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Mijime iru isn't a story, and is basically a list of the characters. I've been fighting with this author for some time now, and they continue to refuse to take it down or change it. I've reported it, but nothing has been happening. If anyone wants to help, feel free to report it as well.

7/13/2011 #91
Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond

This author is more lulzy than anyone I've ever encountered. Here's his infringements/poorly written stories for your critique~

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5372519/1/Timon_Pumbaa_Pumbaa_Pumbaa_Pumbaa (Not sure what -FLASH- is supposed to be, but it probably shouldn't be there. Grammar tips?)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6110672/1/I_Will_Not_Bow (Songfic). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5152886/1/Do_you_know_your_Lions (Some kinda quiz thing. I'd call this... maybe interactive? Not too sure, but it's not really fan fiction by my standards, quizzing others about the fandom). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6179788/1/Backround_Music (Two-chapter songfic story, and he couldn't even spell 'background' correctly in the title). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6725588/1/A_Prophecy_At_Midnight (Maybe* original fiction. There is no trace of any canon characters in this story. Summary says it is a background story to an OC and that alone... so I'm not sure). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6725602/1/Birth_of_a_Guardian (Original fiction. Look at the summary, it even says it's not an Alpha/Omega fan fic). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6730004/1/Kibas_Vengance (Summary says 'another background story', so this doesn't look like fan fiction either. Author misspelled the word 'vengeance' in the title). Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4895829/1/Kingdom_Hearts_Truth_or_Dare (Truth or dare. Later chapters say he's changing format from script and making it non-interactive, but the chapters of script and interactivity still remain). Script format removed.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7131706/1/A_Massacre_At_Midnight (Another "if not the biggest part" of his OC's back-story. Did not find mention of any canon characters in this story. Bolded dialogue portions later on). Deleted.

7/13/2011 . Edited 7/18/2011 #92

This author (lexrutter1214) has 14 stories, all of which are against the rules in many ways. They're all multiple stories of the same content but put into different categories. All are announcements/author's notes, and do not contain any story material. I've reported all of them and have alerted the author, but they refuse to take it down.

(Sorry about that, you can go ahead and delete it. I tried but it said I had to have an admin do it.)

7/13/2011 #93

This story is the complete script of Princess Mononoke, word for word. It's in script format, and is clearly copyrighted.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/396864/1/Princess_Mononoke_bScript_b

7/13/2011 #94

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7070499/1/Code_Lyoko_OC_and_CL_Interrigation# (interactive, chat/script format) Story Deleted.

7/14/2011 . Edited 7/16/2011 #95

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6414279/1/SCARY_GHOST_STORY_FETUSING_CHUCK_NORRIS Not only is there about a billion things wrong with it, I've just been dared to actually get it removed, because they refuse to do it. I'm about 99.99% sure that it's simply a troll fic, because there's no way someone can violate that many rules in one fic.

7/14/2011 #96

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7180220/1/Vegeta_and_Goku_fall_deeply_in_love# Songfic. The author has been informed and refuses to take it down. I'm 100% sure that this writer is a troll, there are about 50 stories, all of which degrade the English language and they seem to feed off of the flames (troller).

7/14/2011 #97
The Hendog
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6919915/1/Alpha_Male --------- A repost of an explicit fiction that I convinced this guy to remove before. However, all he did was change the AN and lie about toning down the sex to conform with the maximum M rating (he did nothing of the sort) before reposting it. I reported him and warned him, but I figured I would let you all take a shot at him, too. Have fun!
7/15/2011 #98
The Hendog
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6919397/1/Family_Ties --------- this is also a repost of another fic containing explicit sex. This time, the author didn't change anything, just straight-up reposted. And he was so reasonable when he pulled it down, too. But that doesn't matter. Review/report at will.
7/15/2011 . Edited 7/15/2011 #99
Madame Apathy


Mary Sue.

7/17/2011 #100


Check out chapter two, and that would explain it all. Oh, and chapter one's an A/N.


7/17/2011 . Edited by Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond, 7/22/2011 #101

Concrit is nice?:


It's one of mine, going to be a multi!chaptered fic. I'd like concrit if you please.

7/17/2011 . Edited 8/14/2011 #102

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7155250/1/Back_To_December (songfic)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7184354/1/No_longer_the_Sohmas_curse (interactive, SYOC) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6577206/1/Birthday_Fun (lemon)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5747490/1/End_of_The_Serenade (songfic)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6010790/1/An_Unexpected_Occurance (bad grammar, author's note in second chapter)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7186852/1/Misc_Announcements_RabbitBleachFan (author's note/announcement)

7/17/2011 . Edited by Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond, 8/5/2011 #103
Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond

Author: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2768066/Spottedleaf12478

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7184942/1 (SYOC)Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6953687/1/ (SYOC)


Author: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3007372/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7194423/1/Missing_You (Songfic, not the property of uploading author. Read end authors note for more info)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7193359/1/White_Horse (Songfic, improper formatting)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7191450/1/Sweet_Misery (Songfic)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7134127/1/Jar_of_Hearts (Songfic)

7/19/2011 . Edited 8/6/2011 #104

This guy needs some, or rather, alot of help. I've tried giving him constructive reviews but he doesn't seem to listen to them. Can you help him?


Just read and review his newest chapter.

7/19/2011 . Edited 7/20/2011 #105

A troll fic. (I really hope.)


Picture the same word over six thousand times...

7/20/2011 #106

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6958069/1/Napoleon_the_Dog (chat/script, not sure if original fiction if anyone knows the fandom)

7/20/2011 #107

Yeah... Cats raping each other... Author refuses to take it down...


