Final Fanatsy 13 Game Play
How was playing thirteen? Do you think it was hard, easy? Was it not linear like the usual final fantasy? Was it the best one so far in the series? Tell your thoughts on the gameplay, characters, storyline.
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Weiss Rose Schnee
Since we are going to be writing a coop fic I figured Id make a thread of our ideas. That way our skits and planning wont go off topic. Or we could do this RP style and just act out the story keeping Paine and Lights POVs here. Tho keep in mind we wont be actually posting our story here on the forums thats against the rules lol but a draft of sorts not a actuall story.. Up to you how we do this tho. RP style or normal style. If you dont think this topic is importaint then feel free to delete this..
9/13/2010 #1
RikusChika778

I think RP sounds better.

9/14/2010 #2
Weiss Rose Schnee
Alright and then we can pretty much take what we RP and call it the story. who should start Paine or Lightning? meaning I can or you can xd.
9/14/2010 #3
RikusChika778

I think paine, that way Lightning can easily meet her.

9/14/2010 #4
Weiss Rose Schnee
Alright then.... \
9/15/2010 #5
Weiss Rose Schnee
Paine: I was standing on the deck of the airship as it flew over the airspace of a new world. It was known as Cocoon. I didnt understand why we were travelling outside of Spira. There werent any spheres to hunt around her. See what happened was that some group of people took note of my talents while me and my friends Yuna and Rikku were out on a hunt one day. We were also slaying fiends along the Mihan HightRoad. The man who noticed me was a man named Amador and he was looking for recruites for this Sanctum Guardian Corps. Rikku and Yuna didnt understand it either. I politely refused but of course my friends thought it was a good idea and wouldnt stop pestering me until I said yes. they were both annoying but thats just how I felt about them back when they joined the GullWings. Yuna was the one who had saved all Spira from the threat of Sin and brought us this Eternal Calm. Rikku is her annoying cousin who aided her as a guardian. So because they insisted here I am heading to the GC headquarters...
9/15/2010 #6
Weiss Rose Schnee
As Brother landed the ship Yuna nodded to me.. Yuna: Are you nervous Paine.? I gave her the best confident look I could muster but trust me I was nervous and didnt know what to expect. Rikku was acting all excited as usual. I sware that girl has a unnatural enery supply. Yuna chided her cousin as I stepped out of the ship. A few GC cadets noticed me and inquiered why I had come. " Im here to see Armador. Im the new recruit her wanted to speak with.." That got thier attention as they lead me to his office. Yuna and Rikku said they would wait for me and I hoped they did or someone would get hurt...
9/15/2010 #7
RikusChika778

That good so far. When do you want lightning to jump in?

9/15/2010 #8
Weiss Rose Schnee
Hey thanks. I had to think like Paine and sience I played the game yesterday I remembered. Light can come in now if you want her too. She could get a call from Armador saying he wants her to meet Paine who is the new recruit. That works. ...I followed the cadets to the office of Armador the Lutenent of the GC. They escorted me inside. The office wasnt big but its size impressed me. Armador looked up from his desk where he was looking over some reports. " You must be Paine. Im glad you agreed to my proposition. Make yourself comfortable while I call in the Sergent.." I nodded and took a seat. He dialed a number. " Sergent Farron Im sorry to bother you but could you come to my office at the headquarters.
9/15/2010 #9
Weiss Rose Schnee
(Accidental doublepost plz delete the post above this...)
9/15/2010 #10
RikusChika778

Lightning picks up the call that she was receiving and is talking to the man over the phone"Now?" Lightning sounded annoyed. "Yes mam." She hung up the phone and scoweled at it. A new recruit? This had better be a good one. Lightning walks down the corrider until she gets to the office. She spots Paine in the chair and surveys her. Her attitude seems fair enough. She thought as Paine stared at her coldly. "Seragant, this is Paine, the new recruit." Lightning snaps at him. "Im aware of that!" Paine stands up feeling obligated to say something to lightning about her behavior. Do you want their rlationship to be cold and mean at first, then warm up later in the story?

