8 #2,145
DarkSiren49

I'm late, but I'm working on reports now.

3/4 #2,146
Whimsical Symphony
Working on reporting now! Sorry I haven't been around that much! Semester is crazy since theres only 5 weeks left and journalism sucks since I'm running around doing interviews.
3/6 #2,147
Metal Navy

I'm still on hiatus, but this author whom I was helping throughout the month has decided to block me when he had only one thing left to fix. He fixed everything else I pointed out, but I guess he got sick of me.

Story: Danganronpa: Hope's Lie Author: liammarklh88 Fandom: Dangan Ronpa Kibou no Gakuen to Zetsubou no Koukousei Violation: Script format in chapters 13-15.

3/10 . Edited 3/10 #2,148
ZadArchie

Story: Gathering Darkness

Author: SkyStorm99

Fandom: Warriors

Violation(s): First chapter is a non-story character list. Author ignored review and continued to update story.


Story: Let's Play A Game

Author: moonlessmondays

Fandom: Once Upon a Time

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author ignored review and updated other stories on profile.


Story: Pokemon Theme Songs: Pokeshipping Edition

Author: Northstar Pokeshipper

Fandom: Pokemon

Violation(s): Use of copyrighted song lyrics. Author ignored review and continued to update story.

Deleted

3/11 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 3/31 #2,149
DarkSiren49

Going through CS before working on the new editions here.

3/11 #2,150
WargishBoromirFan

Code Geass Heroes' Awakening R2 by Nick Roberts - Script format. Author is a repeat violator who wants to play the "I'm not good at quoting so I won't even try" game.

3/14 #2,151
DarkSiren49

Looks like the site is suffering another issue. I can't access some of the archives, or stories on either device. I've resent the reports on all the old, and reported on of the newer editions.

3/17 #2,152
MrGoodyTwoShoes

Story: The Legend of Fire Author: UchihaMadara1997 Fandom: Naruto - Plagiarism. Word for word copy of hidaruma'a story "The Will of Fire Still Burns" . Author ignored review and updated. This one is in the sights of many people but do not hesitate to hold back. We really need to do our best to get rid of people like this.

3/19 #2,153
Whimsical Symphony
Reviewing that last story because plagiarism is repulsive. Also reporting everything else.
3/21 #2,154
ZadArchie

To shed some time on my to-do list tomorrow, I'll go ahead and get a head start tonight by posting my list for the week.

Story: Ex-Tadaseluver123

Author: WizWit

Fandom: Tokyo Mew Mew

Violation(s): Non-story announcement. Author ignored review and updated other stories on profile.


Story: Watching Their Fates

Author: TheWonderland101

Fandom: Trollhunters

Violation(s): MST and chat/script in certain areas. Author ignored review and continued to update the story.


Story: Truth or Dare (Please send in dares and truths!)

Author: Dhanoj

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): Chat/script and accepting requests via review. Author ignored review and continued to update.


Story: Link x Zelda (WIP Storyline, Chapter 2)

Author: DiamondLyssa

Fandom: Legend of Zelda

Violation(s): Misuse of chapter function by posting separate chapters as separate stories. Author ignored review and posted new stories on profile.


Story: ChinaChubby Reader

Author: littlemissstrange823

Fandom: Hetalia - Axis Powers

Violation(s): MA explicit content and you-based language. Author ignored review and published new stories on profile.


Story: CONFESSIONS OF A JEWISH B****

Author: RudyTheWriter

Fandom: Misc. Books

Violation(s): Original story and title obviously contains curse words. Author ignored review and published new original stories. Given that this author brought attention to themselves by spamming the Writers Anonymous forum with the same message over and over, I'm calling troll on this one. Report Only


Story: Reading Remnants of the Wild

Author: ultima-owner

Fandom: Legend of Zelda & RWBY

Violation(s): MST of another fanfic, Remnants of the Wild. Author ignored review and updated other stories on their profile.


Story: PAW Patrol: Life of Crime

Author: Lucas the LionFox

Fandom: PAW Patrol

Violation(s): Chat/script. Author said they would move it to Wattpad. They instead updated other stories on their profile.


Story: TOD

Author: Professer Kitten

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): Chat/script and accepting requests via review. Author reviewed themselves to tell me to bug off.

3/24 #2,155
MrGoodyTwoShoes

Story: KisIta Poems Author: Korra Morgenstern7 Fandom: Naruto - Interactive by asking for people to submit story ideas. Originally from a PM tip and the author has ignored review and updated. Appears to be doing this across multiple stories on their account.

3/25 #2,156
DarkSiren49

Working on reports for all new entries.

3/25 #2,157
MrGoodyTwoShoes

Story: OCs needed for Mist of Danger Author: AviRay Fandom: Warriors - interactive character submission sheet, non-story chapters/updates. Author ignored review and updated. Author is fully aware of what they're doing as with the latest update they made a vain attempt at adding actual content only to avoid being reported.

Deleted

3/27 . Edited 4/4 #2,158
ZadArchie

Short list today.

Story: Teen Titans the New Team (SYOC)

Author: Totaldramafan04

Fandom: Teen Titans

Violation(s): First chapter is a non-story character-submission sheet, and second chapter is non-story author's notes. Author is accepting characters via review. Author ignored review and updated other SYOC stories on profile.


Story: Our Little Miracle

Author: XellossLina

Fandom: Akatsuki no Yona

Violation(s): MA explicit content. Author deleted story then reposted story to get rid of my review.


Story: The Conspiracy

Author: Zanrok

Fandom: Zootopia

Violation(s): Copyrighted song lyrics present. Author reviewed themselves to argue why they are in the right.


Story: When the clock strikes midnight

Author: CM-ha

Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's

Violation(s): Second-person, reader-insert story. Author ignored review and updated profile. Compliant.


Story: Humans vs Planets

Author: Victor John Foxfire

Fandom: Star Fox & X-overs

Violation(s): Fourth chapter is a non-story announcement. Author updated this non-story chapter and their profile with a special message to me and all of CU.

Goody note: I strongly suggest this be report only. IMO this is an author that's looking for and feeding off the attention for their sad trolling attempt.

4/1 . Edited by WargishBoromirFan, 4/3 #2,159
DarkSiren49

Sorry for super lateness, Easter festivities wore me out. Going over all of these.

4/2 #2,160
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