7/21/2011 #108

Fire at will, people~

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7205185/1/Pokemon_Adventure_Story (This is why I'm continuing to lose faith in humanity.)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7203122/1/Ideas (Non-story) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7203091/1/OCS_NEEDED (SYOC) Deleted.

7/22/2011 . Edited by Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond, 8/13/2011 #109

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5700551/1/ (Bieber fic)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5700768/1/ (Bieber fic)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5740682/1/ (chat/script)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5115015/1/ (chat/script)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5725793/1/ (interactive, author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4756296/1/ (interactive, chapter one is an author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5846376/1/ (SYOC, both chapters are author's notes)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4887916/1/ (SYOC, all chapters are author's notes)

7/23/2011 #110

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7212364/1/Cant_Find_story_Help_please# (help ad) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196400/1/Im_Back_Better_Than_Ever# (author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7179869/1/So_Close# (song lyrics) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7187143/1/Your_Love_is_My_Drug (song lyrics) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7189149/1/camilles_song (all song lyrics, no actual story content) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7195934/1/How_Do_I_Live (song lyrics)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7200833/1/I_Wouldnt_Change_A_Thing# (song lyrics) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7210069/1/Never_Too_Late# (second person/you based story) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7210367/1/iSave_the_Day_A_Future_iCarly_Crossover# (author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7111335/1/Why_Lemonade_Mouth_is_better_then_hsm# (rant, author's note, list)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7135686/1/Please_Help_Find_This_Story (help ad/author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7130312/1/I_Wanna_Be# (song lyrics)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7140163/1/WERE_ALL_IN_THIS_TOGETHER_Or_are_we# (troll fic, technically one/two liner)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7151899/1/Who_Youd_Be_Today# (song lyrics)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7153694/1/Song_RehearsalsFUNNY (chat/script format, real people)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7165215/1/What_is_this_Story# (help ad/author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7173629/1/Remind_Me (song lyrics)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7196230/1/Please_Help_me_find# (help ad/author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7197352/1/Please_Help# (help ad/author's note)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7213485/1/Merry_Fn_Christmas# (song lyrics)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7213402/1/PLEASE_HELP_ME# (help ad/author's note) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7213440/1/Help_Needed# (help ad/author's note) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7212064/1/Plot_Making (help ad/author's note) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7208807/1/Create_A_Plot# (help ad/author's note) Deleted.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7210433/1/FireheartxSandstorm_What_Ive_Been_Looking_For# (song lyrics)

Deleted stories are not archived.

7/24/2011 . Edited by Sextuple Covalent Mo2 Bond, 8/5/2011 #111
Madame Apathy


This author PMed me a few days back requesting honest concrit. She responds well to criticism and shows promise as a writer. If anyone feels a bit exasperated by people ignoring them or being unkind in retaliation for honesty, then here's someone who actually wants to improve. :)

7/25/2011 #112
Sincerely C

I was hoping to get some concrit on one of my newer Naruto stories. I'm always worried about detail and as I put plenty into this, I'm worried that I've overdone it.


Thank you in advance. ^_^

7/25/2011 #113









http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1764992/1/bChoose_b_Your_Own_Adventure - also in second-person ("you-based").

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3131912/1/Another_Highschool_Drama_Sigh - also needs to work on a more original plot line.

Fire at will.

7/26/2011 #114
Supercool Superjailed Pichu


I've been keeping an eye on this Pokemon story lately, but haven't had the opportunity to review, and I think it is in need of concrit from you guys. The main OC appears to be a straight-up God Mode Sue and self-insert, and controlls aspects of the story itself. He has also been repeatedly described as powerful. The story is set in a made-up Pokemon region, and a lot of Pokemon are made-up. There are also made-up moves used. The story expands greatly on properties of aura, many of these properties are not canon to Pokemon, and come off as Sueish. The story also does not bother to explain many of the concepts properly, causing me to be lost on how certain things work, thus making them seem like an ass pull. Futhermore, the main OC's past and purpose is not well-explained, since he suffers from amnesia, which the author seems to take as an excuse to have him acquainted with lots of Legendary Pokemon and unusual people. A lot of people seem to already be acquainted with the mian OC with little explaination to how or why, they just pop up from thin air. In addition, the author could brush up on his grammar. Full song lyrics can also be found in the story's text. Hope you guys on the forum can give the story some concrit, since a lot of its reviews seem to be spam from anons.

7/26/2011 . Edited 7/26/2011 #115



Noooo, gooood, whyyyyy? I was seriously hoping nothing like this would come to the Amnesia fandom.

EDIT: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6944253/1/AMNIZEA_a_fanfactin

Trollfic. Enough said. .___.

7/27/2011 . Edited 7/27/2011 #116
Ten ways to spoil dinner


To put it simply: Trolololololololol :D

7/27/2011 #117
Supercool Superjailed Pichu

Miss Kiko

All of this author's OCs are complete and utter Sues, in fact, several of them have the same traits, all cut and paste. All of her fics also have non-story chapters consisting of OC submit forms, character lists, OC profiles, etc. Three of her stories are also duplicates of the same thing. Several people have given her advice on reducing the Sueishness of her OCs through PMs and reviews, but she refuses to take them. Perhaps some of you can talk some sense into her.

7/28/2011 . Edited 7/28/2011 #118


- Can someone help tell this author that chat format isn't allowed? And report it if you want~

7/28/2011 #119
Serenity in Virginia


Her characters are Sues and I pray to god she does parody.

7/30/2011 #120
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