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Cirex Review

Okay, so quotes then, I can do that.

"I am neither the strongest or the weakest of the Clan. I'm not a knight, or a king, or divine, or anything. I'm just human. I'm only a soldier. And that's fine. The things I've done on this earth probably won't be remembered fifty, or even ten years from now. But I've done my duty with honor, and courage. My conscience is clean, and I'm honestly proud of what I've done, which is more than most people can claim. I've nothing more to prove. So go ahead. Fight for your self rightous ways, fight for the highest bidder. Or fight just to fight. But know that at least one person sees you all for what you really are; imperfect, fallible, unique."- Aleksi

"I am a magus of the Edelfelt family, and from now on, you will speak to me with more respect."- Aliisa

4/1/2012 #211


"My name is Haru Brunestud Emiya, and in the words of my mother, the pleasure is all yours."

4/1/2012 . Edited 4/1/2012 #212

Kiri: Forward! Forward! Forward! Always Keep Moving Forward!

4/1/2012 #213

My quote could be something like this?

"Hi there! This is Touma! Touma is really happy to meet you!"

"That's because Touma is a disgusting filthy piece of trash."

"I will get my friends out alive. What happens to this body is inconsequential."

-Touma Emiya, yes, those were all said by the same person.

4/1/2012 #214

Yes! Quotes, go forth and multiply!


"I... want to fly." —Shinta while staring upwards at Nanoha as she gleefully soared through the sky, Devil Wings AC, "Unwritten (as of yet)"


"...We've been had." —Shinta to Yuuno, upon realizing that, while the two boys were debating which of THEM was going to go, Hayate had encouraged Fate to go for it and was,blushing and clad in an elegant black kimono, escorting a green kimono-clad Nanoha out of the mansion.... and that the boys themselves were now, and would remain for the rest of the evening, at the mercy of the young queen of cos-play, Devil Wings AC, "Unwritten (as of yet)"


"Who the hell d'ya think we are, anyway? The Jarls of Frostmarch and Glenheim? The Imperial Zardon? Kosh?!" *incredulous expression fades to a polite smile*

"That's the White Devil." *points at Nanoha (fully decked out Barrier Jacket and Raging Heart Excellion*

"I'm her Falcon." *turns to point a thumb at himself (full jacket armor, wings deployed but folded in*

"So... Why aren't you running yet?" *smile begins radiating ABSOLUTE MAYHEM*

Shinta Emiya, shortly prior to All Hell Breaking Loose, Devil Wings StrikerS, "Unwritten (as of yet)"

4/1/2012 . Edited 4/1/2012 #215
Servius Regis

Here's who's left now.

4/2/2012 #216

More Rocks, More Rocks! - Kumako

BK Kiri: Now what can I cook today?

4/2/2012 #217

Aurora: He~ey

Artemis: Faaaaaaake!!!!!!!

4/2/2012 #218

Takami- You may do anything you want, but so help me if you try to troll around with my grandchildren, Zelretch, YOU WILL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH!

4/2/2012 #219

@kinglugia: Um...probably not. ^^;

4/2/2012 #220

"In my house there were more rules to regulate which thinks I could, and couldn't mess with, than rules for all of my other siblings and what they could, or couldn't do. That was because I tended to cause more destruction than the others when I worked my personal brand of magic. If you can't see why are you doomed already, just think: We're not in my house, are we?" - Keiko Emiya.

"Three people in the world could claim to use unlimited weapons at once: My Uncle, my father, and I. The former two are already part of the human history as legends themselves, while I'm still writing my own. The question is: Would you guys lend me your blood as ink?" - Keiko Emiya, offering the option to surrender for a group of mercenaries.

"Want me to teach you how to use that?" - Fuuko Emiya, to Louise de la Valiere, about a riding crop.

"Kiritsugu's 'cooking' isn't suitable for a weapon. Specially because there isn't anyone we hate that much." - From the Clan's First Rulebook.

"There are three reasons I don't fight often: One: I tent to make more friends than enemies. Two: I don't like fighting. Three: My fighting style tend to traumatize and hurt more than kill people." - Fuuko Emiya

"I usually don't like to resource to killing, because in my uncle words 'The dead pays no one respect', but you have hurt my family, and while I'll NOT kill you, you will kill yourself later for sure, and I'll not pity you." - Aoshi Emiya, to the leader of a gang who threatened his girlfriend.

"So, are you hooking up with the military freak boy, anyway?" - Fuuko, about Keiko's relationship with Sousuke.

"Dating you is like a package deal for a threesome!" - Riko, about Keiko and Karin.

"Why the heck do you even HAVE something like THIS!?" - Kurz Weber, when lend a Zeliska by Keiko (Fate Lost in the World - Chapter 2)

"Lights of my pledge, make me the means to protect my Ashikabi." - Karin's norito.

"Auntie, it's me, Aurora! Did you have to use real ammunition?" - Aurora (duh!) After 'Hee~eying' Keiko.

4/2/2012 . Edited 4/2/2012 #221

@Mu-Sensei's fourth quote

Apparently, there is:

Check the Abbey Massacre for details.


May I design more KTCs for the EC?

4/2/2012 #222

"...cosplay is the bane of the existence of anyone who knows my mother and Matsu-kaa and Uzume-kaa. Or Hayate-san. Needless to say, I'm kind of glad I don't have the same interest in it." - Ulf on Cosplay

4/2/2012 #223

@Kinglugia: Note where is the quote from...