9/15/2010 #11
Weiss Rose Schnee
Yeah that works.. I looked at Lightning and said. " Its impolite to raise your voice at your superior officer you know. And my name is Paine. Im from Spira. Your Lutenent asked me if I wanted to join you guys. I normally dont take jobs unless a sphere is involved. My profession is sphere hunting. Just calm down if you want respect." I then glared at her and examined her curtly. ( she looks too young to be a soldier. Must be older then me tho.) I was 19 and this woman...who I realized was Sergent Farron..must be a year or so older then me." Im guessing your going to be my boss huh.." I added a bit coldly. ( What the hell did I get myself into this time..) I also thought bitterly as Armador lectured Farron on showing respect.
9/15/2010 #12
RikusChika778

"Do you hear me Sergent Farron?" Armador asked. Lightning shows no intrest whatsover just keeping a glare on her face at paine(Who the crap was she to tell her how to act?) By the looks of it Paine looked younger. (She looks a year or two older than me. The recruits are gonna eat her alive about her age.) Lightning mrks and Paine gawks at her wondering what her problem is.

9/16/2010 #13
Weiss Rose Schnee
I couldnt believe it...I was stuck with a emotionless b***. Well if she wasnt going to show me respect I wouldnt either. I cannot tolerate people who are annoying and act like they are better then you. My impression of Lightning...a coldhearted soldier. I didnt want to say anything to her so I just glared back. I did however feel sorry for Armador for having to deal with her. Maybe she was just having a bad day. My com went off.." Yuna here. Rikku wanted me to ask you how it was going.." I heard Yuna speak. " Its going great.." I said sarcastically. " Wonderful really.." Yuna want fooled. "Paine..if you want you can come back.." I honestly thought that was a good idea but i had already said im going to work for them. " Itll be ok Yuna. Oh and tell Rikku if she tries anything funny shell get hurt.." I cut off and waited for Lightning to speak to me instead of glare. Knowing Rikku she was up to something...something that would p*** me off im sure..
9/16/2010 #14
RikusChika778

he ship with Rikku and Yuna. "How you think its going, yunie?" Rikku asked her cousin. "The tone of Paines voice sounded like someone *** her off, and you know it dosent take much of that."Yuna paced around the airship. "Oh, she's doing her I hate the world attitude again." Rikku said then she got a bright idea. "I know how bout we go see yunie?! Its perfect, she needs total support from her besties in the world!" Rikku ran off the airship with Yuna following her. "Rikku, i dont think tha--!" The blonde was gone...Lightning was still glaring at Paine from afar. At this point she didnt care what she thought about her, all she knew was for standing up to her like that h*** will rise. "Sergent Farron, i need you to test her out in battle." Armador said to her. Lightnings face turns into a eveil grin. "Can i hit hard this time?" The man looks at paine before returning back to lightning. he nods. Finally, someone i can inflict pain on! Paine looks undisturbed, by the request...

9/16/2010 #15
Weiss Rose Schnee
Yuna ran after Rikku fearing that shed only get into trouble. ..I heard the mans request and I was nonetheless ready to show this Lightning that I wasnt one to be taken lightly. " You do know I wont go easy on you Sergent.." I said in a mocking tone. Id show her my real talents with my sword. Of course it was currently sheathed on my back. " So where are we going to fight Armador? Im ready anytime and anywhere.." I said smirking at Light. " By the way i warn you now im no amature.."
9/16/2010 #16
RikusChika778

Lightning who never was intimidated or threatened smirked. "I'll beleive it when i see it."Armador looked between the young women with te eeri silence and decide to brea it. "Okay!Lets hurry to where youll be battling." He stood up andwalked out the room with the girls following. Lightning could feel eyes burning a hole in her head and ignored. She would show this girl her, her place in this world new or not. Paine was going to show what he name realy means...

