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Rip Dead Account Go Away Jess

Story Title (with link/url): Naruto: Legacy of the Past

Author: Luna and Konoha's Flash

Fandom: Naruto

Rating: T

Genre/Type of story: Adventure

Number of current chapters: 3

Reason for request: Need some constructive critisism. Planning on a re-write

11/1/2016 #31
exoreon

Story Title (with link/url): The Silent Race - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12239251/1/The-Silent-Race

Author: Exoreon

Fandom: The Hunger Games

Rating: T

Genre/Type of story: Drama and Suspense/Regular

Number of current chapters: 3

Reason for request: I'd like to know how people feel about my writing. Do I need to work on certain things? Any advice?

Notes/Special instructions (please write a short paragraph if you have any): Please don't make your review longer than a paragraph :) all I ask

12/29/2016 #32
toledor

Story Title (with link/url): One Thousand Secrets

Author: butterfliesflyaway

Fandom: Naruto

Rating: T

Genre/Type of story: Adventure

Number of current chapters: 2

Reason for request: I want to know what I need to work on.

12/30/2016 #33
TalkingElephant

Story Title (with link/url): https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12267169/1/Iridescent

Author: TalkingElephant

Fandom: Naruto

Rating: T

Genre/Type of story: Adventure/Supernatural

Number of current chapters: Five (A prologue and four chapter)

Reason for request: I want to improve my writing abilities, but I don't have someone who can give a me a constructive criticisms and feedback about whether what I write is good or not.

Notes/Special instructions (please write a short paragraph if you have any): Please be honest. Tell me if it's good or bad. If it's bad, just bluntly tell me that it is bad and tell me how to improve it.

1/8/2017 #34
SkiesEagle

Story Title (with link/url): Hetalia: Guardians of the 50 States -https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11721648/1/Hetalia-Guardians-of-the-50-States

Author: SkiesEagle

Fandom: Hetalia - Axis Powers

Rating: T

Genre/Type of story: Advanture

Number of current chapters: 3

Reason for request: I want to know how my grammars does and how my story if struggle or not. Opinions would be nice.

Notes/Special instructions (please write a short paragraph if you have any): Eh, just a warning on my last chapter from my author's note. It quite a bit firm argument.

5/18/2017 #35
timewaster123456789

Story Title (with link/url): Reaction

Author: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5382661/

Fandom: Bleach

Rating: k some language and gore in one chapter.

Genre/Type of story: angst/tragedy vignette collection

Number of current chapters: Too many but I only want a review on the first 5

Reason for request: I want feedback on my characterizations

Notes/Special instructions (please write a short paragraph if you have any): Not really.

8/2/2017 . Edited by MrGoodyTwoShoes, 8/2/2017 #36
Missjo1988

Story Title (with link/url): Days Forgotten https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12573829/1/Days-Forgotten

Author: Missjo1988

Fandom:Dragonball

Rating:M

Genre/Type of story:Adventure/Drama/Angst

Number of current chapters: 8, but I only want input on the first 5

Reason for request: I wish to find ways to improve my writing

Notes/Special instructions (please write a short paragraph if you have any): Constructive Criticism is always welcome, that's the only way I can improve my writing.

9/2/2017 #37
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