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LiLiKun18

Got something you need to say about the plot? Got something you need to say in general? This is where it goes.

2/1/2011 #1
PlumKat

Hm... I wonder, is there anyway that Mari will have to stick around the military and people, but not actually join the military?

2/4/2011 #2
LiLiKun18

Yeah I like that idea. She could stick around with Casimir if that works for you, but she wouldn't have to join the military.

2/5/2011 #3
PlumKat

Yeah. Well she IS a criminal so I wonder if that could somehow affect it.

2/5/2011 #4
LiLiKun18

House arrest? In jail? IDK she doesn't have to be in any real cahoots with them. Maybe she's like scar, who people sort of work with even though he's a bad guy.

2/5/2011 #5
PlumKat

Eh, no jail.... Is there a way she could HAVE to be around?

2/5/2011 #6
LiLiKun18

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2/5/2011 #7
LiLiKun18

Hmm...IDK you could start a friendship thing with Casimir, like Paninya or something. It wouldn't be too hard to orchestrate.

2/5/2011 #8
PlumKat

I already know Allie, xD...

I wish she could get in trouble with the military somehow, but not go to jail... Like she has to be watched or something.

2/5/2011 #9
LiLiKun18

Since she is a chimera, I can see that happening. Like the military doesn't want people "aware" of her condition, but at the same time needs to have her under watch.

2/5/2011 #10
PlumKat

Sounds good to me! Now poor Casimir has to figure out a way to get the bracelet back, :P

2/5/2011 . Edited 2/5/2011 #11
LiLiKun18

We totally need a bad guy! XD

2/9/2011 #12
PlumKat

Dude.... We do!!!!! Hrmmmmm........ And we need a plot. xD

2/9/2011 #13
LiLiKun18

Any ideas?

2/9/2011 #14
PlumKat

Hm... Something that they would never expect, something that seems overwhelming, like it seems all odds are against the good guys, and something that makes it tempting for some of the good guys to go over to the dark side. That's all I got. Fail.

2/9/2011 #15
LiLiKun18

Lets see...

I had a bad guy I used for one of my other stories, I'm not sure how well he'd work in the fma world.

The idea behind him was he was sort of like a robot human. Like a person with a computer brain, except it wasn't actually a computer. (It's kinda hard to explain)

He was like a failure experiment right? But he freaked out because he couldn't feel emotions or react to things like normal humans did. He got really angry at the people who made him, so he decided to destroy them. That eventually evolved into destroying the whole human race so the couldn't make anything like him again. Very sad and angsty story.

He's a killing machine, but he's not actually really vicious or mean or anything, he's just really upset that he can't understand the world. Plus all of his reasoning make people actually hesitate, so there's the difficulty in hurting him.

IDK he's really more sci-fi, What do you think?

2/9/2011 #16
PlumKat

Scary Q~Q...

That's really interesting, but its hard to see a robot in fma... Maybe we could use the same idea but make him something else?

2/10/2011 #17
LiLiKun18
Well he isn't really a robot. Let's see how do I explain this? Have you ever seen the cybermen from Dr. Who? They're like people who have had their brains altered and then put into mechanical bodies. He's sort of like that, but he doesn't have a mechanical body. He's essentially a human who doesn't have any humanity in him, though he's stronger and deadlier than a human.
2/10/2011 #18
PlumKat

Ohhhh. That makes sense. That's totally scary, but makes for a great plot!!!

2/10/2011 #19
LiLiKun18
So does that mean you want me to go ahead and use him?
2/10/2011 #20
PlumKat

Sure, sounds good. I still have to get Mari with the others though. xD...

2/10/2011 #21
LiLiKun18
:) Okie Dokie
2/10/2011 #22
PlumKat

Which I do have a plan for, by the way. It just involves Andrew overhearing Maura and Alexander.

2/10/2011 #23
LiLiKun18
Well if you want to get Mari out of the house, you could have her give Cas the slip. I could have Maura find a military file on Mari.
2/10/2011 #24
PlumKat

It'd probably be better to have her find a file on the Alchemist that made her into chimera and Mari be mentioned in that file. The guy's name was Grant Caleb.

2/10/2011 #25
LiLiKun18

Got it, sounds good to me.

2/10/2011 #26
PlumKat

For the sake of keeping her in the area, can Mari get hurt in this last part of the fight?

I mean, nothing huge, just enough for her to need to stay to rest/heal.

2/28/2011 . Edited 2/28/2011 #27
PlumKat

And if threes not too much can I make an oc that joins forces with Ghost?

3/1/2011 #28
LiLiKun18
Sure, that sounds good.
3/2/2011 #29
PlumKat

Alright! I'm going to have to think this one over for a little bit... My creativity is rather low at the moment.

3/2/2011 #30
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