9/17/2010 #17
Weiss Rose Schnee
As Armador led us to where we were going to battle I felt excited. After all she may be in this military group and have experience but sometimes that isnt everything. She didnt even seem phazed by my smirk or the way i stared at her. She was confident she could best me? No I would prove her wrong. Ive had many years of practice with my weopon. Yet I was kinda nervous at the same time. I wondered if my skills would be enough against someone with a rank like Sergent. But I shook my nervousness off. I was ready to show Light some payback... and pain.. Yuna: Hey Rikku get back here..(she follows her troublemaking cousin to the building) We cant bother Paine. And were not supposed to be here.
9/17/2010 #18
RikusChika778

Paine stops and looks around thinking she couldnt hav possibly heard two familiar voices.She shook it off and kept thinking about lighning. Lightning speed ped down and she walked side by side wih Paine. "Your gonna learn your place, before you speek to me in any tone. I dont take that from anybdy and especially nt a newbie." She hissed nd sped up once more. Though she coudnt quite put hr finger on it, butshe thought she heard two voices that she wasnt aware of. Oh wellas long as it doset bother me during battle.

9/17/2010 #19
Weiss Rose Schnee
I could sware I heard them. The voices sounded like Rikku and Yuna however I had told them to stay on the ship. Light seemed to hear them as well. But I shook them off. "Hmp. Me learn my place? Ill show you what I think of that statement. Youll see.." I hissed at her then continued to walk beside her and followed Armador as he lead us somewhere. ..Yuna grabbed Rikku sharply. " Rikku we cant follow them. Paine will be angry with us and you know how she can get. Cmon lets go back.." She began dragging her cousin back to the airship deciding to ignore her if she started protesting.
9/17/2010 #20
RikusChika778

Rikku squirmed in her cousin grip constantly until she decided on plan b. puling yunas hand up Rikku bit her and the brunette pulled back about to scream until she remembered where she was. "Sorry Yunie." Rikku apologized, before running off to where she thought pain might be at. "Rikku!" Lightning repeatedly reminded herself this amateur was on her level no matter how cold she tried acting. It takes years of pratice... Your just wanna of those people who want favortism.She would have to earn it. "Make sure you equip yourself correctly paine, lightning is not the one to be pushed over in battle." Lightining watched as Armador gave tips to paine on how to beat her. He could tell her all he wanted, but she had a weapon up of her sleeve. This was a dangerous one too, even she couldn't tame it for awhile. Lightning drew her gun blade and waited for paine to get ready. This was going to be fun...

9/17/2010 #21
Weiss Rose Schnee
Yuna sighed and followed after her cousin healing her bite wound also scowling. I listened to what Armador was telling me. I could tell by looking at Lightning that she was one to be taken lightly. She could think of me what she wanted but I wasnt going to loose at any cost. I equipped my sword and maybe my special dresssphere. I knew it was cheating but if she wanted to play rough then so could I. i also equipped some items that casted haste and protective spells. This was going to be...interesting.. I then went back to Lightning. " Ok im ready. be prepared.." I said sharply..
9/17/2010 #22
RikusChika778

"Okay, im ready. be on alert." Lightning mocked paine with a girly tone. Paine looked annoyed and rolled her eyes just in timefor lightning to lunge. Paine barley dodged it receivinga light scratch from how close she was. She quickly backed away putting distance between them. Lightning laughed at her quetly and mocked her once again. "What happened i thougt yu were ready?" Paine growled at her with annoyance. No way was she going to looe to her. "Come on my gunblad is ready to slice something!" Lightning yelled at paine.