"If Takeshi hears you say that word, he will come back. Do you want that?" - Aoshi, to his girlfriend, Magic being the word in question mind you.

4/2/2012 #224
Servius Regis


Do the ones we already have first.


Might want to change Aurora's to something less...plagiarized.

4/2/2012 . Edited 4/2/2012 #225

"Haru ain't into loli!" Haru's answer to Yukari's and little Val's advances.

"Oh yes, keep talking, just shows me I haven't punched you hard enough yet." Haru fighting your stereotypical opponent who monolouges.

"Just know one thing, if you ever do anything to hurt her, you won't have to worry about a clan retribution, I'll kill you myself." Haru in regards to dating Reiko.

"Long story, might tell you some day." Haru/DA! Haru's response to questions he doesn't feel like asking.

"How can something hurt so good?" Haru responding to tasting Chiyo's cooking.

4/2/2012 . Edited 4/2/2012 #226
Servius Regis

Here's who's left

4/2/2012 #227


Hey, thanks for changing it. I felt that one suited him way better than the previous one.

4/2/2012 #228
Servius Regis


Going with the one I think best sums up each kid. If you have a better idea for any of the others, let me know and I'll consider.

4/2/2012 #229

I found this for Kyon:

"To someone who doesn't know my family, maybe. Among my brothers and sisters, though, being able to make swords appear out of thin air is more common than Common Sense." - Kyon, when confronted by Haruhi about having a 'lame'power.

4/2/2012 #230

Okay then

Aurora: Why do I have to wear panties again? They tangle up my tail.

Kung Pow Chicken: Bwak Bwak BWAKAAAAAA (Translation: Bring it On!)

Edit @Kinglugia

Before you add any more KTCs, it might be better to look up the ones I already created in Clan Wars

4/2/2012 . Edited 4/2/2012 #231
Servius Regis

It appears that we now have a quotes page.

Feel free to add anything you wish. Trooper has provided a convenient template. I'll keep working on those character quotes.

4/2/2012 #232

@SR: 'kay, added three...might add or take away some in the next couple of days, but I'll be sure to limit it until I have more canon materials to work with.

@Trooper1023: Props for the template. ^^

4/2/2012 #233

*grins* Ya'll 'r welcome!

4/3/2012 #234
Servius Regis

So these are the quotes I have added recently:

Sakuya -"I am the daughter of Shirou and Sakura Emiya, magus of the clock tower, dedicated researcher, aspiring novelist, recognized psychologist, and the only thing that keeps the walking iota of madness known as Erika Sahashi from turning this place into a scene from Saw."

"Don't forget closet lesbian."

"And my alter ego is an annoying bitch sometimes."

"You're just upset because I can admit what you can't."

(She really isnt, Yin just won't shut up about the implications)

Yasu -"Yea, violence is my last resort...and my first resort. Heck, I think it's every resort in between too. No, scratch that. Drinking contests are on there somewhere..."

Saito -"Ok look. My girlfriend is an assassin feared across the world. My older sister once broke the sound barrier on a motorcycle. My younger sister's favorite pastimes are painting and dissection. My mother kicked the President of Iran in the balls on global television. Now can we just take the goddamned deal already?"

Erika -"Science is the art of knowing, not conforming to a whole bunch of rules written down in textbooks and formed by senile old men who wouldn't recognize truth if it was surgically grafted to them. If you still think I'm wrong then lets have a little experiment. If you're still standing here in five minutes then you're right. On the other hand, if I can summon a massive shadow carnivore to eat you then I'm right."

Mana -"Kill ten thousand. Save ten thousand. And the world just keeps f*cking spinning."

4/3/2012 . Edited 4/3/2012 #235


Haru- "That's one of the problems with being the center of a harem. Where one part of your world can be just right, another not so much."

DA! Haru- "Take it from a guy who's tried; You can't save everyone. You're not God. You'll only drive yourself insane everytime you fail."

4/3/2012 #236

Kiri's quotes are easy to find. Look at the top of my chapters

4/3/2012 #237

A set of quotes for Chisame entry:

"Maybe she was kidnapped at birth and Father simply finds her during his travels. Some school half-way around the world."

"If it is one of our sisters, she may also demonstrate unusual abilities of some sort. Perhaps she would be a Mahou Shoujo?"

"With a Pretty dress! She'll be like Superman. Mild-mannered glasses-wearing student by day. Ditch the glasses and she's suddenly a Magical Girl by night! With an idol webpage! And stalkers!"

- Keiko, Koyuki and Sakuya, discussing the possible existence of a lost sister... Fate/School Days 5

PS: I hate how this site's copy/paste ruins format of quotes...

4/4/2012 . Edited 4/4/2012 #238
Servius Regis


I'd prefer to have it be something that she says about herself or her family rather than the other way around.

4/4/2012 #239

"My classmates include a ghost, upwards to five mages, two half demons, one full demon, a vampire, a mad scientist, a martial artist that can destroy buildings with a single punch, a ninja, two extremely rich girls, a gynoid, a lesbian onmiyouji heiress and her princess of an ancient magic kingdom of a best friend but I'm STILL the most unique person in class! WTF!?!?" -What Chisame's reaction should have been when the truth about her family finally hit.

"To be fair, you were the most unique girl in class even before we found out that you were the long-lost, half-alien daughter of one of the world's most recognized mages, who also has a vampire and two heroic spirits in his harem. It's just that back then, you were unique for being the most normal. Which extreme is better depends on you though" -Fate's obligatory snark reply.

4/4/2012 . Edited 4/4/2012 #240
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