9/18/2010 #23
Weiss Rose Schnee
I gotta admit this woman was good. I barely had time to react before she sliced me. I didnt like the fact that she had mocked me and I wasnt going to make a fool of myself. "Hmp.." I then regained my composure. " Slice this!" Then I got serious and rushed at her swinging my sword with determination and fury. " I dont plan to loose to you!" I shouted as I also used my haste bangle to increase my speed. ive faced many tough opponents so why sould this be different. But I did admire her skill. At least she wasnt a hopeless amature like Leblanc and her goon..they were amatures..I chuckled then resumed my attacks smoothly. Armador watched us taking mental notes as Yuna reluctantly followed Rikku. " Hey Rikku where are we going?" She asked.
9/18/2010 #24
RikusChika778

"To see about paine." Rikku said and her cousin grabbed hr once again. "What isyur problem?! Your eing a funsucker, if you dont antto be caught in it te leave!" Rikku snatched hr hand once agin and ran off t wher she heard metal hiting (lightning and paine) and Yuna hesitated before following. Lightning hdnt evn gothit by paine yet. For a girl that proclaimed she coul do so much she was pathetic in gility even wit haste cast. Paine came at her again swinging her sword and lightning dodged it by backfliping onto the wall and pushing off at her. You wanna play games, then lets go! Lightning pressed a hidden button on her glove and gravity stopped causing paine to loose balance and lightningto gain the advantage point...

9/18/2010 #25
Weiss Rose Schnee
Yuna heard the sound of metal as well and ran after her cousin who had escaped her yet again. " Rikku.." she sighed but once again followed. I was taken completely aback by her sudden tactic. Whatever she had on her it was some kind of gravity altering device. I felt myself quickly loosing my balance cursing as I did but I wasnt going to give up. She avoided my attack simply by kicking off the wall. I had to admit maybe I did underestimate her and was now being punished for it. However I worked to regain my balance but it wasnt easy. I knew Light would follow up her attack just as quickly. She did live up to her namesake it seemed. " Thats a cheap trick.." I muttered as I finally regained myself and charged at her again.
9/18/2010 #26
RikusChika778

"Cheap tricks are sometimes the best way to win." Lightning replied as she heard what paine ha to say. "You dont excpect every opponent to play fairly do you? Every person always shoul have a trick up their sleeve. You do well to remember that." Lightning made another strike andthis time paine pulled he sword up from the gravity and blocked the attack shoking the sergent. The shocking part was that she hit the graviy device on lightnings arm stopping the whole thing. Now paine as free to attack. But lightning wouldget her just wait. Just as they were about to attack again pain heard an overly familiar voice getting closer.

9/18/2010 #27
Weiss Rose Schnee
" Oh Ill remember those words alright..." I smirked as I attacked and to my shock I managed to destroy her gravity device. I smirked at the look on her face then as I was about to attack again as I now had the advantage I paused. " Sergent you hear that?" I asked as the voices sounded familiar. I growled softly. Rikku and Yuna must have followed me. Yuna still tried to get Rikku to reconsider but it was too late as the other two Gullwings had made it almost to the area where the fight was going on. " Were about to have unwanted company.."
9/18/2010 #28
RikusChika778

"Unwanted?" Lightning asked. Then she relized what happened. "Your rying to cheat! Devices and equipment are allowed not people!" Lightning saw Rikku and Yuna run in and she growled. Armador shook his head and knew what he had to do. "Miss paine, you cant have company inside the headquarters, its very rare people fight the sergent,but you were an exception. Im sorry,but you will have to fight someone else today." Paine looked in disbeleif. Rikku and Yuna exchanged scared looks and lightning shook her head in shame. "You an embarssement already." She said before walking away. "Oops" Rikku said when paines head snapped up to look at her...

9/19/2010 #29
Weiss Rose Schnee
I tried to explain myself but I knew they wouldnt believe me. " I honestly had no idea they came.." But the looks on Lightning and Armadors faces were stern. I was now very pissed so I just went off on the two. I was aware that Light and Armador would hear me. The whole base must have. I yelled until I couldnt possibly yell anymore and didnt let either of them explained. They ruined my chance to prove my worth..I looked at Armador and just nodded as I left as well and watched Light but I caught up to her.." Light can I at least explain. I honestly didnt invite them to come with me. Rikku is always doing things like this. They just snuck inside honestly.." I said sincerily. " and call me what you want but ive had years of experience.." My voice was hoarse from yelling but i made she shed hear me out...
9/19/2010 #30
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